ArShi SS: Shine My Life ~ Ch 5 in Page 78 [6/Aug]

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Niranjana R

@meniranjana00

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

oh god.. what happened to khushi??

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Naina, when I started with the prologue...I felt that they are already married with Khushi waking up in his arms and...and then...wait a min...<go back and read the last line again>...Arnav jumped out of the window? What the...!

Ohh...so not married as yet...so interesting..lets continue...Mistakes? Oh this is gonna be a sad story???

Chapter 1-

Oh so Arnav is missing her...he left her? He is alone now and is finding solace in it!

The flashback gave me a glimpse of the rude and arrogant ASR that was missing so far...Their first meeting was extraordinary...wait is it just me or you do have a penchant for making the first Arshi meet most interesting as ever?

Your way of writing is amazing Naina...I especially like the metaphoric comparison of the downpour turned to soft drizzle just like his thoughts.' And the effect Khushi had on him...giving him the vigour to seal the deal...amazing connect!

A moment of confession...I was so engrossed in the flashback that I too jumped out of my reverie as Arnav came back to the present...

Nice work Naina...I gotta go now...but I will come back, read the rest of the parts and be sure to drop a word or two to you...take care!

Edit...

PS. If you have some spare time, do check out my Arshi FF: The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND...(Link in Signature) will love to hear what you think about it...No Pressure though 😉

Edited by shalini.ranjan - 10 years ago

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xBabyAngelx

@xBabyAngelx

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

Poor Khushi got kidnap

Arnav broke up with her.How could he say,"I am done with you. I don't want you anymore."

He is really a coward. Hope Khushi is safe.

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Nice update!

Arnav finally realised what khushi is for him..

now he is o a mission to find her..
Is khushi kidnapped?

Eagerly waiting

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#235

awesome. ...loved it...waiting for the next. .

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Meerah14

@Meerah14

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#236

has khushi and her family been kidnapped

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Roop_P

@Roop_P

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Nice update👏

Since you didn't give anything which can help tracking back towards Khushi and her kidnapping so I will wait for it but it might help Arnav in return .He might see the light ,that not everyone around is not going to be in trouble or something like that.Must say his ways of self destructions are not so like his character.