MY DREAM, MY LIFE. A kriyaansh and swaron ff

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radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: resplendent26
Radhika, it was your birthday on 2nd I didn't knew that... but anyways!!!

Belated Happy Birthday To You My Love!!! ❤️ 🤗

Awww THANK YOU SO MUCH😳

This means alot to me

Thankz ruby di🤗

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Avantika

@avi_arsha_kr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

I have only one word after reading this...
AWESOME 😃

Read both the parts together and I loved it 😃

Loved krisha's bonding 😳 ...the perfect sis jodi

Poor krisha, their excitment went into water 😆 😆

Their mom meeting her school friend...
maybe from here their love story will start 😉

Love u for making Geeta maa their mom ^_^ :-))

Lovely pic...shakti and geeta maa 😳

Amazing story 👏
Continue soon...waiting for it 😊

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@Lawrentian_214

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Well dude that something! I mean you're writing skills are improving beyond bounds and I truly appreciate that. I must say that you kinda developed my true interest for the story which only a true writer can do. By the way your idea of making Geeta Maa as KriSha's mom is brilliant but I am hell angry on you that you didn't tell me before. Anyways, keep writing it and tell me as well when you post the next chapter. I will try my level best to keep replying even after I resume my university. The replies can be late sometimes but I promise that I will reply even its late though. Dude you know my circumstance.
Enough of my bak bak and boring talks with which I AM SURE You would have banged up your head. Keep writing and stay happy!
Eagrly waiting for the next chapter..

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What is in the name, what matters is personality!

@resplendent26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Will post the next chap when it'll reach page 5, hope you guyz will understand, after all I can ask for this much at least!! 😲

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@resplendent26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

We guyz I think I'm more excited to post then you guyz being excited abt reading it!!🤔

I'll post the next chap tomorrow

And it would be a bigger one especially for you radz!!,😃

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radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: resplendent26
We guyz I think I'm more excited to post then you guyz being excited abt reading it!!🤔

I'll post the next chap tomorrow

And it would be a bigger one especially for you radz!!,😃

Yipeee😃

For me😳

I ll b waiting

Really excited

Thank uuu🤗

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What is in the name, what matters is personality!

@resplendent26

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Posted: 10 years ago

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What is in the name, what matters is personality!

@resplendent26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Sorry guys my net is giving me hell lot of pain😡

that's why have send so weird posts before,😕

I'll try my level best to post it in this week only

I'm sorry for making you guyz wait😲

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radhika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

No issue😊

Take ur tym

Bas bada wala update dena😉

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@resplendent26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Hey guyz thank god my net started working and I'm able to post my next update ⭐️ but first of all i want to thank all my readers radz, avi and lawren and even the silent readers tinad3, star94. thank you so much guyz 👏 it really meant a lot to me 😳 but this time plz try not only just liking it but post a comment as well your opinions matter a lot to me!!! 😊

"THE PROPOSAL"

Later that night, I was reading my novel in study room and Sharon was sleeping in our room, when mum came to me. She was wearing a grave expression, and I instantly understood that something was wrong, I kept my book aside and sat there so she can discuss whatever is bothering her.
"Mom, is there something you want to tell me?", I asked.
"Errr!!..., Yeah,Actually it is about Sharon", she replied hesitatingly.
"Mom, is everything alright? Did she had a fight with you, Mom you know how she is, but she is ...,"
"Stop it, once you are started it's so difficult to stop you, Grandma, we didn't had any fight it's something else I want to discuss", she sighed.
"Okay, so I'm all ears to you, say it"
"You remember that aunt we met tonight in the party?", mum asked.
"Yeah, Of course, how can I forget her, your 'so called bestie' because of whom you completely forgot us", I replied with a pout.
"Stop your this act, Miss drama queen, so I was saying that lady, her name is Sunaina Shekhawat. While we were just updating each other about our lives, she told that she had a son, and these days she is finding a girl for him...", she hesitatingly continued when I didn't replied,"So!! When she saw Sharon, she really liked her and..."
"And what mum??"
"And SheSendAProposalForHer", she said all this in one go.
"Mom, what are you saying? I'm not getting a single word please, say it slowly"
"Fine, SHE_SEND_A PROPOSAL_FOR_HER", she replied, stretching each word and immediately closed her eyes.
As soon as these word were making sense to me, a havoc
started in my mind,'my sis is going away from me!!', 'someone is stealing her from me!!', 'now she'll consider someone else more important than me!!', 'she'll not be with me everytime!!', 'she'll share her secrets with someone else!!', No I cannot let this happen, I cannot share my sis with anyone... These were the first thought which came into my mind when my eyes fell on my mum, I saw that she was tensed, but why? Oh! no! she is convinced with this proposal and she wants me to accept this as well, so I calmed myself down, and tried to think rationally, to understand my mum's point of view. And at that time, things started to clear up in front of my eyes, she is right in a sense, as Sharon is at the age which is somehow appropriate for marriage and also she had that felling which shows that she really wanted to enter her new phase of life. Ah! These were the harsh realities but now, when are crystal clear in front of me, I cannot deny them and might be that boy... wait a minute...who's this boy??
"Mom, what is this boy's name? "
"Swayam, Swayam Shekhawat. I also have a pic of him, wait a minute ill show you"
And out of somewhere, mum took out a pic of this Swayam.

Okay, he is fine, but my Shar is one out of a million girl.

"He is done MBA, and right now handling his father's business, he is a very sensible and intelligent boy Kri, trust me. I have read about him many times in the newspaper. ", and here my mum started praising him as if he is 'her son'.

"Okay, fine I don't have a problem, but still I'm not convinced", I came out clear in front of her.
"I'm damn sure, when you'll meet him he'll definitely be able to fully convince you!!... Okay, now come on its too late, go to sleep tomorrow they are coming for lunch and ill need your help"
"Mom, that's not fair you didn't tell me they are coming tomorrow, Shar doesn't know anything about all of this, you cannot do that with her"
"Baby, I'm telling you now and as far as Sharon is corcerned, we are not going to fix their marriage tomorrow, it's just a meeting for both of them so that they can know each other, and don't worry she is my daughter I'll handle her she is not stubborn like you she'll understand, and now you go to sleep it's already too late."
"Fine, I'm going to sleep, and afterwards you don't come to me to help you convince her okay.", I said making faces.
"Fine, I'll not come." And with that she left me to burn with anxiety because of this new development. Ah! Mom, I hate you for that!!