My Villain-Vivian Kareena TS Last part pg5

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bokul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

i really loved this happy end
i want everything to be ok at last
then i cam remember it with a happy feel

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bokul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

looking forward to more of your stories on rishbala

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Jasmine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Thx a lot 4 ur detailed comment.I still don't know why I dreamt of Vivian-Kareenaas a Jodi as I never thought of them as a Jodi.I don't know if I ever dream of Vivian Deepika's Bollywood movie.But if I get a story I will write on them.

Originally posted by: RIMO9013
awesome ending dear i truely wanted a happy ending like this and love the the grey sheded character sketch of vd . overall i love ur dream
but here i have one request to u next time when u dreamt plz dream vd with deepika as she is almost in the same age group and i sooo wish to see deepika vivian romancing

thanks for pm me

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Jasmine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

I had written in the title that its a TS.So it had to end fast

Originally posted by: vartekaa
Jasmine you ended it very soon...
Loved it...
😉

Keep writing more...

❤️

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Jasmine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

thx a lot.This is the longest comment u've sent on my story

Originally posted by: rima4ever
i really loved this happy end
i want everything to be ok at last
then i cam remember it with a happy feel

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Gavina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Amazing update Jasmine. 👏

Loved the part but it was the last 😭

Nevermind, at least we got a happy ending.

So it was Karan who was the real antagonist, hate that guy 😡

and Sid got married to Myrah only to save her from Karan.

Luckily Tara was here to explain the whole truth to Myrah.

But still Sid moved to the guest house,

That Karan finally got arrested for raping a girl, finally Myrah saw his true colours

and at last she reunited with Sid.

It was a wonderful story. Hope you write more.

I wanted to write continue soon but you already mentioned that it was the end.

Thanks for the PM.

Take Care dear...

Love Jess ❤️

P.S: Sorry for the late reply, actually I was on my mobile when I got the PM, but could not comment.

Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago

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bokul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
thx a lot.This is the longest comment u've sent on my story

wow i am glad 😳

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@_CrystalFlames_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
I had written in the title that its a TS.So it had to end fast

Yup...i know...
But me gonna miss it jasmine...
😉

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RIMO9013

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
Thx a lot 4 ur detailed comment.I still don't know why I dreamt of Vivian-Kareenaas a Jodi as I never thought of them as a Jodi.I don't know if I ever dream of Vivian Deepika's Bollywood movie.But if I get a story I will write on them.
u take ur time dear am waiting for ur next dream😃