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Posted: 18 years ago
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Fab intro please continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 1

In the ice kingdom, there lied a beautiful girl in her bed. She had a beautiful ice tiara on. Around her neck was a beautiful ice crystal shaped like a heart. She had blue eye shadow on and dark eyeliner along with mascara. Slowly her eyes opened. She got up and was wearing a blue dress up to her knees.

"Princess Kripa!" a maid called. "Your mother is calling you down for breakfast. "Thanks." Kripa replies and gracefully walks down the stairs. "Good Morning everyone!" Kripa exclaimed. "Good Morning Sweetheart." The beautiful Queen and Mother of Princess Kripa stated with excitement in every word. "Mother, Father, can I go outside with Anjali?" Kripa asked.

"You know what I've told you about going outside the palace, honey." King Sidhant repeated. "But…" Kripa started. "Your Father told you what he wanted and you will follow the rules Kripa." Queen Gayatri backed up her husband. "Okay." Kripa agreed. "But can I go with Jack?" Kripa asked. The Queen and King shared a glance at each other and then Kripa. "I suppose." King Sidhant agreed. Kripa got up from her seat and hugged her parents. "I love you Mother and Father! Thank you!" Kripa exclaimed with joy.

Kripa was about to leave. "Kripa!" Queen Gayatri called. "Don't forget your ice crystal! If anything happens to Jack use your crystal to freeze the person and run out of there." King Sidhant reminded Kripa. Kripa looked at her crystal and held it in her hand. "Yes Father." Kripa obeyed.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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GREAT part please continue soon pretty short though
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool but who is this jack guy , i hope hes just a friend! nice concept angad as fire- fits him perfectly lol! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
awesome start
but hu's jack
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
ooo cool part...whos jack.....bodyguard?? 😆 great part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
great part
who's jack
intresting concept
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
hey i like ur concept, this is a unique story..continue soon! 😊 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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he's a bodyguard and her friend!... dont worry!! 😉
Edited by .:KYPHlOvEr88:. - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks everyone and the same concept applies to this fan-fic, the parts will be short because i am busy w/ school!! i will try to make them medium sized...

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