VidArth/SanDhir DARK & MATURE FF - DARK PARADISE...UPDATED 29/11/1

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

it was a really amazing one... do continue it and please do it soon...

eagerly waiting to read it further..

and dont forget to p.m me

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Manal

@Thriller123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Wow yaar such an dark ff u r gonna write!!! It seems darker then the previous one very interesting prologue continue soon eagerly waiting for the first part😃

And yeh thanks for the pm😊

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Prishi

@ArshaParsh

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

I am very late, and I didn't comment on the other FFs..
I am so very sorry for that...!!
So reading this made my goosebumps arouse...!! Scared the S**T out of me...!! Anyways I am guessing your partner is
either Ashlesha Di,
or... Aimy...
I am not sure, but that is my guess, and ya update soon, warna aa jaungi, bother karne..!!

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Nitra

@Nitra

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Awsm yar sooo interesting cant wait for next update

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himaniagrawal12

@himaniagrawal12

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

awesome

just loved it

plz update asap

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Sorry it took so long to comment!

Moi loves Dark fic.

Yahaan ek ke sath ek free miling!

Great job Janu!

Vidarth are my favourite and your plot is thrilling.

Do update soon and pm me!

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Janavi

@Paravi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Omg new fic
Dat too dark

It was awsme yr
Moi luved it
Would luv to read it

Sanyu n vids trapped
Paran why r dey doing this

Excited for update
Do update soon

Wtng

Luv u yr
Keep smiling

Thanks a lot Rashi...!!!
Glad u liked it
Will update soon

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Janavi

@Paravi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: mahdin
its too intense looking forward :-)

Thanks a lot..!!
Glad u liked it

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Janavi

@Paravi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: don girls
Awesome
Love the new concept
Interesting
And a lot more darker
Update soon
I don't known who is your partner but I got to say the first was amazing
Love it
Update soon

Thanks a lot...!!!
Glad u liked it
Will update soon
Chalo mere partner ko suspense
Rehne dete hai...

Edited by Paravi - 10 years ago

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Janavi

@Paravi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Angel__Tamanna
Ress

unres ...
Hey jahanvi ...
this concept seems inresting ...
but i am vry sad dat u discontinued welcome to hell :-(
coming to this story ...
it was a lovely update ... want to know that why randhir & parth doing all this wid with their girls ...
update soon..

love,
Tamanna