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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 10

That night khushi makes a strange dream. alone in an empty place no life no person and animal or tree except sand and clear sky with lots of stars which shone she looks around she is afraid and she called...

-: arnav ! arnav !( and suddenly a voice answered her smooth
-: Khushi...(this is a woman's voice) khushi looks at the sky and said
-: it's you mom?
-: Yes khushi it's me your mother
- : Why Mom? (khushi said crying) why you left you and dad leaving me alone???
-: You're not alone khushi you're with someone who loves you and whom you love !
- : I'm lost without you.
- : No you're not lost every time you looked at us from below and you talked with us you're with us you are in our hearts!
-: Yes mom but you and Dad you are together and I am alone here !
-: No khushi you are always with us you know why we always shine? (khushi answers no with the head) because you look at us it is you who watch over us where you are, we are happy to have left you for that we mayest shine (khushi wakes up from her dream looks around and look on the side of arnav) The place is empty She goes to the window and look at the stars. The words of arnav still echoed in her ears (I want a child with you I want the fruit of our love) and khushi feels sad she feels guilty for having refused a child to arnav regrets and says
- : A child with arnav is what will complete our happiness! (and she decided to accept the proposal of her husband)...
Four days since arnav is absent But he calls her every day It was now the morning of the fifth day. arnav has not called yet nor the previous night khushi is tensed She decided to not go to work she reached downstairs and crosses nani
-: Nani (khushi says disturbed ) arnav did not call today nor last night! I am afraid that if ever something happened to him?
-: The day is not over yet ! He will surely call you
-: Yes nani I'll wait
-: You are not going to work? (asked nani)
-: No I'm not going( and she returns to her room.
khushi waiting all morning but arnav does not call ! It is already lunchtime khushi has not eaten at tea time she goes down to stay with the whole family and khushi asks Akash

-: Arnav did not call you today?

-: No khushi he has not called me but don't worry ! sometimes the meetings are long-lasting! ( At this moment the door of the house opens everyone turns to see who has entered And by a big surprise it is Arnav! nobody expected that. khushi is relieved She gets up goes to him throws herself into his arms Arnav shakes his wife against him (they have forgotten that they are not alone) .Everyone goes to Arnav to greet him He comes and sits with his family
-: You did not tell me you were coming home today? said khushi.
-: I wanted to surprise you (he said with a smile)
-: In any case it's a nice surprise Chote! (told nani) khushi was worried that you have not called( arnav looks at his wife He gets up and says)
-: I'm going up and I need to refresh myself he looks again khushi for to follow him then he goes.
after some moments khushi goes to meet him he waited he looks passionately towards her took her hand and told her
-: I missed you khushi he holds her head in his hands gently kissed her very long with love
someone knocks on their door interrupting their kiss
-:Yes? ( arnav said in an angry tone) Who is there ( a voice behind the door said
-: Nani ji wants you down! (it is HP).
-: we were get down Arnav says (he looks khushi and continuous) goes down you, I change and I get khushi goes down the whole family reached together as nani had something to announce.
-: Where is chote? (asked nani).
-: He'll come after changing his clothing and Arnav comes after some minutes.
-: sits Chote I have something to announce ! (said nani) and he seated next to his wife nani continued
-: today I want to announce that we are going to receive a new member which will be part of our family
-: we will get someone? (hello hi bye bye)Who will visit us?
-: You can say it like that but not now in 6 months! (replied nani) Everyone watched nani with surprised faces.
everyone looks they don't understand, except that payal head down and akash who smiled
-: My son akash and payal my daughter will have a child it will be our first baby
-: Hello hey bey bey I am the grand-mother and I don't know
-: No mom (akash says) we just know it's nani who insisted that payal go to the doctor and we just have the result
mami ji is happy and congratulated her son everyone turns to the couple to congratulate arnav looks at his wife he does not know what her reaction will be?
-: you both now (nani said turning to arnav and khushi) made us quickly a child so that they have the same age !
khushi's emotions were very strong and congratulated her sister Arnav goes to his brother and he presents his felicitations.
Night falls everyone goes to bed Arnav expects his wife in bed when khushi enters She goes to the bathroom.
-: come here (arnav said to her putting his hand on the bed)
-: I come back I will change my dress. (said khushi)
-: come as you are (said arnav with a cute smile) I'll help you to remove your dress ( she makes him beautiful smile and slipped into bed Arnav puts his tow hands on the cheek of kushi and said to her
-: Khushi you don't need to feel uncomfortable because of nani's sayings I shall wait until you're ready for it ! it is you that matters to me now!
-: No arnav I... (she means that she is ready) I ... ( arnav does not let her finish he began to caress her with his fingers he passes between the hair and down to her cheek and around the lips he approach to her mouth saying a voice low and soft
-: shuuuttt don't say anything kiss me ? ( breathing's khushi takes speed she loses her capacity in front of Arnav
-: you asked me to come back soon (Arnav said in a low voice) I did ! show me what you can do
she starts kissing him on the cheeks ending with a long kiss on the mouth (and be a long night for them)

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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read all parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 11


A beautiful sun rises in the lovers room Arnav opens his eyes and beside him his dear and loved wife he kisses her on the cheek and said

-: Wake up my love! Today you will work (She opens her eyes and said
-: yes! and now you're with me...( she gives him a kiss on the cheek and leaves to get ready
in taking breakfast Arnav talks with Aarav
-: Tell me champ What were you doing in my absence? Aarav looks at his mother and makes a beautiful innocent smile and replies
-: Mom took me to school and on weekends we went to the zoo and restaurant It was a very nice day! (Arnav looked at Khushi surprised and said
-: khushi! You really did that? ( khushi looks with pride at her son while preparing his breakfast and said
-: Yes it is not As Arnav is here we can't go I promise we'll do that again! only we two
-: Without me? (said arnav)
- : yes without you I get much appreciated go out alone with my son! ( Arnav finds his wife changed he's happy and he smiled he likes her like that.
In the business of AR khushi prepared a fashion show to present to the client with a work she has realized. At the end of the presentation everybody congratulated her she did a very nice job Arnav is very proud of her He took his wife by the hand aside and told her
-: When did you prepare all this? That's very well done I admired your talent ! ( Two clients approached to congratulate Khushi One of them said
-: Congratulations Mrs Raizada ! you're up ! (Arnav shows that he is proud of his wife) and the client added
-: can I admit you something? ( Khushi says "yes")
-: you should be part of the top models you are an exceptional beauty you would have given a radiance to your work I admired you ! your beauty attracts me ( khushi says thank you and looks at her husband whose anger rises to the head and before losing his patience he returns to his office the client went very far with his words khushi noticed the furious face of arnav She lets the customers on their occupations and meet her husband. Arnav in his office his eyes on a file but yet he was not concentrated thinking back to the words of that man khushi opened the door and said
-: you saw Arnav they all liked my work ?
-: Go out please (said Arnav very angry keeping his head on his records) She approached him put her hand on his shoulder and told him
- : why you are like that? He rises and exits leaving her alone in the office.
Arnav returned home Anjali passes but he does not see her she astonished says his furious face seen heading to his room he moves in and closes the door ! he does not stop moving back and forth thinking again and again what the client said to his wife he did not tolerate as he is very jealous, Ten minutes after? khushi returned crosses Anjali who asked her
-: what happens khushi? why arnav is angry like that?
-: Nothing di- don't worry !(says khushi) Where is he?
-: In his room (replied Anjali.
khushi enters the room and saw Arnav in his state of anger seeing her he turns his head not looking at her khushi approached him and said
-: What happened Arnav ?
-: Leave me alone khushi I don't want to talk with you ! (He closed his hand into a fist khushi notices

him she knows that Arnav did this when he is very angry and he can't be controlled with !) she opened his fist and said quietly
-: This is what was said the client that made you so angry? it was a compliment Arnav ! (he withdrew fist his hand turned and said
-: A compliment! you call it like that?
-: Yes a compliment it is a client and it must satisfy him! ( arnav gets angry and says more shouting
-: Satisfy? you want to satisfy a man other than your husband?
-: What are you saying arnav?
- : Yes khushi I see it that you like if that man talked to you like that you appreciated the way they told you're beautiful it amuses you that other men look at you and admire your beauty ( khushi look at him her eyes filled with tears but said nothing these words leave her mute arnav holds her by the arm and told her
-: khushi tell me I will not satisfy you to go see elsewhere ! now I understand why you don't want a child with me !! (he holds her head in his hands and continuous) you don't love me enough? Answer me khushi ! you don't love me? khushi pushes him off and says shocked
-: What ? what do you say arnav you hear you, you accuse me of seeing elsewhere you really think I'm like that ? You think I like the look of men about me? you take me for a dragged this is how you see me?
Her words drew the attention of arnav and he realized that he committed a serious mistake he raises his hand to her face but khushi rejects and continuous angry
-: After all that I've done for you and you dare say I don't love you I risked my life for you I cry a lot for you and me wanting ... ... (but she stops) ( what? arnav says she wanted what?)
( khushi meant that she was ready to have a child, but ...)
-: Khushi this is not what I meant !
-: What? you meant what then? (she wiped her tears and continued ) no I will not cry for you I should know that you're like this you love only yourself and you like to let your anger flow on the poor khushi your anger will lose you arnav
-: khushi sorry listen me I... (she stopped him and said
-: you have nothing to say to me I will never listen to you ( she left the room in tears)


Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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part 12

khushi leaves the room crying but arnav says nothing and remains motionless She down the stairs at a run passes in front of everyone crossed the door of the house and goes.

-: Khushi ! khushi !( everyone call but she didn't answer
-: Nani what happened? (Anjali asked surprised ) Why was she crying? and where has she gone?
-: I don't know (told nani worriedly) quickly Akash went to see
-: Chote! where is Chote? (asked anjali) Nani, Akash, Payal and Mamiji goes to seek out khushi Anjali to see her brother
-: Chote! Chote! (Anjali shouted). Arnav hears his sister and goes quickly to see her
-: Yes di- what do you have? you're sick? something happens to you ? tell me ( Anjali unable to speak. she is breathless she does not understand what is going on and ended up saying
-: This is not me Chote! This it's your wife

-: khushi? (Arnav said with fear) what happens to khushi? and decided to go see ( Anjali continued)
-: She is not here Chote she left she came out crying without saying anything ! What happened Chote? (Anjali requested). arnav very worried find nothing to say get the keys to his car and headed for the exit
-: She left my brother (said akash) we have not been able to stop her?
-: What did you do to her Chote ? for that she leave like that? (nani said) she was upset! ( Arnav does not answer and said to Akash
-: Akash stay here if I need you I will I'll call. Don't worry nani ! I will bring her! he takes the car and drives and looking around like crazy He goes first to the company he returned from the office but no sign of khushi even though he searched all the offices she is nowhere Arnav thinks he can find her in the temple he looked for her but in vain he seeks in every corner of the city lost do not know what to do.
he call on her phone but Anjeli responds to him khushi left her phone at home
in her side khushi walked for two hours on the street thinking about Arnav and decided not to go home. she goes to her friend, Natasha( natasha had participated in the Mrs. india Contest too with her.) she became her close friend .For Natasha khushi was an example of a free woman who knows

what she wants and what she can do when she is up to something! khushi knocked the door of her friend. Natasha opened and noticed Khushi with a helpless and upset face.
-: Khushi ?! what happens to you ! Come in ! (She sits with Khushi on her side on the couch and continued
-: Were you attacked? tell me Why are you in this state? who did this to you? khushi cried and said
-: It's Arnav natasha ! I'm lost and demolished. ( and falls into the arms of her friend )
-: Calm down khushi tell me what exactly happened? (and khushi tells her).

There Arnav looked for her the whole afternoon he called home to check if she has returned but mami ji replies
-: no my son She has not returned you called her aunt?
-: No I do not want to worry them, I'm still looking for her...!( Arnav in his car all along the way he thinks of what he said to his wife and he knows he made a big mistake.
-: Damn it (he said) I went too far I fell on her without thinking ! why did I do that? I'll get where now? she did not even take her phone ( and suddenly think of a place the garden of his mother but can't find her
-: It remains only the house of buaji! (said Arnav ) he arrives at the house and soon realizes that she is not there as it's quiet and thus Buaji is not angry (she sees arnav and told him)
-: Hello my son ! why are you standing like that at the front of the door? Come on in.

-: Buaji hello! hello aunt ! khushi is here?
-: Khushi? (said her mother shockingly) no she is not here why are you looking for her? Has something happened?
-: heu... no Aunt no, we were together I had something to do and she told me that she comes here. ( he will not tell them). Arnav waits for two hours in buaji's house but khushi didn't come and then he decided to leave
-: if she come call me please ! I must go now. Arnav returns home late. Anjali waiting him
-: where is khushi? you did not find her? arnav hopelessly told his sister.
-: no di- I couldn't find anywhere. I came back from buaji but she did not go there I do not know where to look?
-: Chote tell me what did you do to her? he sits on the couch and said
-: I was hard on her for something(and begins to tell her) I accused her wrong di- she will never forgive me!
-: And why did you do that Chote? You know she doesn't like that! (very affected he responds
-: I know di-. I was jealous and was rude with her.
-: Go to sleep now and tomorrow we will try!
-: no I'm waiting for the call from her mother maybe she'll go home.
khushi still at natasha's home she did not see the time.
-: it's eight o'clock it's night !! I need to go !
-: Where you're going khushi? stay here?
-: No I'm going to my aunt she must be worried, Arnav had to pick me up! "Natasha accompanied her to her aunt home .

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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I would like to know the opinion of the readers about my story, if I can continue or not, I'm at the 12 th part and I have not had a lot of people how follows and reads, we writers we are encouraged by your opinions and comments, otherwise it was not necessary that I continue thank you
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nice story..
read it fully..
continue soon..
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i read it in one go
it is nice story n m liking it
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part 13


khushi arrives at her aunt's home exhausted.
-: Khushi? (said her mother) where were you? your husband was very concerned ( khushi falls into the arms of her mother and sobs)
-: Hey khushi what do you have? someone has done you anything wrong? (She looks at her mother crying but said nothing)
-: I'll call Arnav to tell him that you're here. he was so worried about you.
-: No mom ! don't call him. I don't want to see him !
-: why Khushi? What happened ? (Buaji asked with an anxious air and She decided to call arnav) Khushi enters her room and be locked The phone rings in the Raizada House Buaji had to inform arnav that his wife returned Anjali answers the phone
-: Hello my daughter? (said buaji).
-: it's Buaji (Anjali said to Arnav ) he takes the phone and says with anticipation
-: Bouaji ! khushi has come?
-: Yes my son (responds Buaji (Arnav is relieved and buaji continued)
-: But what has happened Nand kishore? When she returned upset she explained nothing to us
-: I come to you buaji (said arnav ) He rushes to the exit and Anjali call him
-: Chote !! -"yes di" ( he answers)
-: Bring back your wife with you ! and you have to explain everything to her family
He looks at his sister and runs recover his wife at home to Buaji Gerima knocks on the door of khushi but she remains silent

-: Nande Kishor!! (buaji said putting her hand on her head) what happened to this girl? she does not even want to open us and we don't even know if she's okay or not? ( Just at that time Arnav arrived impatient to meet his wife
-: Here you are! What happened to your wife? Can you explain?
-: hereafter Buaji please Where is Khushi?
-: In her room she locked herself inside she is not answering and I'm afraid that something happened to her.( Arnav knocked the door of the room and said )
-: Khushi ! khushi ! Open the door ! ( Khushi was crying inside She will neither open nor answer but was sitting on her chair in front her (devi maiya's idol).
-: Khushi opens me! (said Arnav striking the door in order to break it) but no answer from khushi.
-: And if something happened to her? (said Garima) Do something! break the door! he looks at his aunt and strikes again
-: Khushi says something? Answer me ! are you okay? responds khushi please I'll break the door or else! ( He said that by irritating and hitting hard on the door fearing that something had happened to his wife)
behind the door the voice of khushi trembling responds
-: Go !! I don't want to see you! ( Arnav is issued its anxiety to hear the voice of his wife it calm and said
-: khushi open the door please we will discuss about it together
-: I have nothing to say to you leave me alone I don't want to see you! go home! (she replied with tears filling in her eyes).
-: My home is with you and I'll take you with me!( then with a furious voice he says) open the door damn it ! khushi was more silent than ever. The door was not opening Arnav tried again but in vain He remains stick at the door for a moment then went to the exit
-: you did not tell us what that has happened and why your wife is like this (buaji said that and these words stopped arnav) He remains motionless turned slightly and said
-: An injustice I committed...Buaji I do not know how to repair it!
-: Stay here tonight (said guerima) may be she will eventually open the door! (Arnav accepted and turned back he calls his sister)
-: di- Aren't you sleeping yet?
-: No Chote tell me you found khushi? You are coming back home with her?
-: No di- she refused to talk to me.The mistake that I did is unrepeatable! Di- I can't live without her What should I do? I begged her but she didn't listen! (Arnav said that leaving a tear)
-: You are very tired you have not eaten anything ! Come back home and I'll get you some food
-: No di- I want nothing I want khushi so I'll remain here until she accept to come back with me...(Arnav does not sleep and waits for khushi to decide to open the door. He was annihilated and requested)
-: Khushi please open me. Talk to me please you can't do this to me...(She couldn't bear her husband in this way. khushi opens to him fell backwards and sits on the bed her legs together between her arms and her tears do not dry up She turns her head not to look at Arnav and said
-: Go home ! we have nothing more to say ! (for Arnav it is like the door of happiness that opens and he answers her
-: No khushi not without you listen to me (He approaches sits on the bed took her hands and said)
-: I regret what I said khushi I did not mean all that forgive me please and come back home ( then wipes her tears)
Arnav thinks it's easy to forget everything but for khushi it wasn't as he had extremely hurt her and broken her heart by not trusting her She removes her hand from his and said
-: You've always spoken without thinking and I had always forgiven you but the words coming out do not come back again. you hurt my heart Arnav I do not want to see you
-: No khushi don4t say that! don4t punish me like that! Don't go away like this you know I can't bear it and what do you make of our love?
-: This is more like it for both of us Arnav! for the moment I'm not ready to forgive you, you must go home now ( Arnav puts his hands gently on the cheek of khushi saying
-: You know I can't let you khushi I can't live without you and you know it. come home with me (khushi can't be insensitive to the affected Arnav. Her heart beats and her breathes have picked up speed but the injury and above all here. she looks at Arnav and said
-: I have brought you much love despite all the wounds of the past I was able to overcome them I even decided to make a fa... (she meant a family) but khushi did not finish her sentence looking at Arnav a long time and tears wet her cheeks.

Edited by fattiwriter - 10 years ago
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Totally understand your feelings. Sometimes no comments make a writer feel like they are not being heard. Personally I am slightly busy at the moment to read much, if anything except text books, as I have a report to write but once that is done I will read it.
However I feel you should still continue for yourself and reach the end of the story. Someone, a silent reader who does not like to comment, might be reading it and want you to continue. I always think of them when I write even if no one is reading mine. Some people also like to read complete stories as well.
Good Luck and Will read soon. Just need some time to do my report first.
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Originally posted by: AryaDrayCoByrne

Totally understand your feelings. Sometimes no comments make a writer feel like they are not being heard. Personally I am slightly busy at the moment to read much, if anything except text books, as I have a report to write but once that is done I will read it.

However I feel you should still continue for yourself and reach the end of the story. Someone, a silent reader who does not like to comment, might be reading it and want you to continue. I always think of them when I write even if no one is reading mine. Some people also like to read complete stories as well.
Good Luck and Will read soon. Just need some time to do my report first.




yes AryaDrayCoByrne I will continue my story is composed of 80 episodes, and there are a lot of interesting things that everyone will love

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