Slip n Fall (dark FF) [ PART 10 UPDATED ] [ 26/8 ] [ discontinue ] - Page 19

nice update yaar..loved it.

update was awesome yaar

Omg hhahah the last scene was amzing.. hahahaa she said you are hot.. :DD

hmmm! A dark fiction! *rubs hands*
Padhna toh banta hai...

Initially, the title of the story reminded me of the song "slip n' fall" and I thought it to be a song fic. That was until I read further and my eyes glimpsed the word Dark. I'm so in love with Sadism and Dark genre..
I'm so eagerly waiting the sadistic part followed by the happy one. I really hope to get loads of chapters.

Ah! Randhir and his persona... He's an engima indeed, pretending to be a heartless moron on the exterior while has a heart of gold in the interior. I hope that Sanyukta is able to unlock the hidden innocent Randhir.
I feel so sorry for Sanyukta.. No, I don't pity her cause I know that she is strong enough to face the world single-handly, I'm just sorry cause of her broken trust.
Although the terms and conditions that Randhir made Sanyukta agree was for her benifit, I can imagine certain SanDhir moments coming up cause of his clauses.. I'm eagerly waiting to read them..
Damn! Why did you leave such a cliffhanger at the end??
I'm literally dying to know what's gonna happen.
Please update it soonish!

Regards
Keya

When are you updating next ?

Its awsome dr ...
lovely update
Do continue
update soon
Nd sorry for let reply but my final exam nd than external exam is just over saturday so i hv no time to read it
Nd thank you for p.m me dr

Originally posted by: katheriene

Awesome update👏

Parth was such a jerk😡

Loved rd's conditions,so protective about sanyu😉

Feeling sad about sanyu's condition😭

Update soon

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Superb updte
I so luved it

So much hppnd
Poor sanyu she was hell worried for parth
He's the only on whom she can rely
There's no one in her life
She lost everyone
She can go any length to save him

She was finding him lyk maniacs
When she lost her hope
She came back to rd
She signed his conditions
Those conditions shows how much rd possessive for sanyu
Sanyu was so broken to see Dat video
Dat only person she trusts
Betrayed her
She was shattered
Rd wants to soothe her
Bt his big fat ego
.sanyu wandering lifeless

Rd hell worried for sanyu
He saved her on tym


Bt ending gave me shock
Sandhir so close
I think sanyu is not in her senses


Wtng for next
Updte soon

Luv u
Keep smiling

Originally posted by: shalbi

feeling bad for sanyukta... How can parth do this to her...

Anyways.. Now that randhir is with her.. I know she is going to b happy and safe..

And now she is in half concious state and with the end line of it..

I m waiting for the next update to b done really fast... Do continue soon and thanks for p.m

Originally posted by: don girls

awesome update

seems like rd does care for her

but just doesn't show it

update soon