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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
thank u note..tthank u guys for ur precious ..comments ...it felt amazing to recieve ur comments...
well i took the concept from a story written by o'hendry -tthe last leaf ...nd yah we do find some relevance from the movie lootera...though the last leaf story is better than lootera... which i feel so thought to make a taarey version on last leaf.
nywayss will update soon...as possible ..
thanxxx once again... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Superb start
Taarey meet was nice...
Taani suffering frm a disease...hope nothing happens to her
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Awesome concept n update very nys
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

hmmm lovely n interesting conceppt

update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
chapter 2it was the next morning, rey was outsight in the garden..trying to figure out wat to draw.. he was concentrating... a thing which n artist needs to feel wat he is gonna paint ...he tried hard to concentrate .. but he could'nt ... only one picture which was disturbing his concentrastion was taani's picture..

" shit rey, wats wrong with u ????", he asks to himself.
"hey is it love , dnt i care nd think about her too much ..."
"oh god help me..:"
"or maybe its just an attraction.."
" no..its itsss love rey, y r u so confused, u love her , yesss .."
"i m in love woohooo..."( he was very happy )
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here in taani's room ...
just after the doc arrived..
jessica- luk madam, i told u take care of urself , but no whoes gonna listen to me."
taani- common jessica , stop being so hyper...plzzz...
i dnt want to care myself , as i wanna say gud byee to this world...nd go to heaven...

while this convo was going on , rey from the back of the door hered each nd every sentence..
he was shocked...
he thought
"smthing is wrong...y does she wants to die...i need to know watss up..
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he straight away goes to his room...
nd does wat he always does when he is tensed or worried ...dat is painting watever comes to his mind.
he was thinking of taani, at dat moment thuis he started painting her pic...
it was a veryu beautiful pic...
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scene shifts , after all have taken there lunch ...
taani went to the garden luking at the leaves ... jessica was working in the kitchen,while rey went to taani's room to find out..
he saw a file ..on the tea table...
he took it nd readed it nd he got the most shock of his life...
before he could do nythingt.. a voice came
"rey..."😡
" taaa...taani.. u "
"y u did'nt expect me ryt.."
" well let me make one thing clear,dis my room were u r standing, nd u r guest, no actually u were, just get out from here ryt know...i hate u..."
" taani wat isdis u have cancer , blood cancer still u r so careless hw can a person loose there life like dis, taani is precious.."
"y taani , y r u doing such a blunder.?"
" rey, i said just get out , just get out..out"( dis tym she was really veryyy angry )
rey felt insulted nd went away.
it was nyt tym taani was luking into the window...
i really dnt understand y is dat one leaf still not falling dat last leaf...
she felt little irritated nd went to her table nd wrote a poem on her diary..
' oh..poor leaf...
snatching my peace,
u were green but now yellow...
all died , ur mates..
but u still alone..
alone.. just like..me.

y to survive alone..
u r nt alone..
i m too there...
lets diee together..
in dispair..
in hatrait.
in lack of hope...
lets die ..
nd say gud byeee..."

( this is nt a rhymic poem, but a kind of poem which describes the plot..)

she went to her bed...nd sleept peacefully thinking dis could be her last sleep.
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she woke the morning was bright...but cold...
she was angry nd dis hearted ...
y the last leaf still there...
is the nature gone crazy...
she immediately went near the..tree...
luk at it with intense...nd saw a horrifying scene...

" love is blind,
love is hope,
love is a sensation,
nd a feeling..
which makes u live,
noyone in dis world can survive withouit love..."

she had no love in her life,,,
but now...


tears felt from her eyes she started sobbing nd crying...
she got a new n sudden gift of her life...
which is love...

she saw n artificial leave painted nd made like a real one stucked into that tree...
nd a letter is there stuck in the stem..she took it ..
"i knew u would cum searching for it,
i luv u taani..i luv u i want u too survive...
now i know after seeing a new light of hope u would survive...
i did'nt went nywhere i m there with u.. just beside u.."

she turnes nd sees him standing...with a smile...
she went to him nd huged him ...
" i luv u ..."
rey was very happy dat day...
nd the snowflakes were still falling down ... which was creatting a sensation of romance..
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the end...
season 1 ended if all r interested i'll update the promo...
for season 2 - saathiya ..taarey ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Amazing

Continue sood and pm me next time
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Aww taarey confession was
Cute thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
amazing part
the poem was nice
awee taarey confessed so cute

waiting for season 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
nice upd...aww rey painted taani picture...the poem was nice...taarey confession was so cute...now waitig for season2...thanks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
amazing chapter

loved the poem

cute confession

and rey painted taanis pic

was such an adorable scene

and taani has blood cancer

waiting for the next season

do update soon

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