Arshi FF:AFTER YOU:Chap 7 pg 42(23th March)

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@mu12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#301

i am glad to come across with story
one more my story in my personal story collection
loved it
i am waiting to unfold , if u don't mind can i get the pm
i may not be here for 1 month due to exams but surely read it after exams
nice story
great style of writing

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@candyjan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#302

Very well written dear

Plz continue soon...

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Originally posted by: mu12
i am glad to come across with story
one more my story in my personal story collection
loved it
i am waiting to unfold , if u don't mind can i get the pm
i may not be here for 1 month due to exams but surely read it after exams
nice story
great style of writing

ThanX yaar for such sweet kind words.

Sending you a buddy request add me.

This story goes only to only those on my buddy list.

All the best for your exams.😊

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: candyjan
Very well written dear
Plz continue soon...

Thank You. Good to know you enjoyed it.

This one is very close to me. Esp. now, and I take my time writing it. I brood a lot when I write this one.

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simran

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Posted: 10 years ago

#305

Very well written , read it on a go . I loved the way it is unfolding all along I thought it was Khushi doll but when he called her name lavanya I was shocked bt in a good way . So with whom arnav is engaged is Khushi bt m worried here will he love her ?
It does seems like Khushi is really into arnav she will be broken when she will come around truth .
Lavanaya have her own issues ,I Hope she ain't really sick .
Would love to read more sending u a request do pm me too .

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#306

First of all I am not getting any PM s after chapter 5 and I am in ur buddy list...

Anyway,This chapter is emotional and I reallycan see the strength of love in between La and Arnav is way too strong and once you love someone with this much intensity , it is hard to love some one else with the same.You do create soft corner and some sense of ownership and do learn to move on but LOVE ...is difficult emotional feeling which is hard to create with the same intensity...MY opinion.

I think this is the reason that she left him because of her sickness.Now how Khushi will sooth him after his fall from this peak...and how will they come closer ...will wait for that.

Well Written Mini.😊

Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#307

Originally posted by: Laters_Baby
Very well written , read it on a go . I loved the way it is unfolding all along I thought it was Khushi doll but when he called her name lavanya I was shocked bt in a good way . So with whom arnav is engaged is Khushi bt m worried here will he love her ?
It does seems like Khushi is really into arnav she will be broken when she will come around truth .
Lavanaya have her own issues ,I Hope she ain't really sick .
Would love to read more sending u a request do pm me too .

Thank You for loving it.

Love the second time around can be way better than the first time. You are more mature and understand yourself more than the first time which is usually adrenaline and few more combos of hormones.

Having said that we will see. I am not worried about Khushi. 😉

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Minnie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.
First of all I am not getting any PM s after chapter 5 and I am in ur buddy list...
Anyway,This chapter is emotional and I reallycan see the strength of love in between La and Arnav is way too strong and once you love someone with this much intensity , it is hard to love some one else with the same.You do create soft corner and some sense of ownership and do learn to move on but LOVE ...is difficult emotional feeling which is hard to create with the same intensity...MY opinion.

I think this is the reason that she left him because of her sickness.Now how Khushi will sooth him after his fall from this peak...and how will they come closer ...will wait for that.

Well Written Mini.😊

Oops! Sowie... I think I sent the pms only to those who wrote comments. 😊 At this point I am really not sure if people want to read it or not. But I want to write it and this one I am taking my own time... I love it just too much... talking abt it... brooding and discussing it with my hubby (sometimes)... then scribbling my sad thoughts. So this one is moving real slow. I keep cherishing it coz of the pathos that I want to dip it in. 😉

Next time I will surely pm you.

Edited by _Mini_ - 10 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: _Mini_

Oops! Sowie... I think I sent the pms only to those who wrote comments. 😊 At this point I am really not sure if people want to read it or not. But I want to write it and this one I am taking my own time... I love it just too much... talking abt it... brooding and discussing it with my hubby (sometimes)... then scribbling my sad thoughts. So this one is moving real slow. I keep cherishing it coz of the pathos that I want to dip it in. 😉
Next time I will surely pm you.

I think u have missed this ,

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/120719116