#1 Arshi FF: Smitten By The Neighbour ~Next Thread Link: Pg 149~

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: crazyforsarun
Awww! The update was so cute!
I love Samrat!
Thanks for the PM!
Update soon!

Thanks a lot 😊

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BroknAngel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Waiting fr sam to meet his daddy n neighbour

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madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

#243

lovely update!1

wow khushi woke up and realise she should say sorry to Arnav

the way Arnav spoken to Garima is very nice

love the way ratna and Sam's bonding is also Kavya Sam..

oh some past is there for Arnav and his dad not talkin term

wow khushi rehearsed how to say sorry to Arnav

Sam Khushi's bonding is growing

eagerly waiting for Sam to come and stay with Arnav and Arnav khushi's meeting

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: BroknAngel
Waiting fr sam to meet his daddy n neighbour

Will happen soon 😊 Thanks a lot 😊

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-MIMOSA-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#245

A very melancholic and poignant story...

Khushi's pain is almost palpable! It hurts to see the pain she is going through! You have depicted her agony wonderfully!

I love the bond Arnav and Samrat share. Quite a Father-Son duo there! Both are charmers!

Garima-Khushi bond is no less! Now they are bonded with the common pain, which they both are suffering and trying to make it easier for each other to live and carry on with the life. Love both of them!

I am loving the story!! Such intensity!!

PS: Please don't take me wrong, but the title of the story was somewhat misleading, and gives an impression of some light Rom-com kind of story. But, well, thats your prerogative. you are the boss here!

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Tanvi Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: madhu1210
lovely update!1
wow khushi woke up and realise she should say sorry to Arnav

the way Arnav spoken to Garima is very nice

love the way ratna and Sam's bonding is also Kavya Sam..
oh some past is there for Arnav and his dad not talkin term

wow khushi rehearsed how to say sorry to Arnav

Sam Khushi's bonding is growing

eagerly waiting for Sam to come and stay with Arnav and Arnav khushi's meeting

Yes, Arnav does have a past 😊 And that;s the reason his Dad isn't talking to him, and the same anger is reflected towards Sam..

Thanks a lot 😊

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segad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#247

oh what a cute kid. you write very well when portraying his feelings

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crazynmad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Jst fabulous...i jst love this story...

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Tanvi Alison

@Tanvi.Alison

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Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: mimosa658
A very melancholic and poignant story...

Khushi's pain is almost palpable! It hurts to see the pain she is going through! You have depicted her agony wonderfully!

I love the bond Arnav and Samrat share. Quite a Father-Son duo there! Both are charmers!

Garima-Khushi bond is no less! Now they are bonded with the common pain, which they both are suffering and trying to make it easier for each other to live and carry on with the life. Love both of them!

I am loving the story!! Such intensity!!

PS: Please don't take me wrong, but the title of the story was somewhat misleading, and gives an impression of some light Rom-com kind of story. But, well, thats your prerogative. you are the boss here!

Thank you so much 😊 I love long comments 😃 😳

I agree about the title. once you pointed it out, i noticed that it does give an impression of a Rom-Com... All i can say for now is that this story is going to be light-hearted once Samrat starts to live with Arnav 😳 And well, let me just hope that the updates are interesting enough to make you read them 😳

P.S. I liked it that you actually told me what you felt 😊 Feel free to give me such feedback, it truly helps 😊