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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#161

That was a brilliant insight to Arnav, Ashok and Khushi's mind...

Just admitting to himself that Khushi is an irrevocable part of his life has made uttering the three words quite easy and he is relishing saying so and seeing his feelings reciprocated! Loved it Choti...

Wht touched was Ashok did not want to impose on Arnav even after realizing which way the wind was blowing... Same was with Arnav... He wanted Khushi to acknowledge but not due to any constraints...

👏👏👏

Edited by rulama - 10 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Brilliant Update...Awesome...Very Well Written...👏

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Now that is a very unique proposal. At least now they know how much they mean to each.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#164

My R clock works!

Came to check and found the update!

I love this story, Choti.

This story depicts your growth as a writer.

I love the play of emotions.

And the difference of opinion between the protagonists which makes for a very interesting read.

I'm sure that after this declaration of love, they both will wake up and the real world will creep in.

Waiting now to see how they deal with the fundamental differences in their thinking.

And how they come closer.

I'm sure you'll give us a happy ending, won't you?

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Taken

*edited*

At times you don't need extravagant things to acknowledge feelings and confess love! A simple heartfelt straight from the heart to the other person's is enough and this was just one such time!

Loved it simply! Simplicity at it's best but at the same time considering their situations this was the strongest and best way!

Loved it man!

This was for the father-son convey! And I liked the way you took us through it!

Now for a while let's just relax and enjoy ArShi time! The issue is anyways inevitable!

Aman and Anjali were cute too!

Cheers

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 10 years ago

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Nitya

@nik1310

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Beautiful update. Lovely convo between ashok and arnav...liking Ashok character a lot

gosh he said the magical words ...jeez gonna b heart breaking yaar unko plz plz alag math karo...paon padthi hoon...😉

Let the fire between the two burn away their differences...

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#167

I absolutely love this chapter. This was very well thought of and very well written. I love that you dragged the scenes prolonging the feelings making us absorp the scenery, the people, their looks, their touch, . . .i feel like I was watching a movie in slow motion. That's good writing chica - well done!

The opening scene was beautiful, a new morning and a dawn of a new Arnav, one who realizes what the emotions he was feeling about her were. I am glad Ashok was there first instead of Kushi because along with the feelings he is developing, the conversation with his Dad also forced him to face the reality of their situation. I like that Ashok's guided him to those realizations but did not provide answers. Though I felt bad for Kushi, I hope she does not jump to conclusions before talking to him.

The scene where he reveals his feelings for her was absolutely perfect, no beating around the bushes expecting her to reveal her feelings first. He exposed himself and his vulnerability by sharing his feelings first which is a very hard thing for a guy to do. I think she appreciates this and that is why they were able to just sit and enjoy the moment.

I am glad you gave us this before the storm hits. Now I am a bit confused as to what happens exactly to split them up. They are so good at communicating that it is hard for me to accept the fact that they will not discuss the job offer. Anyway I will wait for you to continue.

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#168

Beautiful update. ...its just them now. .their love n feelings...their little bubble...their world with just 2 of them but once reality sets in and what will happen...his path and hers ..will they merge...

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#169

Loved the chapter. Loved father son confrontation, Ashok 's milder toned advices subtly asking Arnav to consider all the factors which has the power to impact the union. Just beautiful. Loved Aman Anjali first night as man and wife. Finally loved loved loved Arnav marriage proposal and love confession. Loved Khushi's reaction reaction and answer to it. Even though they both realize there is elephant in the room but today they want just bask in their love for each other for just atleast today. Tomorrow will be there to deal with pros and cons of this relationship. Brilliant writing. Thx for the PM.