T1 | ArHi FF: Second Chances. Link to Thread Two, Page 147 - Page 71

Originally posted by: kushikumari

Mira,

Goodness dear, you write so, so well, that i am left speechless. There is not one single line i can pick over the other, or one single emotion over the other, to applaud. Each and every single one of them is simply fantastic. The minute details in the feelings, the emotions, the reactions, everything! Superbly done.

Rare to find stories (esp an ipk one) where kushi was happily married and in love with her husband. You have done this beautifully, i like that there is no guilt in her for her feelings towards NK. I like that she didn't let her feelings for Arnav stop her from having feelings for NK, or cherish them. I love though, how although initially she would end up in tears thinking about her times with NK, she is now able to hold the smile. Beautifully done. The firsts that are forced upon, when a dear one passes away...

Meera & Kushi, Meera and NK. very, very touching, and bang on. i like how meera was able to convey her feelings and thoughts and not swallow them.

MIL - always a sharp eye that sees too much. again, bang on!😉

Loved how subtly kushi conveyed to Lav not to make a mountain out of a molehill and to talk it out. after all, in the larger scheme of things, a problem is only as big as we want it to be, and nothing can be as big as losing a dear one... where one never gets an opportunity to resolve anything, there is no second chance, where there is no going back, where there is no 'if only', or 'what can be', where there are no more dreams to weave. there is a finality there, an acceptance which comes with no choice. and is it really worth fighting over wanting another child, when life for the moment can be treasured for what has been given and what it is?

kk

Originally posted by: Dandelion.

Hey mirabell!

Here is a small gift from me! :D

I know I suck at this but still... :D