~ArHi FF~#1~The Hands of Time~ - Page 71

I want to read this soon. Will comment again after I read.

Just found the story, and I must say, it made my day😃

Good update...Khushi's all emotional conflicts u have shown very well...she is going back Konnoor after twenty long years...m interested to see what fate has store for her in Konnor...

Hmm mystery... Milli likey! :-D

Sorry Sandhya for late and small comment

Hi Sandhya,

Came across the story and wish I hadn't come across it at this time. It is so so hard for me to wait for the updates. And for the story this gripping, it's a nightmare.

From the excerpt, to thr last word of chapter 1 is so gripping. I want the whole story now.

The way you described Anjali and khushi friendship to the way she was abducted. I felt like I was there. With them enjoying, playing, snicking out of the poolroom. And then suddenly feeling of the dread, screaming for Anjali. And then falling down, down in the abyss and waking up in the jungle of concrete and busy avenues. From the past in to present.

I loved the way you describe her house and how a cook of a mansion, became a restaurant owner, a chain of restaurants that is. A simple house wife became a business woman and still they are just parents and a family.

I am guessing the suave man on the train is our Arnav for his " girl in red". She a crime reporter and he a detective!! Good combination.

Please update soon.

By the way I was just browsing IF. Saw your name as an author and knew right away got a very good read. Very good read is an understatement of the year.

Whaouu Fantastic update !! Love it . It's very interesting ,eagerly waiting to read more .

Awesome update loved it thx for pm

I thought today was update day, Sandy!

What I like about your stories are that they are so well written and elaborate. ..Coming to the chapter, in one word, was really intriguing. .was that arnav on the train? And what exactly happened 20 years ago? Really excited to see how the story unfolds. .