Shadow Land ~ KriYaansh Drabble Series chp 3 pg Dec 13, 2014

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shreya

@luvuKR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

intresting and a different stry..luvd d concept..i so wanna knw ki wats gonna happen nxt..update soon

thnx fr d pm

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Interesting concept. Would love to read further.
Do update soon.
Kriya a drug smuggler and rey a cop. Nice.
Thanks for the PM

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Rey ACP & is Kriya his 'Case' , this is so going to be interesting 😃...

I'm so waiting to know about their love story..

Already liking it 😉...

It's a very nice start 👍🏼..

Update soon..

N thanks for the PM 😊.

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nature-beauty

@nature-beauty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

nice concept abhi

i loved it

thank god ki yeh waala poora milega

baaki stories bhi update kar when u get time

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shakz_KR

@shakz_KR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

amazing chappy & cs
luvd it
wauh...
i mean kya kr story hai

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wonderful update..
Rey acp.. wow..
Kriya, smuggler? Well hard to accept.
Very different concept.
Looking forward to next update..

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trishika rajput

@trishikarajput0

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Wonderful update
Loved it
Kriya was terrorist
And Rey was acp

Excellent concep
They truly love each other
But now they are forced to kill each other
What will happen??
Will Rey kill her or will kriya kill him
Or will Rey let her escape or will she surrender
Many questions but no answers

Flashback wad nice
All girls were drooling over Rey
And Rey was watching kriya I mean queen k

Waiting for next update

Thanx for pm

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Soha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Abhilasha, Wow!!

It's a very unique and different attempt by you and to be honest, I loved it!

The scene setting and characterization is well done. I'm looking forward to the next updates now.

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Abhilasha

@Cieli.Santi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

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Sorry sorry sorry!

m really m!

so thats why a big update its nearly 1000 wrds update

hope you guys like it

And a small note as i m busy with my clg nd classes i really dont get time to update this so if you dont get update on weekdays i promise you that you will get it on weekends

and one more thing this week friday m travelling to surat so may be update will be late nd i may be not able to update sorry in advance

love,

Abhilasha

Edited by Cieli.Santi - 10 years ago