SanDhir os - jo tu mera hamdard ho

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Hey everyone as most of all u know I m texie aka samrajya laxmi wati . This is my new os on SanDhir . I have seen sadda haq from a long time and have loved Randhir aka param Singh and Sayukta aka harshita gaur 's pair . I have read most of the works on them and now have decided to write one . So here is a os on SanDhir . Hope u all like it and criticism is welcomed .

"Randhir , Randhir get up " a girl said sitting up on the bed and opening the light . "Come on Randhir please get up it is urgent " she said as she shook the man sleeping at the side of her .
"Sayukta what happened yaar why are waking me up ?"asked Randhir in a sleepy voice .
"I m not feeling sleepy at all ."
"What happened Sayu , why is not sleep taking u ? "Asked he again as he sat up rubbing his eyes .
"How should I know Randhir ? Why are u acting so stupid ?" Sayukta asked in a irritated voice and frowned .
"I m acting stupid Sayu ? U are the one waking me up at ...two am "he said checking his watch , "and u say that I m stupid !"
"Okay I m stupid but I m not feeling sleepy u get it !"she said in an angry tone.
"Okay okay come on calm down . God your mood swings are increasing each day . Now tell me what do u want me to do " Randhir said in a calm voice as he calmed his wife down .
"Okay Randhir , now I want u to ..."her eyes widened with excitement and Randhir could see his wife happy and somewhat excited .
"Do not tell me that u want to have ice cream like in every typical movie" he said as he looked up at her now scared what would she ask for .
"I don want anything like that Randhir , I am not feeling sleepy so can we talk for a while please."
Though Randhir did not want to he accepted it scared of her mood swings .
"But first I will have to make some coffee okay so that I can stay up . Do u want some ?"Randhir asked Sayukta as he got off from the bed.
"Okay "sayukta agreed as she waited patiently for him . Sayukta had not even yawned properly when he came back . She first thought that Randhir had dropped the idea of coffee but then seeing coffee mug in his hand she was surprised.
"Randhir so fast "she said in a surprised tone .
"Yeah now days I have got the practice of cooking fast " he replied winking at her .
He gave one cup to sayukta and took a sip from his .
"Randhir this is so ... Great , "sayukta said after taking a sip . "So now Randhir Singh Sikhawat knows how to cook " she continued smiling at him .
"What can I do mrs Shikhawat from the time u are pregnant I have been doing all the household works "he said smiling broadly at her .
"And have actually improved in it " sayukta said in a teasing tone and both of them burst into laughter .
"Do remember Randhir we used to fight so much .."sayukta said after a long silence.
"Yeah I remember , our fights . God so many fights , we used to fight in each and every thing " Randhir replied smiling as he remembered his college days .
"If our baby ask what was our love story then what would we say .?"
Sayukta asked thinking about their soon to come baby's reaction if he /she would know how their parents were .
"Do not worry they would understand that the love that starts from fight last for forever like their parents "he said as he took her hands in his .
"And my daughter would be smart enough to understand that "Randhir said proudly .
"Daughter ?"sayukta asked narrowing her eyes at him.
"Yes u don know my junior sayukta is coming to this world soon . "
"Who said ? Not junior sayukta but junior Randhir is coming ,get it !"she demanded .
"Look dear daughter what non sense things your mother is assuming , saying that u r a son . Tell her that your are a girl just like her and your are daddy 's daughter "he said placing his hands on her five months baby bump.
"Daddy's daughter ? No !not at all !"sayukta said as she took off his hands from her stomach.
"What do u mean by that ? The baby is a girl and she is my junior sayukta ,my engineer. "He said in a firm tone.
Sayukta laughed and finally agreed with him . "Okay okay the baby is a girl but u don like girls right "she joked and saw his expression change .

"Who said I don ? Look my dear daughter do not listen to your mother she speaking non sense "he said coming near to her stomach.

"Yeah now I m speaking non sense , have u forgotten that u were the one who said that boys are best "

"No no I was just confused at that time but your mother made me realise that girls are more better . "He said to his baby. And at this point sayukta smiled proudly.

"And if any boy troubles u saying u that boys are better then punch him "he continued.

"What Randhir u are suggesting your unborn child to punch people!"she said in an angry tone .

"No it is not that I m just telling her to be strong , brave and courageous like her mother ..."he left it unfinished and her smile grew wider ."like her mother 's husband "he finally ended and laughed as he saw Sayukta's expression change.

She took out her tongue at him and he laughed more. Finally he stopped and his expression changed into a serious one.

"Girl or boy I just don wanna my baby face whatever I had to. I don wanna my baby to grow looking at the fights of their parents ."he said in sad tone .
"Do not worry Randhir that would not happen "sayukta made Randhir sure of that . "And I would be glad that my daughter would not have to fight for her rights ,for her haq "she continued , "cause she's got an understanding father ."

Randhir smiled and both of them sat in silence for some time remembering all their problems and how they had solve it. Finally Randhir broke the silence.
"Now can we sleep please , now the coffee has stopped working "he said and sayukta nodded her head.
"Ummm... Randhir "sayukta called out .
"What ?"
"Ummm will u do something ?"she asked.
"What ? "
"Umm actually I now wanna have ladoo so can we get some?"she asked in a sweet tone and her eyes showed clearly that she was guilty .
Randhir signed and said ,"okay let's go , how can I deny u my Sayu and my junior sayukta ?"
Sayukta's eyes widened and she got off the bed quickly to change.
"I love you Randhir "she said as she followed him out of the room.
"Yeah I know that "he said proudly and both of them disappeared into the hallway.

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God I know it is very very bad but plz do comment . Hope u all like it .



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Yagyaseni thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It is beautiful, Sam!! I just loved it!!! Beautifully portrayed emotions and their love surely touched my heart!! Thanks for the PM!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear
It was so cute
Beautifully written

U portrayed everything so flawlessly
I really luved it to the core thanx for the pm

Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

It is beautiful, Sam!! I just loved it!!! Beautifully portrayed emotions and their love surely touched my heart!! Thanks for the PM!!

thank u so much di I m so happy u liked it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

thank u so much di I m so happy u liked it 😃

Now unreserve the comment on my thread soon, yaar!! I badly want to see a comment on my fav part!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear samrajya 🤗
It was a wonderful os
I really like to read os in which sanyu is pregnant 😳
U described it perfectly 👏
Great job ..keep writing !!
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sagl

Hey dear samrajya 🤗

It was a wonderful os
I really like to read os in which sanyu is pregnant 😳
U described it perfectly 👏
Great job ..keep writing !!
Thnx for the pm

thank u so much for reading it 😃 and I m so happy that u like it 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow such a cute os...
No words left...!!
Awesome work
Sandhir remebering their old days
of struggle And their fights over pity issues...!!!

Moreover fighting whether it's a
Girl or a boy...! God they can never
change 😆
Loved it to the core

Keep writing
And be happy
Thanks for the pm
Love Janavi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: newmoon18

Hey dear
It was so cute
Beautifully written

U portrayed everything so flawlessly
I really luved it to the core thanx for the pm

Keep smiling 😊

thank u so much 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was really cute n beautiful yaar thnx 4 d pm hence i cld read it or else i wld hv missd such a sweet os btw my name is vrinda

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