Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: YellowBoots
Hey everyone.
Just a heads up, I will be posting the next update on Sunday.

Sunday is the start of a new week, nice day to start something good. Will this sunday bring something good in Khushi's life?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#742

You have been opening the layers of each characters just wonderfully. The most thing I liked about the story is in-spite of Arnav-Khushi story every other character is properly defined and played a important role in their life and story. This gives a feeling of real life. Thanks for narrating such a wonderful piece of work. 👏

Its written return each and every member of Raizada is obsessed with Khushi either in positive or negative way ( even servants 😆 ). I just hope you will write an real redemption part as well for Arnav, Poonam and HP as well. I dont want them go on keens and beg in filmy style but yes they must feel guilty and try to redeem things. :-)

Waiting for next part. Thanks.

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A_BA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#743

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Jay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: canapoem

Sunday is the start of a new week, nice day to start something good. Will this sunday bring something good in Khushi's life?

hmmm...I think next update will make things much more worse for Kushi 😭

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: jduke

hmmm...I think next update will make things much more worse for Kushi 😭

Yes Jay, even I agree. I just being too positive. Even Radhika mentioned in one of the earlier notes right that things will get really bad before improving. 😭

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A_BA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: canapoem

Yes Jay, even I agree. I just being too positive. Even Radhika mentioned in one of the earlier notes right that things will get really bad before improving. 😭

Poor Khushi😭 I keep thinking this is the worst it will get for her, but obviously it's going to continue😕

I'm super excited for the update on Sunday though!!!

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: A_BA

Poor Khushi😭 I keep thinking this is the worst it will get for her, but obviously it's going to continue😕

I'm super excited for the update on Sunday though!!!

Yes me too, Sunday update will be La's wedding I think and Arnav will be attending it too.

I am kind of scared and excited too.

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Anamika100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#748

Khushi is like a poster child of bad things happen to good people. No good deed of hers seems to go unpunished when it comes to Raizada's. I am eagerly awaiting the next part.