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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: sasir
nice
today i hate payal equal to that shyam
i knw arnav is at fault too
but he is guilty but payal was not

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Raizadas deserve hatred.

I will upload next half as soon as I can, hopefully within few hours :).

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: candyjan
Amazing dear

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kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: renee.bee
Rofl seeing khushi giving out orders.
best was the jalebi part tht if khushi hd tasted those before she wudnt love jalebis.

Bt let khushi nt touch the snake he may get pleasure in tht ewww.
She made him awake to watch on arnav
I wonder why anjali got no punishment except separation frm her shyamji.

Why does Arnav still run after anjali n even payal is a gold digger thn khushi so why did he nt tell her for lying to the family.

I want more punishment to anjali mami payal.
Snake shud b given more menial tasks n put him behind bars.

Pls extend this more even 10 chps nt enough for wht khushi went thru.
I want khushi to throw every insult n hurt bck to Arnav snake n guptas shud suffer too they also humiliated khushi no less thn Arnav n Raizadas.

You are writer so you recreate every situation where khushi insults them bck like they did to her.

Wasnt khushi pregnant when arnav pushed her n payal betrayed khushi coz she ws pregnant n chose akash over khushi so make akash hate payal even for a few dys let her experience how it feels.

Make arnav chose khushi over anjali tht wud hit her the most.

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.

Khushi has changed tremendously. She knows what she wants and also know how to get it. This is important for him to believe her and do everything blindly.

Anjali was the one who told Arnav that Khushi might not be wrong, although after she was thrown away, Anjali got back with her husband. Khushi is just taking her revenge accordingly to their behavior with her.

Regarding Payal, Arnav doesn't find him in the place to do anything with her now, since he knows khushi would manage her and he also knows that Akash will manage his wife.

They will be punished thoroughly, just wait and watch.

I will try to handle the story within ten parts, I don't want the story to lose its essence by dragging it.

I will try my best to create such situations. ;)

I will upload next half as soon as I can, hopefully within few hours :).

Loads of love,

Kashish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: shalini_s
rock and roll Khushi... loved it..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: smat
Fantastic update

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: sanamsky
fantastic 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: amus5
whoa...what is this...is this ipkknd or reversal ipkknd... the clock seems reversed ... interesting...have never read such a track...read in a go... I'm amazed that Payal did all the mudslinging and showed THE ASR the mirror...

pls continue soon 😃

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Exactly, that was the idea before starting it.

She could mislead them because they were such idiots, right?

I will upload next half as soon as I can, hopefully within few hours :).

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Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: -Xpress-
pls continue soon 😃

Hey dear,

I will upload next half as soon as I can, hopefully within few hours :).

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Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: crazyforsarun
Nice update!
Arnav was wrong but what Payal did was worse!

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All contributed in killing Khushi, right?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: swtgirl_tina
Once again, it was a great update Kashish. :D The best part was how Shyam foolishly agreed to whatever Khushi asked him to do, without realising her intentions 😆 Payal is soo annoying😡. Khushi should make sure that she suffers the most and realises her faults. Arnav has already knows the truth and is super guilty. But i still hope Khushi makes him pay for whatever he did to her. Brilliant story. Please continue soon.
P.S. I love the idea of this SS stretching up to 8-10 parts.😃 It would be a great treat for all the readers :P

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me. :)

Yes, a slight attention from her, made his foolishly agree with her. He always believed she loved him and now she gave his thoughts some light.

Oh that Payal is, but she had shown Arnav his reality too. He is a Harvard Graduate, he was supposed to use his brain, wasn't he?

Khushi will punish each and everyone.

Then done, this story is extended to 8-10 parts :D

I will upload next half as soon as I can, hopefully within few hours :).

Loads of love,

Kashish