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Posted: 18 years ago
aww. she got no cake cuz she blocked him.. remind me not to block anyone!!lolzz


good part.. enjoyed reading.. HE SHE LOVE EACHOTHERRRR no?!!h 😃

continue sioonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part 👏 👏 👏
cont soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwww awesome part yaar!!
xx Saz xx
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanx for ur comments 😳 im glad u guyz liked the part..the next part shall be up real soon since i have a 4 day weekend! oh and btw Happy Turkey Day! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: erier101

Thanx for ur comments 😳 im glad u guyz liked the part..the next part shall be up real soon since i have a 4 day weekend! oh and btw Happy Turkey Day! 😛

You to Happy Thanksgiving

Oh ya about your last part....to tell you the truthi liked your first option better cause it would make it longer and more intresting its good now but like the other one more anyways enough about what i think and continue soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
that was a great part! Really cute, I loved those songs! My love is one of my favs, lol. Cont. soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

You to Happy Thanksgiving

Oh ya about your last part....to tell you the truthi liked your first option better cause it would make it longer and more intresting its good now but like the other one more anyways enough about what i think and continue soon

to tell u the truth..before i even set up the options thing..i was gonna use the first part...it was also my fav and i gave a lot of thought to it....but the thing is i had to hink about where the story will leadand stuff and i realized that in this fan-fic i made a-k only 18 years old, they cant get married for a while...and i had another concept planned..so the second option it is😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 23

They both ended the song together and their eyes met. Both sat still, staring into each other's eyes, forgetting about all the people around them. At that moment, all they saw was each other. Lost in each other's eyes, both of them slowly moved their faces forward without realizing what they were doing. Their first ever kiss ended before it even started as the guests interrupted with loud applause. Both shook their heads and looked away, half-embarrassed, half-happy, and half-angry. No one had noticed how close A-K had gotten for no one was paying attention. Everyone came up to them and started praising them. People suggested that they should become singers because when they both sang together they sounded awesome. Their friends whispered to each other about how cute they both looked together. Kripa's friends told her that they make a great couple, which made her blush and she told them that they were not dating or anything and that they were just close friends. Little did she know…

After a few hours, the party finally had ended and the guests had left. The only people remaining in the Khanna Mansion were Karthik, Angad, Aaliya, Kripa, Ananya, and Aryan. All were sprawled across the floor, watching a football game. The only people totally into the game were Angad and Kripa. The rest were not interested in football and were getting bored. The parents were attending a late night party so they all decided to hang around at the Khannas' place. After watching the game for about half an hour, Aaliya stood up and closed the TV. Both Angad and Kripa screamed simultaneously, "Aaliya!!!" Everyone looked at them while they looked at each other and their cheeks slightly went red.

Aaliya, "What?? You guys are like the only ones watching the game!"

Kripa- "but it was getting soo interesting, the bears were winning!!"

Aaliya- "duhh of course they were winning, their score was like 15-0 it was pretty obvious they were gonna win, and I don't even understand the stupid game so lets do something…I am really bored!!"

Angad, "What do you wanna do?"

Aaliya- "I dunno..something…..umm….idea!..lets play antakshari!"

Angad- "No!! I am sick of singing!"

Ananya- "Come on Angad, be a sport…count me in!"

Aryan- "me too!"

Karthik- "me three!"

Everyone turned to Kripa, who put her hands up and looked at them "Do I really have another option?"

They shook their heads, "then count me in too I guess"

Aaliya- "great!! Ok, who wants to start??"

Angad- "Wait, how do u play, u have like a million versions of it!"

Aaliya- "uhh someone sings a song and then another person has to sing with the letter they leave off at…like…kuch kuch hota hai…that's the last line…so the next person will have to sing a song with I or hai..okay??"

Everyone nodded. Karthik said, "I will begin"

Everyone looked at him, half-surprised and expectantly, he had not sung before and he was not really the singing and "fun" type, or that is what they thought.

He began to sing while looking at Angad and Kripa who did not notice:

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hai

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hai

Magar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hai

Magar Chupke Chupke

Sabko Horahi Hai

Han, Sabko Horahi Hai

Khabar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hai

Magar Chupke Chupke

Angad and Kripa's heads slowly moved up and they both looked at Karthik who moved his gaze. They both were sitting next to each other. They turned to look at each other and when noticed the other was also looking both turned around. Karthik continued,

Sanson mein bari bekarari

Ankhon mein kahi rath jagay

Kabhi kahin lagjaye dil to

Kahin Phir Dil Na Lagay

Apna Dil Mein Zara Thamloon

Jadoo Ka Main Isay Naam Doon

Jadoo Karraha Hai

Jadoo Karraha Hai

Asar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hai

Magar Chupke Chupke

A-K stole glances at each other.

Aisay Bholay Bunkar Hai Baithay

Jaise Koi Baat Nahin

Sabkuch Nazar Aaraha Hai

Din Hai Yeh Raat Nahin

Kya Hai Kuch Bhi

Nahin Hai Agar

Hoton Pai Hai Khamoshi Magar

Baatein Karrahi Hai

Baatein Karrahi Hai

Nazar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hai

Magar Chupke Chupke

The others realized that Karthik was pointedly singing the song at someone. They looked at Angad and Kripa. Ananya and Aaliya smiled, they had noticed A-K's behavior at the party along with Karthik. Aryan was oblivious to everything.

Kahin Aag Lagnay Say Pehle

Uthta Hai Aisa Dhuwan

Jaisa Hai Idhar Ka Nazaara

Oh..Waisa Hi Udhar Ka Samha

Dil Mien Kaise Kasak Si Jagi

Dono Janib Barabar Lagi

Dekho To Idhar Sai

Dekho To Idhar Sai

Udhar Chupke Chupke

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hai

Magar Chupke Chupke

Sabko Horahi Hai

Sabko Horahi Hai

Khabar Chupke Chupke

Oooh..Do Dil Mil Rahe Hai

Magar Chupke Chupke

Magar Chupke Chupke

Magar Chupke Chupke

Everyone applauded. Ananya, "Next song…with an E"

Aryan begins singing

Ek main hoon, ek tu hai

Chaahatein hain, aarzoo hai

Aashiqui bhi ab shuru hai

Aaja ve maahi ve soniya

Ek main hoon, ek tu hai

Chaahatein hain, aarzoo hai

Aashiqui bhi ab shuru hai

Aaja ve maahi ve soneya

Jaaniya kya kiya

Dil tujhe de diya

Jaaniya kya kiya

Dil tujhe de diya

Aankhon hi aankhon mein

Baaton hi baaton mein tune churaaya jiya

Aaja ve maahi let's do balle balle - 4

Ek main hoon

Ek tu hai

Chaahatein hain

Aarzoo hai

Aashiqui bhi

Ab shuru hai

Aaja ve maahi ve soneya

You and me we'll get it all right

Just you and me gettin on tonight

Only me only you, yo girl you know I'm in love with you

When I see you pass and I see you there

You know I gotta gotta gotta stop and stare

You know I gotta gotta be everywhere

You know I gotta gotta lotta love to share

You and me yo baby girl it's true

Yeah, I'm in love with you

Aaja ve maahi let's do balle balle - 4

Main tere pyaar mein kho gayi is kadar

Ho gayi ho gayi sab se main bekhabar

Dumroo jo bajta hai aashiq tadapta hai

Chhaa jaata hai ek nasha

Aaja ve maahi let's do balle balle - 4

Ek main hoon

Ek tu hai

Chaahatein hain

Aarzoo hai

Aashiqui bhi

Ab shuru hai

Aaja ve maahi ve soneya

Aaja ve maahi let's do balle balle - 4

Dhadkanein tez hain, ishq bhi hai jawaan

Tujhpe hoon main fida jaane jaan

Sapnon ki raani tu dil ki kahaani tu

Love mein hai aaye maza

Aaja ve maahi let's do balle balle - 4

Ek main hoon

Ek tu hai

Chaahatein hain

Aarzoo hai

Aashiqui bhi

Ab shuru hai

Aaja ve maahi ve soneya

Jaaniya kya kiya

Dil tujhe de diya

Aankhon hi aankhon mein

Baaton hi baaton mein tune churaaya jiya

Aaja ve maahi let's do balle balle – 8

The song ends and then the game goes on until Angad is left. Everyone looks at him, he as the letter "M"

He sings,

Mera dil jis dil pe phida hai - 2ek dilruba hai 2ha dilruba haiek dilruba haimeri ulfat meri wafa hai -2woh dilruba hai - 2 ha dilruba haiwoh dilruba haimera dil jis dil pe phida hai 2ek dilruba hai 2ha dilruba haiek dilruba hai.. ji karta hai teri julfo se khelu ji karta hai tujhe bahon mein le luji karta hai teri julfo se khelu ji karta hai tujhe bahon mein le ji karta hai teri ankhon ko chumuji karta hai tere ishq main jhumu dil karta hai tera sapna sajaludil karta hai tujhe apna banaludil karta hai tujhe dil main chupaludil karta hai tujhe tujhse churalusabse dilkash jiski ada hai -2ek dilruba hai -2ha dilruba haiek dilruba hai mera dil jis dil pe phida hai -2 ek dilruba hai -2 ha dilruba haiek dilruba haihai..... maine sanam tujhe pyaar kiya haisirf tera intezaar kiya haimaine sanam tujhe pyaar kiya haisirf tera intezaar kiya haimujhse nigahein kahin pher na lenamaine to tera aaitbaar kiya hai hai tere khayaalo main khoya rahoonga tere liye har dard sahoongamere liye tujhe bheja hai rab nesaare jamaane se main yeh kahoongaho... jiska jaadoo mujhpe chala hai -2 woh dilruba hai - 2ha dilruba haiwoh dilruba hai mera dil jis dil pe phida hai - 2ek dilruba hai 2ha dilruba haiek dilruba haimeri ulfat meri wafa hai -2woh dilruba hai - 2 ha dilruba haiwoh dilruba hai beautiful beatiful you are so beautifulja..anam Everyone was half-surprised at the song Angad chose. He wasn't really into Indian music so they weren't expecting him to sing in hindi. It was pretty late when the game ended. Kripa, Ananya, and Aryan stood up. Kripa- "Thanx you guys, this was fun, but we better get moving, you must be tires, I know I am"

Aaliya- "Why don't u stay here?? We will have a sleepover!"

Kripa- "Uh, noo…our parents are going to get worried if they don't find us at home when they get back..we will see you tomorrow! I have school, and then the dance to prepare for"

At this, Angad looked up at her,the dance was coming up! He had forgotten about that!

Aaliya- "Omg! I still have to go buy my dress for the dance..bhai!!"

Angad- "Oh no…no freakin way..dont even bother to ask me…I am busy!"

Aaliya- "busy with what??"

Angad- "stuff"

Aaliya- "like??"

Angad- "I have a date"

Aaliya- "Bhai!!! Your date is more important than me! fine, I just wanted to spend some quality time with my favorite brother in the whole world, btu he dosent care about me."

Everyone smiled and hid back their laughs over her emotional dialogues.

Angad- "Aarggh Aali, fine I will come with you, but only for an hour!"

Aaliya- murmured- "we will see about that!"'

Ananya- "di! Have you bought your dress??!"

Kripa- "No, I think I am going to wear that.."

Interrupted by Aaliya, "Come with us!"

Kripa- "uhh..no..really..i cant… I am busy…I am just going to wear an old one"

Aaliya- "Oh come on Kripa di! You have to get a new one!! Who are you going with??"

Kripa was quiet at this. Angad and the rest looked up at her. "So far, I am not going with anyone, I don't even want to go, but since I am student council president, I have to be there!"

Angad secretely smiled at this. Kripa asked, "Who are you going with??""

Aaliya- "I am going with Arjun!"

Kripa- "Oh, isn't he that popular guy, who is in like in every sport??"

Ananya nodded.

Kripa- "cool, well I better get leaving"

The Khannas went with them to the door. Angad and Kripa were the last ones to leave the room. Angad looked at everyone ahead of them, who were talking. He turned to look at Kripa who was fooling around with her cell phone. He pulled her to a wall and put his hands on the wall, blocking her way.

Kripa whispered, "Angad?"

Angad- "Will you, Kripa Sharma, be my date for the winter dance?"

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Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thats the part!! Hope you like it!! Oh and when Aryan sings that song, Aaliya sings along with him.. was in a hurry so i didnt have time to add who was singing what..



Preview- Kripa's answer

-the dance

-hookups and break-ups
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Posted: 18 years ago
wooohoooooo angad asked her 2 the dance!!!!!!! 😃 loved the songs!!! way 2 go angad!!!!! cont soooon 👏

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