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headtotoe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#851

Wow !!! I mean I am speechless !!!

Damn it how did you do it ?? Being te ardent fan I am of Arshi as a couple, I dont know how you managed to shift my preferences?? A update ago I was loving Arnav with someother women and now I so want NK back in Khush's life... You've changed my perception... Kudos to you...

Everything that you write is so surreal and yet all true.. When you loose something that you hold precious you just cant snap out of the memories attached to it. Every waking and sleeping moment you connect the past moment shared with new ones that you are dreading to go along alone... I really feel for this Khushi of yours.. She has this unending fear if loosing people in life whom she loves and that can be devastating as this fear never leaves you till the time you have treasured people around you. The what ifs and if only haunt you forever..

Now that we have an idea that NK knew the thingy that Khushi had with Arnav(I hope I am guessing right here) there's more to the story here.. What exactly happened between Arhi to have such a fate ?? I will be very patient to hear it all fro you Mira...

Loved this thoughtful Arnav. Though he is unable to hold his horses over Khushi and is over excited with her visit, he is acting with brains,thinking of her family !! At times he comes across as an eager teenager !!!

I couldn't comment on your last chapter too so I am writing here for both Cocooned and Betwixt. Love your creation...

Edited by headtotoe - 10 years ago

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Poju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#852

Beautiful.. Can't wait for Arnav n Khushi to meet..

Muahhh..

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#853

very well written update...👏

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#854

Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks for the mail

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#855

unres'd on page 121

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archmink

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Posted: 10 years ago

#856

she should give herself a chance and let it all work out itself... she is admant on not giving her self a chance... will nk be happy to see her like that... she knows he would want her to be happy,...
'not want to wait another ten years' ??? he was the one that left who had a different dreams so ...

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#857

MB, now this Nandu buaji is she NK's bua or Khushi's bua??

I remember reading Khushi lost her parents at an young age, so was wondering who is this Nandini and is she related to Khushi or NK???

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jisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#858

loved it...!!!
i am getting hooked with this one..!!
w8ng for next..!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#859

Was this a Valentine's special? Because it sure felt like one. 😆

"There is no way I am waiting another ten years."

Really now, MB?
This. Things like THIS are bad for my heart. Because this is the Arnav Singh Raizada we've all come to love. Determined, confident, unafraid. He's reaching out to her in his own way.

I like how you strike a balance between what Khushi feels for NK and what Khushi feels for Arnav. The fact that NK's memories and Arnav's thoughts aren't supposed to compete for a place in her heart, really comes through. Because what Khushi feels for NK will never change, just as what she felt for Arnav never did, I think.

The emotions you potray are so descriptive that I feel a part of Khushi's mind. It's that one moment when her heart soars in the knowledge of Arnav really knowing her or the disappointment of Arnav not showing up (No, really I was sad. I was expecting him :( ) or even when she lets go of everything and lets herself be taken care of. It's that moment when we're so vulnerable yet so free. I feel that.

It hurts my tiny little heart whenever I think about what NK meant to Meera. A fathers hugs are so special, so rare and it breaks me to know that the little girl is missing out on her favourite hugs. (But not for too long, okay? Do something about it, MB :D )

Take care and don't let asli duniya get to you, Isha.

P.S. Can't wait for MVS to meet Khushi Gupta! 😆

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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: canapoem
MB, now this Nandu buaji is she NK's bua or Khushi's bua??
I remember reading Khushi lost her parents at an young age, so was wondering who is this Nandini and is she related to Khushi or NK???

She raises Khushi from the age of 12. :) Buaji by definition is father's sister [I presume.] So, she is related to Khushi not to NK .

Edited by Mirabell - 10 years ago