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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update.. it was narrow escape dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sincereme

Superb.. I was all the way holding my breath while reading... A complete thriller... You have written is amazingly..

The President is with Arnav but many soldiers lost their life in this battle.. And still President is not completly saved yet.. I just hope the terrorists don't follow them..

Nikhil is dead too and he should be.. People like him doesn't deserve to live..

Loved the update. .


Really glad you liked it. Thanks for the fab comment😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bhavali4RR

You did it, you did it...the Zakitan Presidents rescue operation was comparable to an action packed Hollywood movie. Each and every activity starting with the team entering the camp, to freeing the President, the smackdown with Nikel, and finally steering clear from the avalanche was perfectly detailed. Hoping that the soldiers who paid the ultimate price in this operation, will forever be remembered. Also, hoping that this is the home stretch and Arnav & his team will reach home safely, even though the journey back home is long.

Would I be wrong in assuming that Akash would come looking for them, after getting no word from Arnav & team? Wasn't that the deal to meet one another at the foot of the mountain? Also, with the General aware of the success of this mission, Akash would be informed and they would go in search of them.


This was one of the most daunting chapters I have had to write. With also point that Khushi isn't present in this chapter, I was worried that it'd be boring. But I'm glad the chapter was taken well by everyone. 😆 Trust me all will be well...in the end.
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Posted: 10 years ago
yay finally the worst has passed.. hipefully in the next chapter khushi and arnav reunite
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Posted: 10 years ago
The storm has passed!!!!!! Hopefully some smooth sailing is on the way
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was like a thriller movie!! Well-written 👏
Many soldiers already lost their lives, hope that there won't be any more loss!
Good one!
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Posted: 10 years ago
too adventurous update
loved it
waiting for them to reach back safely
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome...seems like war is over...hope they reach safely back...
update was thrilling. ..
missing arshi..continue soon ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
I stopped breathing for sometime when Arnav was at gun point

update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
Arnav was closed to death but thanks to Shyam he is alive!!!
At last they saved the President!!!
Thanks for the pm😉

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