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Posted: 10 years ago
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Helllo Page!! :))

At this point in the story , im very much looking forward to know more about Akash & Payal's clandestine rendezvouses :D
Wow! What an intriguing start did Arnav & Khushi have? Awesome!! Look how mesmerized both of them were. :D Severe case of Instant Attraction , nai? :D

Silly of me to somehow think that it was Arnav who was sticking the notes for Khushi on her desk but this was the first time they have come across each other!

I love the deep bonding of the siblings. That's a big positive factor for me to read any story. Anjali , Arnav , Akash as well as Payal n Khushi. I can comprehend how soothing n comforting can Payal's presence be , wot with staying under the same roof with a living nightmare! Life's lil mercies.. Sigh!!

I like Lavanya in here. She has been very much been an enigma so far. Interested to read more about her.

Arnav isn't at all the man he is projected to be. This much is super clear to me now. He seems to be a very responsible , sincere person. The description of him near his private pool under the moonlight stole my breath. It was very romantic!

The pace of the story too is very comfortable. Neither too fast nor too slow. Great going da :D

P.S : AD sucks yaa! Extremely sorry about the delay :(
Edited by Ms.KKN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am hankering for my next shot of vodka, dear bartender!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Ms.KKN


Helllo Page!! :))

At this point in the story , im very much looking forward to know more about Akash & Payal's clandestine rendezvouses :D
Wow! What an intriguing start did Arnav & Khushi have? Awesome!! Look how mesmerized both of them were. :D Severe case of Instant Attraction , nai? :D

Silly of me to somehow think that it was Arnav who was sticking the notes for Khushi on her desk but this was the first time they have come across each other!

I love the deep bonding of the siblings. That's a big positive factor for me to read any story. Anjali , Arnav , Akash as well as Payal n Khushi. I can comprehend how soothing n comforting can Payal's presence be , wot with staying under the same roof with a living nightmare! Life's lil mercies.. Sigh!!

I like Lavanya in here. She has been very much been an enigma so far. Interested to read more about her.

Arnav isn't at all the man he is projected to be. This much is super clear to me now. He seems to be a very responsible , sincere person. The description of him near his private pool under the moonlight stole my breath. It was very romantic!

The pace of the story too is very comfortable. Neither too fast nor too slow. Great going da :D

P.S : AD sucks yaa! Extremely sorry about the delay :(


AD sucks, tell me about it. i hvnt been able to sit in peace & write down d next part :(
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: the_breeze

I am hankering for my next shot of vodka, dear bartender!


Friday ;)

i don't want you drunk midweek 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Looks like Akash knows Payal already . He is looking after khushi on Payal's request .
Khushi is red saree , she is preoccupied with the problems of her life unaware of a chocolate brown eyes trailed on her .
Did you have to stop at Arshi's eye clash ? Well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I really like this story of what I've read ... And I would live to read further
Plz pm me when you update again
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update dear...loved it...
sorry for late comment
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MDTharun

Looks like Akash knows Payal already . He is looking after khushi on Payal's request .

Khushi is red saree , she is preoccupied with the problems of her life unaware of a chocolate brown eyes trailed on her .
Did you have to stop at Arshi's eye clash ? Well written


Hahah...at your question, well, it was the right thing to do ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it berries and vodka
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely story!! Lovely narration style; simple yet powerful.
First time I'm reading Bankelal is after Khushi instead of Shyam; although he is not sinister like him.

Loved Arnav & Khushi's first meeting :)

Looking forward to read more :)

Thank you Ms.KKN for the lovely reco :)

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