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Posted: 9 years ago
So finally u have posted the last update of "NB" 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
the whole scenario was so lovely.😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Virika,their daughter Mansi & son Vivaan such an awesome family, will miss this family a lot seriously.👏👏👏👏👏👏
If u wanted then u could update it further.😭😭😭
loved this part a lot "

Jeevika sighed, "He's just as stubborn as his father."

Viren looked up with a quizzical brow, "Stubborn? Me?"

"I've told you at least ten times to get off your laptop and go to sleep, since you were up all last night, but are you listening to me? No." "

&& their family time together,

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"How about a new story," Jeevika suggested, "Daddy's going to make up a new story for you, right Daddy?"

"I am?"

"Yes, Daddy!" his children clamoured.

"Very well then. But only if Mummy comes and sits with us," Viren patted the spot beside Vivaan. "

The way Viren was narrating the story


" "Mummy! Tell Vivaan good dragons exist," Mansi pleaded.

"Vivaan," Jeevika looked at him seriously, "There are both good dragons and bad dragons. Just like there are good people and bad people. It's the dragon's choice whether it wants to follow the right path or the wrong path."

"Okay," her son nodded, then turned to Viren, "Daddy, why aren't you telling the story?""I'm trying," Viren said indignantly, "But you both keep interrupting me!" "
the most amazing part was their little demand to spend the night with their parents.😉😉😉😉😉loved it yar.u can continue it 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

" "I am very happy," Viren nodded, smiling and leaning forward, brushing her hair back with gentle fingers, drawing his mouth to hers...

A knock came at the door.

He sighed, predictably, dropping his head to her shoulder. Jeevika laughed and pushed him off, getting up the answer the door. She looked down to see two little figures looking up guiltily. "Aren't you two supposed to be asleep?"

"We couldn't sleep," Mansi explained, "I think there's a monster under Vivu's bed."

"Oh really?" Jeevika looked at the two of them with fond amusement, "Alright, you can come sleep with Daddy and I. But just for tonight. The monster will be gone by tomorrow."

The two ran into the room, hopping onto the bed and curling next to Viren. "What's all this I hear about monsters?" he yawned.

"It's hiding in our room, Daddy, under my bed," Vivaan said, tucking his cold feet under him, "That's why we're here."

"What, you're not strong enough to defeat it on your own?" Viren teased.

"He hasn't had enough milk yet," Mansi defended her little brother. "



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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank God!
You gonna continue it (with a leap ;) )

This was the sweetest update ever!
Hands down Mansi i my fav character now!
How she control her baby brother! That was too dammn adorable:)

It was totally beautiful how Vivu respect and understand his sister!
These two are love ❤️

Jeevika and Viren and still the same!:) and it just melts my heart!
They have seen so much together came a long way and still they are same! Our adorable Virika

I'm totally waiting for your new story now! Can't wait to see hwt you have in store for us :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
Serahhh yayyy I was so sad about new beginnings ending it was like hemming season 2 I am really sorry for never been able to comment bcz I did not have a if account till last month but believe I have read each and every chapter of this and ofcourse P&P.
Oh yah pls pls do start stronger with time whenever you can but pls do I am sure everyone will love it.
Once again sorry for not commenting but I have always loved your writings and ofcourse your wonderful VM's.
P.S I stalk you on Twitter a lot you are such a wonderful person
Lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all sorry for being MIA for sooo long! life just got in the way!!
Im so upset this beautiful story has come to an end but im defo looking forward to its sequel!!! (please do gift us that soon!)

Vivaan...such a beautiful name! I absolutely loved each and every part of the last few updates! from jeevika getting jealous at the park, to virens surprisingly calm reaction to her water breaking and the nerve wracking birth of their little son!

the epilogue was so cute! the bond between Mansi and Vivu is so adorable and ofc Virika can never truly have a day without interruptions, but this time the interruptions are so cute that they can be forgiven!

ive said this before and will say it again, your writing is so beautiful that i could clearly imagine each and every scene vividly, so thank you for being super awesome there!


Thank you so much for this amazing story, you never let us feel that EHMMBH has ended with this story, you kept it so beautifully alive (and hope you continue to do so!)

Lots and lots of love
sowmya xx
Edited by kryanvirika05 - 9 years ago

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