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Posted: 10 years ago
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jb maine PM chk kiya toh naam padh k laga ki nice concept lekin maine suna hai kahi pe.. Fir aaagey padhna shuru kiya aur pata chala ye to blog pe ss mai 2nd nmbr pe aane waali story hai.. Waese roohooo dear first prize islye nahi mila coz story ko bht jgh tmney bila wajh drag kiya tha.. Mjhey nahi laga ki Ridhima galat hai.. Koi b hota wo yahi kehta ki shashank ki apni beti hoti toh aesa nahi hota.. Aur Arman is selfles lekin uski Ridhima pe uthne waaley har zulm ko wo chup chaap nahi seh sakta usey sbko ehsaas dilaana tha waha tm chouk gayi ho..
Sidhant ko laana hi nahi tha coz wo imp nahi hona chahye tha... Jo imp hai unhoney support nahi kiya toh Arman ne sbse easily baat kaese ki wo galat tha..
Honeymoon theek tha triplets cute thei bt ending unke saath as a family honi chahye na ki alag coz wo AR se thei..
Sory agr bura lagey bt Ye meri raai hai baki tm writer hon mjhse zyda jaanti hon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: gaurikajen

pinch me aapne update kiya sapna ya hakkekat kitne time baad aapne update kiya

jyada overacting ho gayi ni...

aapki tabyat kaisi hai or problem solve ho gayi

congrats for winning two awards
meri party kaha hai
mai party mein jyada kuch ni bus TM ka update lungi ab party to deni padegi 2 awards jo mile hai

now coming to ss
awesome starting love the way gang greeted armaan
sala yeh sid kutta kamina yaha bhi pohanch gaya idiot nonsense bada aya riddhima se shadi karne
ab armaan a gaya fir bhi sochta hai shadi karega huh
jab armaan maar raha tha m boli ek aur meri taraf se bhi haha

shashank se to yehi umeed thi padma ne bhi sath chod diya bechari riddhima
chalo acha hai out of danger hai ab

yeyyy AR ki shadi
ab next part jaldi since yeh already written hai

r meri party ka dhyan rakhna



Itna khush mat ho balike...
Nehi nehi, overreact aur woh bhi tum... Kabhi ho sakti hai kiya ;)

Tabiyyat abhi tak puri tarah tik nehi huvi...
Hospital ki chakkar kaatna pad raha hai aajkal... Aur doing tests...
Problem toh half solve hogaya hai puri tarah kabhi ho sakte hai kiya :P hehehe...

Thanks dear...
Party toh zarur milenge...
Mujhe pata ta tum part ke liyeh request zarur karenge...
Lekin hoti aisa hai ki main zyada waqt lap ke paas beit nehi paati hoon...
Due to medicine mujhe side affects ho rahi hai like chakkar aana and all...
So zyada waqt main leit to hoon and headache ke wajahse lap toh kuch din se band pada hai...
Jab bhi tabiyyat tik hoga, main zarur part de dungi insha allah...

Glad u enjoy this part...
Actually yeh concept diya huva hai in SS competition main...
So this start after the photo incident, issiliyeh Sid aagaya hai...
Armaan ab aahi gaya hai toh dar kis baat ki...

Yeah, Shashank toh kabhi saat nehi diya Ridzy ki...
Lekin main yaha Padma koh bhi tohda change kardi :P hehehe...
Chalo part toh aaj post karungi...
Hope u will enjoy it...
take care
Love u muwaahh :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: teenorchid

naice onee

looking forward to readd moree


Thanks dear...
Hope u would like the coming parts as well..
take care ... <3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Omg you updated after long time

Superb ss really wow concept
Armaan comes back and all ar conversations was amazing
Excited for next part
Thanx for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon



Thanks dear..
Yeah after long time...
Issiliyeh update kar pa rahi hoon kyunki yeh SS already complete hai before I got sick...
Toh zyada ummeed mat karna main dusre stories bhi update kar paungi hehehe...
Concept is given my another person so credit goes to her...
Hope u would like whole SS...
take care...
Welcome and sure will PM u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Jess2014

Nice part,👏


Loved it ❤️

waiting for other parts...



Thanks Dear...
Hope U would love every part...
Take care <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: megha1996

firstly congratulations for winning two award s we wish u get more and more in ur life patha nahi kya hoa gya hai idhar mei jitme ff read kiya sabh mei shashank character itna kharabh dhikaya tha na ki i started hate him from my hard ridimma Joe kuch kaise ho sakhta hai jab tak uska armaan uske saath hai i love this ss and plz update u make my life worth to live again also we want to read it further plz keep updating ur lovely ffs and plz pm me




Thanks darling...
With all ur love, Insha Allah I will get more awards in future...
Hope u would like the rest of the SS...
Sorry, I don't know when I would be able to update any other Stories...
And U make me life worth to live is on hold due to my partner exam going on...
When she get free, we will think about further story...
Till then enjoy...
take care...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: sybarite1989

hey rihoo...
I know ...after a long time ...a big sry...
even you seem to have disappeared from IF ...
anyways...this part was amazing...
excellent...
the only character in the entire dmg that I hated was siddhant...
this part justifies my hate...hehe
waiting to read more...
cont soonn...
and yes your ss tumse milke is amazing...read it quite late...but it is too good till now...
take care :):):)


Hey Dear...
Arey Don't be Sorry...
I have also been away from last few weeks...
Heheh yeah, Actually my health is really down so I don't spend much time around here...
Glad u love the starting and hope u would love the whole SS...
Insha Allah going to keep posting as soon as possible...

Awww, thank u so much...
Waise u r not late dear, main abhi uske last update ke baad koi update nehi di na hehe...
Hope u would love the ending of it as well :)
take care <3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: --RAINA--

awsome start
do update it soon



Thanks Raina...
Hope u will like further parts...
take care <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha

1st of all u don't say nonsense
Aur agar meri apu k bare kuch ulti sidhi boli to main gussa ho jaungi
Ab choice is urs kya bolni hai...😉
Btw maine to blog check bhi nhi ki about result so...
Congo...Apu

Main to already apko bol chuki hooon na about evry parts individually that how it is so should i comment again...
Chalo is part k liye bol deti hooon next part se na ap batana should i comment or not...😉😛😆

Hayee yeh smile...
Then the way armaan said nikki meow too good
the moment shashank said na boht der hogayi it gone like a sinking feelings
Then jab sid ne apna intro boli na itna gussa ayi thi ki kya batau
Then when riddhima come i ws like ab pata nhi kya hogi
Phir when she started mujhe lag hi rhi thi kuch to hua hai
Then when riddhima was sleeding down i was like koi to roklo yaar
Aur use hospial leke jao pehle bate to baad me bhi ho sakti hai
Then armaan took her i was so happy for it
then when the flashback start na
Woh do nurse ko kya karne ko maan kar rhi thi
i can't tell khud samajhlo
Then the way shashank retort na i ws like kya hogayi yaar sabko
Then padma bhi..
Phir the way armaan understood riddhima's pain it's extra ordinary...
Then wht the hell yeh sid ko abhi bhi yehi keh rhi hai that woh riddhima k hone wala pati hai
How dare he...
then na he served right
Armaan ko aur marni chahiye thi sid ko
Then Pov part too good like always...
then last me ap humesha aise karte ho aise jagah pe ake rok dete ho na
Par ab main naraz nhi hu
Coz maine toh already padli puri story...😆
lv u
tc

Note:U might b thinking why i didm't added song i'll tell u but at WA




Okey Boss, I wouldn't say nonsense next time if I remember :P hehehe
Hawww, tum mujhse gussa hogi :O
Tik hai tik hai, zarurat nehi hai itna blackmail karne ki *pout*
I know tumne nehi kiya, kyunki kuch din se tum bohot busy hogayi apne assignments koh lekar...
Fursat kaha tumhe kuch check karne ki ;) koi nehi...
Muwaahhh love u :*

*Sigh* I know tumne sab part ke liyeh already comment kardi...
Lekin tumne hi toh kaha, jab bhi main yaha post karna shuru karungi tu yaha comment karenge..
Ab time hai toh kardo, nehi toh main aise hi khush hoon ;) hehehe

Happy to know that u love every bit of part 1...
Hope u would love the coming parts as well...
As maine kaha already, time mila aur mann kiya toh kardena ;)
I know u r busy girl at the moment due to exam to start soonish...
Hahaha I know tu ab naraz nehi hogi :P after all u know whole story ;)
take care <3
Love u :*

P.S
Tujhe kaise pata main wohi soch rahi ti????
Ab pata chal hi gaya hai toh acchi baat hai :P
hehehehe
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

jb maine PM chk kiya toh naam padh k laga ki nice concept lekin maine suna hai kahi pe.. Fir aaagey padhna shuru kiya aur pata chala ye to blog pe ss mai 2nd nmbr pe aane waali story hai.. Waese roohooo dear first prize islye nahi mila coz story ko bht jgh tmney bila wajh drag kiya tha.. Mjhey nahi laga ki Ridhima galat hai.. Koi b hota wo yahi kehta ki shashank ki apni beti hoti toh aesa nahi hota.. Aur Arman is selfles lekin uski Ridhima pe uthne waaley har zulm ko wo chup chaap nahi seh sakta usey sbko ehsaas dilaana tha waha tm chouk gayi ho..
Sidhant ko laana hi nahi tha coz wo imp nahi hona chahye tha... Jo imp hai unhoney support nahi kiya toh Arman ne sbse easily baat kaese ki wo galat tha..
Honeymoon theek tha triplets cute thei bt ending unke saath as a family honi chahye na ki alag coz wo AR se thei..
Sory agr bura lagey bt Ye meri raai hai baki tm writer hon mjhse zyda jaanti hon..


Thanks dear for the comment...
Blog pe second number is the entry of story dear...
Mujhe two awards mili hai and main bohot khush hoon...
Aur first prize kiya 2nd and 3rd bhi nehi mila... Kyunki other stories were far better then mine...
Main koi prize ke liyeh nehi likha ta...
Main sirf participate karne ke liyeh likha, kyunki main jaanti hoon jo bhi likhti hoon log pasand karte hai...
Prize is not needed but the love and respond I get, its far enough for me...

Dear, yeh concept meri nehi hai...
Yeh blog ki competition main diya huva concept hai jisse main apne idea's par likha hai...
Aur yeh zaruri nehi hai sabko accha lage right...
Aur main kyun bura maanungi darling...
Sabki alag alag view hoti hai, tumhe jo laga tumne kehdiya...
Glad kuch toh pasand aaya ismein se :D
Hum writer hai toh yeh nehi na hum sab kuch jaanne darling... Hum issiliyeh likhti hoon taaki hum tum readers koh entertain kar sake right???
No hard feelings darling, but I m very happy u are very honest with ur view :)
Its not necessary sab acche compliments de hehehe...
take care <3

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