T1 | ArHi FF: Second Chances. Link to Thread Two, Page 147 - Page 29

I think a career begins when you have the ability to make others read what you write, from start to finish without a break and that too many times over. And you Mirabell are doing it with ease. 👏

The way you conveyed Khushi's and Manorama's past clearly shows that we all remember moments more than the days. It was so realistic that I couldn't help myself going through the motions of thoughts imagining myself in Khushi's shoes.

And the texting conversation!!! It was a battle of idions. For all the ill effects of texting, you still figured out a way to say more with less. It was a pefect expression of feeling in a language.

Eagerly waiting for more text buzzes from Delhi 😃

I love this story and you write so well.

So poignant and so emotional...I am so in tune with this story.

Heartbreaking but cute as well...nice update

Hey Mira !!! Wish you a very happy new year !!!

That was an awesome part... Loved it...

This just amazing xant wait to read more of it

Lovely update. I like how the story is slowly moving forward. Manorama and Khushi's strong bonding is very well portrayed.

No words to write how I felt after reading this chapter...I was coming back and forth for commenting on this chapter and I couldn't formulate words to write what I felt...simply brilliant in the way you bring out khushi's thoughts about the time spent with NK...there is some sadness that she is left alone in the journey they promised to live together for 7 lives...the small things she remembers about she and NK together is very touching...the way you showed the rapport khushi and her mother in-law share is superb...they discuss her mother in-laws marriage...they watch the video together...they share the grief together...but there was her life with Arnav long back...we do not even know what happened between these two back then...they make a small promise to meet again in Delhi...can't wait to meet Mohan and his ex-wife...awesome chapter...thanks for the PM

Happy new year to you. I just came across this story as a recommendation and I am so glad that I got the chance to read it. The way you have written it is absolutely stunning. 🤗 The honesty in your writing, the intricacy of the characters -- the hesitation yet fascination of Arnav and khushi meeting each other -- comes across beautifully. Brilliant writing and I can't wait to read more. You got me addicted to this story. 😉I will send you a pm request with my email, please accept it. Thank you. 😃