I absolutely love this chapter. This was very well thought of and very well written. I love that you dragged the scenes prolonging the feelings making us absorp the scenery, the people, their looks, their touch, . . .i feel like I was watching a movie in slow motion. That's good writing chica - well done!
The opening scene was beautiful, a new morning and a dawn of a new Arnav, one who realizes what the emotions he was feeling about her were. I am glad Ashok was there first instead of Kushi because along with the feelings he is developing, the conversation with his Dad also forced him to face the reality of their situation. I like that Ashok's guided him to those realizations but did not provide answers. Though I felt bad for Kushi, I hope she does not jump to conclusions before talking to him.
The scene where he reveals his feelings for her was absolutely perfect, no beating around the bushes expecting her to reveal her feelings first. He exposed himself and his vulnerability by sharing his feelings first which is a very hard thing for a guy to do. I think she appreciates this and that is why they were able to just sit and enjoy the moment.
I am glad you gave us this before the storm hits. Now I am a bit confused as to what happens exactly to split them up. They are so good at communicating that it is hard for me to accept the fact that they will not discuss the job offer. Anyway I will wait for you to continue.
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