Reliving the past- A SanDhir dark FF [Part 11 on pg 20] - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Loved it! Short and sweet!
So yeah, he is recovering drastically and the reports are negative!
There's some locha I guess! So yeah, continue soon babe! Thanks for pm'ing.

Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
nice but too short..
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
a nice start...nice cs...loving the flow of the story...plzzz do continue
Edited by ushankitvc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Just read all the parts and love it
Interesting concept
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Superb concept i just read all prts nd i love it but they r short yaar thoda bada wala updt karona plzz
Randhir is recovered soo he has to leave the hospital but use toh sanyu se love hai maybe soo how will he leave or drama karega tht he is not recovering its getting intresting
Plzz jaldi updt karna nd thnx fr pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Awesome n lovely update👏😳
love it❤️
Update ASAP
thx 4 pm🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Hey guyss... SOOO SORRY... for not updating last week...pehele my exam then my stupid laptop
Chalo...forget it...i am back with the 4 prt of my FF...
#ENJOY!!😉😉
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PART.4

S- Hi...good morning!!

(Sanyukta greeted Randhir as he opened the door)
(It had been a week since Randhir was discharged.)

R- WOW... 7 am...not bad... ( he taunted her)

(Sanyukta had promised that she would visit him everyday. Randhir at first had thought it as a gesture, but she had kept her promise)

(Sanyukta gave him a glaring look, and pushed him, entering the house.)
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R- Ouch!!!
(Due to her actions... Randhir fell on his back)
S- Ohh myy god!!! I am sooo sorry Randhir!!! Main jaan bhuj kar nahi kiya...i didn't...i

(Sanyukta dumped her belongings on the floor and ran towards him, kneeling near him)
R-Shhh...kitna bolti ho...
(Randhir kept his index finger on her lips)

[They didn't know why but a sudden electricity ran through their bodies]
(Sanyukta, don't know why, but was loving his touch, but she knew that it was bad, VERY bad,got up jerking him, and helped him to get up)
(Randhir was loving the effect he was having on her, and was a little disheartened due to her actions)
R- Sorry!! (sensing the tension)

S- Are..tum kyu sorry hote ho?? Dhaka toh maine diya na...
(She made a sorry face, holding her ears. Randhir laughed at her tactics...)
S- Soo...ready to go?? (She asked hesitatingly)
R- Ya sure...( Giving her a assuring look)

[Randhir locked the house door, and both drove away in her car]

*Yes, Randhir had been discharged, but was still advised to do some tests weekly, to keep a track on his disorder*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
It was amzng
Eagerly wtng for mystery to unfold
Update soon wtng

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Amazing story loved it...n do update soon
Will be waiting n thnxx for pm :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Nice par plz yar long update karo na ye to bahut chota sa hai
...update

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