Ariya ff: Pyar tune kya kiya part 5 page 18 AUGUST 16 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
update chahiye dear jaldi dona eagerly waiting to read
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Hey!
D story is nyc!
Arjun ditched his wedding with sakshi!!!
Amy is super naughty!
Precsap is v interesting!
Pm me for further updates!
Btw where is riya?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
thank god.. arjun sakshi ki shadi ni hui.. pheww😎
and amy.. shoo cute... pkka ariya's daughter,, has cuteness n innocence like riya and observing skills like arjun...
m loving her...
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Awwwsssmmm Story
Loved it
Supperbbb... concept
Amazing...
Loved Amy she is so cool n clever
Loved the way she talks sooo cute
Precap look interesting
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Lovely story di
amy is so clever n smart
pls pls pls pm me when u update ur stories
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Please do update soon.i am waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great story 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️
Amy is Ariya's daughter 😕 I hope so 😊
Prologue intriguing 😃 👍🏼
Amy ne Rathod ki bolti band kar di 🤣
Update it very very very soon 😊
And could you please send me a PM 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NICE STORY DEAR
PAR BAKI KA UPDATE KAHA HAI

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 4




Arjun &Sameer exchange looks when they see Amy on front front seat in SUV.


" Tum office mai rehogi " Arjun declares


Amy just look at him & adjust hersself in seat.


" Dad i heard IndianPolice is always late for their work... is that true?"


" Arjun take your seat now" Sameer barks & Arjun take his seat.

They reach Crime spot.

Team starts todo their wok. while Amy stand near Arjun..


" Amy go back to Car ... " Arjun says

" But I m brave... " Amy states

Arjun just nods his head in disbelif. & wear his gloves.

Amy's eyes only for Arjun today.. she just look at him , how is he working , his questions , she stand near him holding her Tuffy . she feel happy , when her Superdad catches thing other can't see , he is her Hero...


" Rathod... hame ghar ke andar jana hoga , ghar ke anadar jarur kuch milega... "

" Rawte , go , chotu tum inke saath jaao" Rathod says

" Sir per khnno to yaha road per hua hai, to phir ghar???" Shree ask

" Shree khoon yaha nahi , kahi aur hua hai , yaha body hai , per goli ke shell kaha hai ?" agar goli chali , to goli shell bhi ikal kar aayi hogi... aur vo yaha nahi , aur logo ke statements ke mutabik ye is ghar se hi bahar naikla .."

" Yes Sir "


Arjun scan house with his eyes. Amy also does same..

Chotu only look at everywhere & them Arjun & Amy..

" Sir yaha to kuch bhi nahi "

" Jaha log dekh nahi sakte , vahi se hamara kaam chalu hota hia Chotu... "Arjun states

he look everywhere & suddenly his eyes shining

" Murder yahi hua ha Chotu... " with that Arjun goes near wall & take out one knief that lay nearbuy & starts to inspect .

while Amy look at everywhere.

"Dad ye painting ulti kyu hai ?" Amy ask

and Arjun about to answer her but something strike him... he handed his knife to Chotu & goes near Amy who now inspect one painting.

" Godd question Amy.." Arjun says & observes painting... he slwoly take out painting. &finds oneknob there.

" Chotu... " Arjun calls & push that knob. Suddenly that wall gets open & Amy just awww..

" Its like some harry Potter films.. "

Arjun calls Rathod.

Team also comes inside.

rathod look at wall & goes near to wall..

"Rawte... yaha to rasta hai "

" To der kis baat ki?" Arjun ask & start to walk on that route. he finds some staris

rathod & others also follows him.

while Ayesha takes Amy with her..

" Muje vaha jana hai Dad ke paas, " Amy states when Ayesha start to take her out of House.

" No"

"Oh yes.." Amy says & try to free her hand from Ayesha's hold.

" Sameer orders me to take care of you... "

Amy literally bite Ayesha's hand & ran into house...

" No... Amy... " Ayesha yells & run behinds Amy..

Amy enters in that path, but there is no light

" Dad " Amy slowly call , but no one is there

She seat on staries & start to dsecned staries... after some minutes she finds some light...

Amy sighes. & stand on her feets.

she come forward & sees her Dad , & others, aim at Gun someone.

Amy look otherside.

" OMG, its look like Home... " Amy states & Arjun's body stiffen , he never wants her , to come there , see this all..


" Dekho apne aap ko hamare hawale kar do " Arjun shouted in big house... & suudenely all haers someone shout... Culprit turn

" Shona nahi nahi koi nahi hai hai so jaao...dekho mai hue na tumhara Rajesh... so jaao... "


"Rajesh dekho tum ye mazaak ... " Arjun comes ahed but stop when he sees this all..


one lady is in cage , seating on cage & rubbing her eyes. her hair are dishelved ,she talks to herself, her cloths are not proper... her nils are also big... looking like she did not bath for some years.

" Kon hai ye , aur ise yaha kyu band kiya hai ?" sameer barks & aim Gun at that Lady...

Caged lady look at him &Gun and starts to yell .

" plz Officer Gun mat dikhayie , vo dar rahi hai... " rajesh yells & Sameer immeadtly tuck gun behind him..

Rajesh immedatly goes near cage & hold that ladies hand..

" Shona dekho rakh di unhone apni gun , ab bas ha... acha aap Icecream khogi?" he ask sweetly...

she starts to clap loudly... Arjun's eyes laid on rajesh... rajesh goes one side room & open fridge & gets ice cream.


he then gives ice cream to that Lady , lady litterally shantches Ice cream from him & starts to eat ice cream with packed cover...
she eats like someone goes to snatches it from her..


" Ye hai koun?" aur is band kar kar ke kyu rakha hai ?" Shree ask

" Rohini meri patni... apna mansik satlunho chuki hai.."

"Ky a, per yaha ise band...

" Dekho jyada sawal mat pucho.. aur ha ab tum mai se koi bahar nahi jayega... kyu ki jo bhi koi ye sab dekhta hia vo bahar nahi jaa sakta... " rajesha says

" Ye tumhari galat femi hai Rajesh... bahar to sab jaynge , aur ha tum bhi hamare saath hi chaloge... " Arjun shouted & jump on rajesh...

Rajesh is not prepared for all he stumbles & fall on ground with Arjun... Arjun immedatly tied his hand with Handcuff.

" DEkho chodo mujhe... "


" Chillane se koi fayada nhai hai Rajesha.. Arjun yells

" ab tum khud apna muh khologe ? ya mujhe kuch karna hoga?" sameerbarks


" Vo vo ... mai Rohini se bahut pyar karta tha , lekin vo mujhse nafrat karati thi , kyu ki mai uska naukaur tha , uske dada ke saath kaam karta tha , per jab use mera pyar samaz aaya ,tab uska man adla aur vo bhi mujhse pya karne lag gayi .

hamne chup ke shadi kar li , lekin ye baat iske Dad ko pasand nahi aayi... unhone ise baar baar samajya..ki ye mujhechod de,perRohini meri saath hi rehna chathi thi... phir kya tha ,maine iske Dad kohi maar dala... sala jinda rehne ke kabil hi nhi tha ... meri Rohini ko mujhse alag karna chatha tha... kamina baap ...lekin lekin Rohini ne sab dekh liya... aur vovo pagal ban gayi.. "


" to isko Hospital mai kyu nahi admit kiya?" Shree ask

" Kyu ki agar ye theek hoti to sab ko sach bata deti , aur mujhe fasi ho jati.. " Rajesha says


" Aur kitne logo ko maara tumne?" Arjun ask

" jyada nhai bas 8 logo ko... ek doctor , nurse , plumber , mera mali , kam wali bai, sheetal mere dost ,baba " Rajesh says in cool tone

Chotu who stand besides him keep gun at his head

" Kyu maara itne saare logo ko?" sameer yells

" Vo Dr kisi kaam ka nhai tha , meri Rohini ko thik hi nahi kar paa raha tha aur vo Nurse , usne meri Roshini ko data... voPlumber to yaha galtai se aa gya tha , aur kam wali bai vo Rohini ki aawaz sunkar yaha aayi... mali ayha se Rohini le jana chatha tha aur meere baba ,vo chathte the ki mai Roini ko hospital mai admit karu... aur sheetal mere peech pad gayi thi , vo mujhse shadi karna chathai thi , isiiye maine use Rohini ko dikhay diya aur maar dala , aur mera dost ronihi ke haalat dekh kar hasa us per... ,"


"Chotu le jaao is yaha se ... " sameerbarks & Chotu take him away..

" Shree call Ambulance aur ise yaha se le jana ka deha " Arjun says while looking to Rohini who now silently seat in cage playing with her hairs.


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Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 10 years ago
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" Arjun Sir ... Amy... " Ayesha yells & now all sees Amy seat behind table & her hand tightly clutch to her teddy. she hugging herself & is shivering..


sameer just hold Arjun's shoulder . while Arjun closes his eyes to try to control his anger.

" Kaha tha na , yaha mat aaoo. per nahi... " Arjun yells

and Amy shifts backwords.

" Ab bata bhi dogi kya hua hai?" Arjun yells loud tone in anger... Amy just tightly coleses her eyes.

" Rawte ye koi tarkeeka hota hai aachi se baat karne ka?"


" Vo dar gayi hai aur tum use dara rahe ho , hato yaha se ... " sameer says & goes nearAmy..


" Aapko dar laga Bachha?"

but no response..

Sameer take long braeth..

" use dekh kar kisi ki yaad aayi?"

suudeenly Amy hug him like her life depend upon him.



PRECAP:


Amy stick to rathod whole day , but she also wants her dad with her.

Ayesha try to feed her food , buy Amy just hide her face in sameer's shirt , finally Arjun feed her & take her in his arms... she sleep on his shoulder whole day...


" Mumma... Amy... see ... Amy is here ... to see you"

" Mumma ... Mumma..." Amy cries & Arjun hug her tightly.


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