Slip n Fall (dark FF) [ PART 10 UPDATED ] [ 26/8 ] [ discontinue ] - Page 20

Originally posted by: Param_love

Lovely n fantastic update

Love it to the core

Beautifully you've describe the scenario

parth😡😡

ending was surprising n also shocking😲😲

update ASAP

Eagerly waiting

Thx 4 pm

Originally posted by: Indhu27

Mind blowing part!!! It was superb

Pls don't end ths...I know it hurts when u didn't get appreciated for your wrk but here you getting appreciation though not enough but still ur getting it.There people who r loving ur wrks pls don't break their hearts including myself by ending ur wrk.Ths is not only for SLIP &FALL but for the other wrks of urs.

Nxt part ASAP

Originally posted by: RIDDSI

update was awesome yaar

really.. loved it

to the hell with parth

she was betrayed by person whom she trust most

she signed conditions for that parth

and he betrayed her

who kiddnapped her?

and last scene shocked..

my mouth perfect o shape

he he he

keep writing

update soon

with love

RIDDHIMA

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

hmmm! A dark fiction! *rubs hands*
Padhna toh banta hai...

Initially, the title of the story reminded me of the song "slip n' fall" and I thought it to be a song fic. That was until I read further and my eyes glimpsed the word Dark. I'm so in love with Sadism and Dark genre..
I'm so eagerly waiting the sadistic part followed by the happy one. I really hope to get loads of chapters.

Ah! Randhir and his persona... He's an engima indeed, pretending to be a heartless moron on the exterior while has a heart of gold in the interior. I hope that Sanyukta is able to unlock the hidden innocent Randhir.
I feel so sorry for Sanyukta.. No, I don't pity her cause I know that she is strong enough to face the world single-handly, I'm just sorry cause of her broken trust.
Although the terms and conditions that Randhir made Sanyukta agree was for her benifit, I can imagine certain SanDhir moments coming up cause of his clauses.. I'm eagerly waiting to read them..
Damn! Why did you leave such a cliffhanger at the end??
I'm literally dying to know what's gonna happen.
Please update it soonish!

Regards
Keya

Originally posted by: NRGANATRA

Its awsome dr ...
lovely update
Do continue
update soon
Nd sorry for let reply but my final exam nd than external exam is just over saturday so i hv no time to read it
Nd thank you for p.m me dr

Originally posted by: don girls

Hey
When are you updating next ?

Originally posted by: purnima209

POSTING IN EVE...

Originally posted by: don girls

Yeah
Can't wait for it