| A Fight Against Injustice:An AR FF | Chapter #13 | 9/05/16 | - Page 26

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Sweetheart,

I guess its the first time that you posted and I got the chance to read it so soon. Im soo glad :)

Thank you sooo much for the dedication. I love, love, loveddd the update, sachi mein!

The part was penned down so beautifully and I give you full credit and an applause for writing both the past and present together in one chapter yet maintaining their importance seperately. It is a damn hard thing to do but you've managed to do it so well.

Hmm.. flasback se start karti hoon. I couldn"t stop laughing reading the part where Armaan sent champ in Anjie's tent n he ran out wid her behind him wid a heel. That is so Anjali. Hayyee reminded of my dmg :( She knows her friends too well too jabhi tou usey pata tha yeh fantastic plan sirf Armaan ka ho sakta hai.

Atul bhi lagta hai Armaan k saath rehte rehte patana seekh gaya hai, usey hi sahi per at least he knows wat will pull his bhai to the camp. Seein them search for their respective lady love and bicker was funny. You know at a point i felt sad for Atul. Poor thing has been in love for 3 years per aj tak hasnt got a clear response or indication whether Anjie loves him back or not. Im waiting to see how, when n y she rejected his proposal, dat is if you hav planned to add it to the story.

Coming to my baby, my Armaan. He has seriously fallen in love with his Basket. She had casted a spell on him. But im surprised to see him hesitating in coming in front of her n communicate directly. But i dont blame him. Aisa hota hai wen u value sumone too much their one no is enough to shatter you completely and here he is facing the same situation. Im waiting to read basket's pov too where she mentions him.

Now coming to the present. I have a request. Please kill Abhi. I hate him. How dare he do this to my Basket? Now I understood wat he had meant the last tym by saying he wud hurt Armaan's loved ones. So he already knows about her importance in his life though im not too sure she has recognized him yet. You know i was doin a happy dance as now its clear that Ridz is only Armaan's first love, his basket, his incomplete love which im hoping wont remain incomplete for too long, haina? He surely does affect her more than she lets him know. His few words and all her anxiety and worry flew away just by having him by her side.

I am sooo lookin forward to see their love blooming. I hope dat day comes soon.

I hope i hav covered all the parts of this chap. If i hav missed something, i hope my saying that i loved and enjoyed the chap to the core makes up to it. Thank you for letting us know a bit about Armaan's past.

Love lots sweety..

Originally posted by: chaitrika12

Anjali ,atul,armaan part was hilarious and i think some more past is therre to be mentioned tnx for pm waiting for next part

Originally posted by: kajenlife

superb part

belated happy friendship day seya

coming to upadte

hahaha atul anjali ke tent mei gussna aur anjali armaan atul ko baghana hilarious

aur armaan riddhima ko pehle se hi jaanta hai and he loves her

then why he is going against riddhima samaj nahi arahi hai confusing hai

aur ye modi toh kuch jyada hi kar diya riddhima ke saath

pata nahi ab armaan kya karne wala hai

continue soon

Originally posted by: Jess2014

Hey Seya

Amazing part,

So at the start, Armaan

was lost in his thoughts,

and it is revealed that he loved someone,

and his love is none other than Ridz

Hope that Abhimanyu is unable

to cause Ridz any more harm,

Eager to read more,

Update soon

Take care...😊

P.s: Happy Friendship's Day 🤗( Belated)

Originally posted by: polishedtechie

nice to read after a long time.. continue soon