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TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED
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Guys in this 4 new entries are there. They are all positive characters.

CHAPTER - 4
taanis presentation was over and it went very good. . She came back to home.

At home
taani just entered and gang was sitting in the hall. .
Taani : so guys kaisi thi movie.
Boys : awesome
Simmi: rubbish sirf fight tha aur kuch nahi.
Vicky: yeah tum logo ko toh woh stupid romantic movies pasand hoti hai na.
Sharon : stupid nahi atleast in fight movie se toh achi hi hoti hai.
Now before they indulge into a fight Reyam stopped them.
Swayam : guys chill movie khatm ho gayi now we can't do anything.
Rey : woh abhi office se aayi hai toh uski bhi kuch sun lo. .
Swayam : taani! Tumhari presentation thi na kaisi rahi.
Taani : bhai achi thi and there are 95% chances ki deal hame milegi but let's see. .Waise bhi woh toh vishesh and papa raat ko ghar aayenge tabhi pata chalega.
Gang : wohhh! (Shouts)
Taani : acha chalo ab aap log thodi der rest kar lo thak gaye honge na.
Bharat : ha yaar bahut. .
Taani : Hm aap logo ke room mein coffee bhejwati hu. .
Sharon : hey yahi ek saath coffee peete hai na.
Taani : nahi sharon woh muje dinner banana hai actually aaj mom ko aane mein der ho jayegi so aur kal ki pooja ka bhi bahut kam bacha hai.
Sharon : ha toh tum hame bata do pooja ki preparations hum kar denge. What's say guys.
Rey : yaa.
Taani : nahi iski koi zarurat nahi sab ho jayega.
Swayam : karne do na taani waise bhi rest toh abhi khatm ho jayega and fir sab fir se khali.
Simmi : taani ek deal karte hai hum toh pooja ki preparation mein help karenge aur Tum hame kal taiyaar hone mein help kar dena. .
Taani : Okkk as you guys say lekin abhi nahi pehle aap log fresh hoke thodi der rest kar lo uske baad.
Swayam : ok f9.
Gang went to their respective rooms. Coffee Was sent to their room.
Taani prepared the dinner.
Soon Vd vm and vishesh arrived

At dinning table.
Vd : taani bete mein kuch kehna chahta hu tumse. .
Tunhare dost aaye hai iska ye matlab nahi ki tum kam se Bach jaogi .
Taani : kya hua papa koi galti ho gayi kya mujse. .
All were tensed including taani.
Vd : ha bilkul galti hui hai tumse.
Kya zarurat thi presentation dene ki woh bhi aisi.. huh. .
Taani : i am sorry papa.
She was looking down
Vd : sorry toh tumhe hona hi chahiye. Itni achi presentation di hai mera aur apna Dono ka kam badha diya tumne.
Deal final jo ho gayi ab kam toh badhega hi na toh tum kam se nahi bhag sakti.
Suddenly all realise what he said.
Vicky : wohhh congratulations taani.
Now taani realised what vd said
Taani : what really
All hutted for taani and then congratulated her vishesh was the last to congratulate her. .
Taani was upset as her husband was not happy for her... but soon her mood was changed. .
Vd took out a golden krishanajis statue and said.
Vd : taani bete tum apne krishanaji ko bahut manti ho na so this for you.
Taani started crying in her happiness. Then swayam wiped her tears and she took the krishanaji statue and was really happy with it.
Vishesh was not liking this he was upset. His father never appreciated him. ..like this. ..
Soon everybody finished their dinner.
Vd and vm left to their room.
Gang including taavish were sitting in the hall.
Taani : so guys this is done meine hum sab ke liye kam ki list likh di hai. Accordingly we have to start. .
Gang : Okkk
Vishesh : taani plz yaar mein bahut thak gaya hu. Kal pooja ke liye jaldi bhi uthna hai. Tum manage kar lo na i am going to sleep.
Taani : ji theek hai.
Reyam found it weird but they indulged themselves to the work given by taani.
Soon all started their work and after an hour all sat in the hall.
Vicky : huh finally sab khatm. .
Taani : guys thank you so much aap logo ke bina ye kam itna fast impossible tha.
Sharon : your most welcome.
Suddenly door bell rang.
Taani : is waqt kon aaya hoga.
She went to open the door.
The people at the Door shouted. .
SURPRISE...
TAANI : seriously tum log sab yaha what a pleasant surprise.
All entered inside the house. There were two boys and two girls. .
They started introducing themselves.
Boy 1- hi everyone I am vishal.
Boy2-hi I am Rahul.
Girl 1 ritika here.
Girl 2- shanaya this side.
The d3 stood up in their places.

TAANI : relax guys yeh log mere aur vishesh ke friends hai.
Gang : Okkk. .!!!!!
Vishal:i am taanis best friend.
Taani : yaa of course.
Shanaya:oye tere pati Dev nahi dekhai de rahe.
Taani : ha woh actually so gaye hai. He was tired soo.

(Okk guys vishal Rahul ritika and shanaya are taavish friends .since they were childhood friends so they have common group. Vishal is taanis best buddy. He doesn't like vishesh because he believes that deserves a far better person. )
(From now for Rahul vishal shanaya and ritika -- new gang)

Rahul:theek hai toh mein jaake usee jaga ke lekar aata hu.
Vishal:taani tab tak tu hame sab se milwa.
Taani : okk.
Vishal : (looking at swayam) second aap swayam ho pakka.
Swayam : ha par tumne kaise pehchana mein toh tumhe nahi pehchan pa raha
Vishal: are aap kaise pehchanoge. Hum bahut chote the jab last time mile the tab mera chehra theek se banna nahi tha toh aapko yaad kaise hoga.
Everybody laughed at this.
Soon taani introduced everyone to each other.
Taani : tum log yaha achanak kaise. (At new gang)
Ritika: tune kya socha teri shadi ke baad pehli navratri aur hum aise hi jaane dete naaa.
Taani : of course not mein bata nahi sakti ki right now mein kitni khush hu kal apne saare friends ke saath mein navratri khelungi.
Gang was shocked to see as they never expected that taani had a group other than them and that to soo close.

Vishesh also came down and was chatting with his friends.
All mixed up soon as taavish are very friendly.
Reyam didn't like that when vishesh had too sit with them .was sleepy but now he is chatting so friendly. .
Taayam gave a cup of coffee to all they chatted for some time then all left to sleep.

Next morning.
It was the time for pooja.
All attended pooja. Taavish did the pooja and aarti as they were the newly married couple.
The day went as it goes. Taani managed all the work .Vishesh taunting taani at he office .He was trying to make her feel that she was no worth it for anything.
Taani felt bad but didn't reacted to all this.

It was now night
All are getting ready to go at garba night.
Vishesh : taani! Kaha ho.
Taani : aayi. ..
Vishesh : ye mere kurte ka button tut gaya hai isse theek karo.
Taavish were standing in total filmy style. Taani was tying visheshs button.
Rey came out of his room and saw this. He was angry don't know why.
It reminded him about his and taani lovely scene during charity event. ..
Taani : aauch. ..
She got hurt because of the pin.
Vishesh : kya hua lag gayi tumse toh kuch bhi nahi hota. You better join some classes to learn all this. ..
Taani was on the verge to cry she actually cried.
Rey pov
Rediculous how could he do that. ..ek toh taani ko lagi hai aur upar se usko taunt kar raha hai discusting. ..
I just hate the way he behaves with taani. ..

He was brought back to the present by swayams voice from room.
Swayam : rey tu ready ho gaya .
Rey : ha.
Swayam : okk
Hearing Reyam voice taani wiped her tears got ready and moved out to the hall.
Soon all were present at the hall.
Everybody complement each other about the looks.
Swaron complemented each other.
Rey don't know why but felt like asking taani about his looks and without thinking he asked her.
Rey : hey kaisa dikh raha hu mein.
Taani wondered why he is asking her but she had to give a reply.
Taani : as usual smart and handsome.
They both gave each other a smile.
Vishesh only saw them smiling together he didn't heard the conversation but still he was angry for this on taani. .
Finally all went to an awesome place where garba nights were supposed to organise. .
Taani did awesome garba with the new gang as they had practice for long years.
Vishesh didn't played much. ...
Taani played with vishal all the time.
Gang was shocked to see that taani plays garba so well. ..
Even swayam was not able to believe he knew that traditional dance was something she liked. But she did garba so well was unknown to him.
Vicky : Yar guys yaad hai jab hame woh Gujrati event mila tha. Tab Humne garba seekhna ke liye kitne papad bele the agar tab pata hota ki taani garba mein Itni achi hai toh usi se seekh lete. .
Nil : yaa dude. .
Hearing vicky and nil convo rey remind how at that time he was busy in impressing swayams dad for taani.
Swayam noticed that rey was into a deep thinking so he brought him out. .
Swayam : rey! !
Rey : ha. .
Swayam chal let's go and play waise bhi ab khatm hi hone wala hai.
Rey : okk

Rey pov
Pata nahi aaj ho kya raha hai. Kyu muje mere aur taani ke bitaye lamho ki yaad aa rahi hai. .. Aisa lag raha hai jaisa mera dil use fir se chahta hai. .. Rey focus kya bol raha hai tu she is married now. Tune promise kiya hai that you won't create a trouble to her remember. ...

Rey came out of his thoughts when suddenly the beats of the music and sound increased. ..
The last two beats taarey played together. Which was viewed by vishesh from a distance.
He was he'll angry on taani and jealous of rey. ...

Precap :
Well the next part will contain drama lots of melo drama. ..Some confusion will occur. .

Note
Okk guys the new entries are total positive and the main reason of adding them is remember we always said that taani don't have a friend to share her problems with. ..so here they go the new gang is taanis very close friends and they under stand her very well. ...

Thanks a lot for your support. .. do leave your comments ki kaisa laga and plz i request all to leave comments. Because your comments encourage me alot to write and update as faster as possible. ..
Thank you enjoy and do leave your views
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update...how could vishesh treat taani like that 😡 i always wished taani also had friends
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks I am new on itf so can you plz tell me how can I post all my links (clickable) on a single group
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome ss
Plzzz continue soon
N I hv suggestion for u
Plzzz put all d chapters in one thread
It il help ur readers also
N u dnt need to copy all d chapters again in new thread u can just put their link in ur index
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nida I don't get what you have written. ..
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That I understood but I am asking about banners and something she has written. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Taani-Taarey

That I understood but I am asking about banners and something she has written. ..

that was her singnature

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