Arhi OS : The fate-mate [ Note of Thanks : Pg17 ]

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

beautiful shot

very cute little story of arhi

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

she ran too much
but he made her come back to him
aww their first kiss
witnessed by their mother and mil
am glad she could see that he really does love her
and so does she
bhaad mein jaaye baaki sab
awww best friends and now lovers
their mothers got their wish

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

wonderful one shot.

it was very cute and lovely. 👏

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Aww... sooo cute! Beautifully written.

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Superb..
It was beautiful n a heartwarming one
😊

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Riserva!

*Edited*

Read it again and loved it 😊 It's beautiful Mints with the way you portrayed the pagalpan of two friends Ananya & Garima followed by the undying love & attraction between Arnav & Khushi since the first moment they saw each other. I loved how he tilted his head towards her & she made a face. This was indeed a fun beginning to a cute love story.
Arnav's jealousy over NK, trying to catch her attention was sooo cute. Obviously he didn't need to catch her attention, Khushi was attuned to him only since the very beginning.
Ohhh... idiot jerk friends of Arnav... 😡 Varna Khushi date hoti Arnav ki, also if Khushi hadn't told him to go with lavanya.. But they can still boast of a childhood love story, can't they 😉 Can't La see that Arnav isn't interested in her but Khushi? Blind girl...
I was expecting a little hug/emotional scene at the airport but bammm came La again... Scene was emotional but of a different kind. It felt like real IPK airport scene reversed... Khushi leaving Arnav because of a MU than the other way around.😭

But I liked the turn over after few years with Arnav as a movie director & Khushi as the confident business woman. They couldn't have been more different professionally😛. I loved the air of self assurance & confidence in Khushi. I guess.. so whatever happened happened for good. They were meant to be together after being sure of themselves. I loved how she took Arnav away from Lavanya. The girl finally understood to take what is hers. Me quite happy.. 😃
I loved his agreement about them not being children anymore 😉 I think the same too. 😳 Their confession was cute & real too. I could visualise them...
Uh-oh Ananya is lucky and now ArHi's first date won't be a secret anymore... 😆

Edited by aquagal - 10 years ago

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Shalma/Suman

@arhi_crazy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Welcome back Mints..
It is a awesome os.
Their fates were already decided which was inevitable. One was in love wid other but didnt confessed it to other and the other simply refused to accept her own feelings and chose to ignore it. But the long separation helped them to see things clearly. They realised what is more important for them and finally they took the plunge. This time he confessed his love for her and she accepted abt her feelings for him to herself and him and then they kissed.
Mints, u know sometimes neither siuation nor people's emotions are complicated but people themselves complicate it wid their action and reactions. The same happened here. Arnav loved khushi but didn't confessed and khushi just simply ignored to accept her own feelings. But the distance b/w them and time lost made them more perceptive and mature and they acted in correct direction in time. But I simply loved dis os.

Edited by arhi_crazy - 10 years ago