Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #5 OS 8 1~7 Link to #6: Pg 1

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Loved the way she said that she wont leave her Devi mayya if anything happens to her Arnavji. Nice update

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Sayali_23

@Sayali_23

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#312

awww Smitajiii rulaaa diyaaa aap ne tohhh...

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#313

the way khushi didnt cry and she was saying that i am too stubborn...

that was really superb scene..
looking fwd to it..

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#314

so all is well in arshi's paradise that's great . what a relief

but why did u stopped there no dear u can't do that to us pls pls continue soon

THANK U for such a wonderful story

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Nice Arnav is fine. want to know what sankadevi and laad governer will talk about in the hospital bed.

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Arnav scared the hell out of khushi.

One more loss khushi wouldn't have beared. Her belief that nothing will happen to her Arnavji is her strength .

This accident helped her to know that ASR has already become her heart beat which will stop without him.

Nice

Loved it

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Jyothi

@Jyo.Arshi.IPK

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#317

can I die and go to heaven ??? !!! Omg smita that was the most beautiful and intense update of this story ! And Khushi's words left me choked ... Her love for him runs so deep and finally its been revealed ! Stunning update ! I love it sooo much !

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#318

oh smita, you shouldn't have stopped there dear - u r such a tease

lovely lovely update

loved it to the core

rashmi, 🤗

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cosmina

@cosmina

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#319

i think you should considerate that among the readers are people with many years on their shoulders,like i am,and those endings ''on the edge''may be very dangerous for them!!!! and if their hearts is so up,with high,very high ,blood pressure level,maybe they don't live till the end of this wonderful story!😔

still,maybe now,with so many injury,he will need more kisses. for heal,of course😆

thank you for update!🤗