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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww...kitna romantic proposal tha.
bohot bohot bohot galat kiya tumne yahan pe chappy khatam karke 😭
i feel ki sanyu's answer will be a 'no'.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_31

awesome!!

randhir's proposal! :)

but want to know sanyu's reaction


Thank u so much dear
wo toh nxt part mein pata chalega 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sani111

wowww...kitna romantic proposal tha.

bohot bohot bohot galat kiya tumne yahan pe chappy khatam karke😭
i feel ki sanyu's answer will be a 'no'.


Thank u thank u
mujhe suspence create karne mein maza aata hai,isliye yahan p end kia tha .
aur is story ki writter tamanna hai,ismein kuch bhi ho sakta hai 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wooow hats off yaar it was an awesome+wonderful part loved to the core continue soon eagerly waiting for sanyu's ans😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Wooow hats off yaar it was an awesome+wonderful part loved to the core continue soon eagerly waiting for sanyu's ans😃


Thank you so much dear
vl try 2 update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: saddahqrocks


Hey bhagawaan!

Tu kabhi ni sudhregi na???
Chal jabtak cliffie ni reveal karti tabtak no commentt.
Anywayz mom chilla ri hain
Toh haan res samajh lena lol
Love
Noopur


unress kar is cmnt ko
Taki mein nxt part post kar sakun 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: saddahqrocks

Hey bhagawaan!

Tu kabhi ni sudhregi na???
Chal jabtak cliffie ni reveal karti tabtak no commentt.
Anywayz mom chilla ri hain
Toh haan res samajh lena lol
Love
Noopur
UNRESSS~~~~~~
I know main kitni buri hoon...res karke bhool jaati hun. Lekin aap hona reminder bhejne ke liye!
Haan toh update
Bohooth hi sweeet tha! Radz behaving like a typical love-lorn-romeo!!!
The ideas were JHAKKASS!!! ABSOLUTELY!! I mean, i wud hv neva thought of dem...
The last chit was my fav!
I just hope sanyu doesnt refuse...plz god plz plz
*crosses fingers*
Hehe
Ab jaldi jaldi update dedo
I know i m so latewa!!!
*laughs*
*sees tamannah di glaring at her*
*quickly unresses*
*runs away*
Love
Noopur

bola tha na maine k tab tak nxt part post nhi karungi jab tak tu unress nhi karegi ... par ab jab tune unress kar dia hai .. toh mein post kardungi .. may b sham ko ... ya kal ... and thank u for appreciating my idea ...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: saddahqrocks


Hey bhagawaan!

Tu kabhi ni sudhregi na???
Chal jabtak cliffie ni reveal karti tabtak no commentt.
Anywayz mom chilla ri hain
Toh haan res samajh lena lol
Love
Noopur
UNRESSS~~~~~~
I know main kitni buri hoon...res karke bhool jaati hun. Lekin aap hona reminder bhejne ke liye!
Haan toh update
Bohooth hi sweeet tha! Radz behaving like a typical love-lorn-romeo!!!
The ideas were JHAKKASS!!! ABSOLUTELY!! I mean, i wud hv neva thought of dem...
The last chit was my fav!
I just hope sanyu doesnt refuse...plz god plz plz
*crosses fingers*
Hehe
Ab jaldi jaldi update dedo
I know i m so latewa!!!
*laughs*
*sees tamannah di glaring at her*
*quickly unresses*
*runs away*
Love
Noopur



bola tha na maine k tab tak nxt part post nhi karungi jab tak tu unress nhi karegi ...
par ab jab tune unress kar dia hai .. toh mein post kardungi .. may b sham ko ... ya kal ...

and thank u for appreciating my idea ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hlo peeps .. i am back with update ..
I know maine itne bade suspense mein chod dia tha ...
Par ab toh update karna hi padega na ... aur batana hi padega k Sanyukta ka answer kya hoga ...
Chalo koi baat nahi,mere ek aue cliffy h is part k liye 😉
I know m so evil 🤣
But what to do .. i love making cliffies ...
So njoy this part now


Part-6 Her answer


"I love you sanyukta"- These were the words continously ringing in sanyukta's brain

"Sanyu please answer toh dedo"- Randhir said in a pleading way

Randhir's heart beat was at maximum speed .. so was sanyukta's ...

Randhir was desprate to know her answer.. whereas sanyukta was shocked after seeing this

She hadn't expected that anyone could love her to this extent ... that he can do all these romantic things for her ...

It was true that she didn't like him,but it was also true that she didn't have courage to break his heart ...

"Randhir, get up"- Sanyukta said keeping her hands on his shoulders ..

"Sanyukta please i want to know answer of my question"- Randhir said

"Randhir, there is no answer for this question"- Sanyukta said turning her back towards him

No matter sanyukta was a strong hearted girl ... but still,she didn't have courage to break someone's heart ... and that too when the person loves her so much that in so much cold he is standing in front of her just in his t-shirt .. because once she told him that he looks cool in his half sleves black t-shirt ... No matter it was day of april .. but still nights were cold .. and it was raining outside,so due to standing in balcony earlier,he would b feeing more cold

Tears started coming out of her eyes ... She was hurt ... yes she was hurt ... that she is hurting to someone which loves her madly ...

Its not that she hadn't any idea about his feelings .. she had slight idea about all this .. looking at randhir, anyone could say that he is madly in love with sanyukta

Randhir's way of talking to sanyukta, his starings at sanyukta, clearly says that he was crazy for her

Sanyukta tried ignoring him,fighting with him, making fun of him,laughing at him and did many things so that randhir would start disliking her .. but he was still the same ...

sanyukta wiped her tears ... she wanted randhir to hate her,not love ... randhir was her friend afterall, she should think for his better ment

"Sanyu please answer me .. its the matter of our life"- Randhir said

"Randhir, there is no us ... please all this means nothing to me ... ye batein,romantic cheezein, i love you's ,ye chits .. is sab ko dekh kar any girl would say yes ... but not me .. because i don't love you .. i just love machines only"- Sanyukta said in convincing tone

"But we are friends na .. i am sure that you don't love anyone else ... i'll make sure that ..u will fell in love with me"- randhir said keeping his hand on her cheek

"Randhir, this isn't possible ... this love thing isn't made for me ... meri life mein love k liye koi jagah nahi hai, aur agar mujhe kisi se pyar ho bhi jaye,toh bhi i can't make him my life partner,because my family won't allow me"- Sanyukta said

"Sanyukta, once you say yes .. mein tumhare parents ko bhi mana loonga time aane par aur tumhein bhi mujhse apne aap pyar ho jayega"- randhir said confidently ...

"Randhir please get out of my room .. there is nothing possible between you and me"- Sanyukta said

"Okk,as you wish sanyu ... please think about it ... love you"- Randhir said and went out of her room silently tbrough balcony

Sanyukta kept the diyas and chits carefully so that anyone won't see it ... and cleaned the room and laid on bed

"I am sorry randhir, i can't give you a chance,because i don't love you... and i can't say i love you to one whome i don't love ... infact i can't love anyone because i just love engenering"- Sanyukta slept thinking

...


"Ab tak toh randhir ne bol dia hoga nah,kya boli hogi sanyu, kaise propose kia hoga randhir ne use,ughhh ... please jdi pohanch jayein ghar aur ghar jakar koi panga na hojaye,randhir chala gaya ho wahan se .. arey par agar sanyu ne haan boldia hoga toh randhir toh wahin hoga"- Vidushi was thinking while sitting in car with her family on way to home

Many thoughts were coming in her mind ... She was becoming curious to know everything ... she wanted everything to be all right ..

She texted parth to ask randhir about everything

...


"Randhir, yaar tu aj sanyukta ko propose karne gaya tha,kya hua"- Parth said sitting on couth in randhir's room

"Pehle toh tu ye bata k tu itni raat ko yahan kya kar raha hai"- Randhir asked sitting beside him

"Arey wo vidushi ka message aya tha puchne k liye,aur tujhe toh pata hai k wo kitni curious rehti hai batein janne k liye .. abhi bhi message par message kar rahi hai"- Parth said showing him his phone.

"She said that she considers me just as friend ... and she doesn't love me"- Randhir said sadly

"Toh koi baat nahi,phir kya hogaya,ladkion ki aadat hoti hai bhav khane ki .. vidushi ko hi dekh le ab tu,kitna bhav khati hai har baat par .. aur sanyukta toh uski behan hai aur woh bhi choti .. toh uska zyada haq banta hai na bhav khane ka"- Parth said

"Yaar par sanyu aur vidushi are different ... dono ka nature wagera sab kuch alag hai"- randhir said

"Par hai toh dono ladkian hi na .. aur behnein bhi"- parth said

"Yaar i don't know what to do"- Randhir said in a sad tone

"Aise looser bankar mat baith .. be a man yaar .. do some thing jisse use acha lage,ya jisse woh tere bare mein soche"- Parth said

"chal mein kuch karta hoon,waise bhi abhi mere collage start hone mein kaafi din hai aur sanyu ke schools start ho gaye hai"- Randhir said to parth

...


After that day,randhir started stalking her at her school times and tuition clases times ...
Sanyukta was irritated by this action of his...
She didn't liked the fact that randhir was following her every where...
Though she didn't liked it,but still she didn't said anything

...


It was just another day for her ... sanyukta was coming out of her tuition clases ...
She was walking on road ... suddenly she felt some one following her ...
She thought it to be randhir
She increased her speed ..
But that person also increased his speed and stood in front of sanyukta

"Aise bhag kyun rahi hai itni jaldi jaldi mein"- Kunal , her tuition mate asked her

"Arey kuch nahi Kunal wo toh bas mujhe laga k koi peecha kar raha hai"- Sanyukta said

"Sanyukta, i wanted to ask you something"- Kunal said

"Haan pucho"- Sanyukta said

"Sanyukta woh i wanted to ask you,k will you be my girlfriend"- Kunal asked holding her hand

Sanyukta was about to say no ... when she noticed randhir standing at a small distance from them .. his hands were tighten into fists .. his eyes were red ...
Sanyukta got scared looking randhir like this ..
She knew that this guy Kunal is just a flirt type..
No doubt she wanted to say no to this guy .. but she didn't want to have fight in both of them ...





So guys i again left this in cliffy 🤣 k ab randhir aur Kunal k beech mein kya hoga .. what will be its effect on sanyukta ..
what will be its effect on their relationship ..
Predictions are welcomed ..

Now do like and leave your precious feedbacks ..
All typ of feedbacks are welcomed ..
and res karne wali jaldi unress kardia karo ...
Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm
Good update😊
Sanyu's reaction was predictable
Feeling bad for randhir as his preparation gone in vain😕
Hoping that sanyukta will say no to kunal😊
Update soon

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