AR/ARSH FF Sunn Leyna #2 Part 47 Pg 114 (26 Aug'17)

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

di you should became a writer or director also..

but please write more on arsh

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arorasurbhi

@arorasurbhi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Awesome update...
Loved it...
Ayaan and ahaana are so cute & specially ahaana's 'naiii', their scenes were superb...
Armaan is accepting his maariage & doing everything to make it work & also making shilpa to accept it...
I especially loved the part wen he said to shilpa "tumhara pati, tumhare bache, tumhare ghar"... Tie scene was also very nice...

Edited by arorasurbhi - 10 years ago

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Main agayiii😳

First comes the banner for me...uff ekkk dum khunnas bhari dikh rhi hai tallan kya baat hai and armaan my myyy BD se acha yeh wala armaan lagne laga hai mjhe :P In love with his tallan ki band bajao mission

Each and every scene is hillarious bolne ki zarurat to nahi hai mujhe😆still mere favs hai kuch aur tumhare dialogues haste haste gir gayi main 😲

Their first kiss☺️ the passion with which he owned her and tallan to bechari responded aur phir khudkooo marooo marooo -_- patanai when will she stop fighting with herself :@
The best decision tkn by armaan in this story to add something evryday in her regret list maza agaya mujhe🤣

Mere bachcheee ayaan aur ahana ka kya bolun they r soo adorable and they r undoubtedly playing a big role in makng arsh suhaagraat possible for me so ahemmm 😉😳u write arsh scenes with kids in such an amazing manner yaar it touches my heart =)) Each and evry move of armaan is awesomeee starting frm her annoying her to follow his order and woh spa aur kapre fekne wala to 🤣I cant stop laughing :| Tie scene tops them all 🤪a perfect hubby wife moment aur woh bhi arsh pe kamaal kar diya tumne u have your own way of making scenes romantic😳

Defective piece,kapre donate kar diye and sent her to spa🤣🤣maar dooo tum mujhe basss :P pagal ho tum ^_^

Chalo finally tallan maan rahi hai apne dill ki baat bas uska ego :@ :@ woh bhi line pe le agaya hero 😳there was nothing koochi kooo or nt mch intimacy in their night scenes but u nailed it for me...I read it 10 times and its soo romantic this is wht romance is u can express it in words😉aur zor se chipkooo armaan hahahaahah :D

I did my part of job comment kar diya🤔ab baakio ka pata nahi :(( update ot ajayega na monday tak tallan ki kasammm mere dreams per bas nahi rha abb mera😛
-laddooo

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sreelekshmi

@lekshmiarsh93

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Superbbb...superbbb...superbbb...cant express it in words how much i like this part...u r such good writer... ayaan and ahaana's part are adorable...i like d way armaan came close to shilpa...now waiting for next monday...shilpa cant go away from him...arsh scenes are sooo romantic...continue sooon...waiting for next monday for next romantic part...continue sooon... .plzzz

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silver_spoon

@silver_spoon

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Awesome update...was eagerly waiting for it

This is my favourite ff

Loved every bit of it...armaan's dialogues were the best😉

Wonderful job sameera👏

Do continue soon...can't wait for the next update

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

UNRES ON PAGE 7...😊

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madhuri

@soniaraheja

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

kya kahu yrrr...mindblowing it is...armaan ke to kya kehne...jhakas hai wo ekdum...shilpa bechari fasss gyi...hehe..
loved the update so mch...maza ara hai yr aise dono ko dekhkr..very gud armaan aur paas jao shilpa ke... n dont let her go to her house...apne paas chipka k rakho..ab to aur maza ayega .. dono akele ..hehe wow yrr to guud..
awesome..now update on monday only plzzz...usss se jyada intezar nai hoga fir..jaldi update krna plzzz...waiting..

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Unres @ 7!!
Hopeful to get an update on Monday!!

Edited by A.Kh_20 - 10 years ago

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rihanna

@rihanna09

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Hey sameera

Congratulations for the new thread.this ff is fantastic and may you make more 10 threads of this. I really wait like hell for this ff of yours. Every other day I keep on visiting your ff for your update.. Each and every feeling emotions are beautifully designed and depicted. I love your work please don't make me wait so long. Update as soon as possible. I am really waiting for arsh love to blossom and I am looking forward for all passionate and romantic moments. update soon. I didn't receive your pms.. So please pm me the next time you update.