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ameena671

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

wow amazing update loved it thank you for pm.

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singh24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

Update

very emotional ..

it was so hard for her to reply him about their lost baby..

this was d half truth ,, d ugly part is left ...

hope Maan try to dig out d whole roots ...

waiting eagerly for next part ..

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chiki143

@chiki143

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Amazing and very emotional dear... Read this update a number of times before writing the comment. I didn't know wat to write. So touching. Never expected geet to forgive maan but she did it for karan. And that was amazing love for karan. Really maan lost as love father and even as human. I liked ur karan very much and sid is apt for karan. Till now I have imagined karan tacker but sid is also very gud. Simple and small words but very profound effect. Loved it very much . Waiting for more... 👏

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priya_ya1408

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Waiting dear
Plz update soon

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preeti.1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

waitnif for long update

kab milega????

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Hello guys, the next chapter is half bit done. Do you want me to update half part tomorrow or whole chapter the start of next week?

Here is the sneak-peak. All in past.

He took the pill and gulped down the water in a go. His feet still touching the floor, he laid on the bed, his tears streaming down. As he started to doze off, he gasped, 'Oh God. What the rubbish did I say?" he was berserk but he was too tizzy to wake up, he succumbed to the effect of pills.

*~**~**~**~*

She looked at her mobile and got furious, he didn't call, it was really over. She threw it away in the water and roared with intensity. "AHHH WHYYY... WHYYY MAAN?"

As she calmed a little, she walked near the beach, something pulled her.

"Why am I alive?" she wondered, not in her sense anymore.

So, what do you think guys? Leave in comments and press like button.

Loads of love<333

Kashish