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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SWA1992

Amazing... plz update jaldi

thank u dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 10

Karan-ur special student

Rd-what rubbish,apna dimag na zyada mat chala theek hai

Karan-haan,haan waise bhi gf tere liye ladki dekhne ki baat kar rahi thi mujhse

Rd[wide eyed]-what?pls pls abhi nahi

Karan-to chal bata

Rd-kya bataon yaar,woh abhi bacchi hai

Karan-really,agar tum dono chaho to abhi ek baccha paida kar sakte ho,to yeh dialogue mat maar

Rd-yuk yaar tu bada gutter minded hai,and pls u r talking abt my student in an inappropriate way

Ok,so just stop it

Karan-chal chal chup kar,aise bol raha hai jaise tu to kuch karega hi nahi agar woh

Maan gayi to

Rd-i think u r drunk

Karan-oey,i haven't even touched it,ok...aur agar tune nahi accept kiya to

Phir mein ladkiyan dekhna shuru karta hoon

Rd-ok fine i have a LIKING towards her,listen bro its not LOVE ok,right now

Its just an affection,ok...so just chill

Karan-hmmm

For a few mins they didn't talk but then

Karan-waise rd affection ko LOVE mein badalne mein time nahi lagta

Rd-oh god yeh

Rd stops the car as they have reached the house

Rd-nikal yaar nikal,i can't tolerate u anymore

Karan-haan haan ab to bas apni student ko tolerate kar sakta hai

Saying so he runs out of the car and rd rests his head on the stearing wheel

Here sanyukta takes samar with her to their apartment she lights her phone's torch and

Goes to the kitchen brings candle and lights it

Samar-di...

No response

Samar-di suno na

Sanyu-kya hai?

Samar- are you angry with me?

Sanyu-yes i m,how could u samar,woh mere professor hai and u talked like that

In front of him,u are not a child samar,u called him my bf,chi it was soo

Embarrassing

Samar-oh c'mon di app kyu itna hyper ho rahi ho,sir ko toh koi problem nahi hua

And waise bhi hum log aise hi mazak karte the jab woh school aae the

He is such a cool dude

Sanyu-yeah right

Samar-what right,he is actually a cool dude,but you know hamare school ki saari teachers

Unhi ke peeche padi thi aur hamari senior girls bhi "sir" "sir"[immitating them]

Karke unke peeche padi thi[samar laughs all by himself]oh god di apko rd

Sir ka chera dekhna chahiye tha jab ek teacher ne unka autograph manga

woh bhi apne haath par,hahahahahaha

Sanyu-hmmm,college mein bhi yahi hai

She sets herself on the couch with a sandwich in her hand

Samar-but u know,rd sir is such a nice person di,unhone hamari help bhi to ki

Sanyu-bas bas chup karo,bohot kar rahe ho rd sir yeh,rd sir woh and Mr.samar aggarwal

Jab mein tumhare bal galti se chooti hoon to tum mujhse ladte ho and now

When he did that u were giggling

Samar-yep because he is different

Sanyu-whatever,jaldi jake brush ur teeth and go to bed

Samar-mujhe rd sir se baat karni hai,u know what is road rush

Sanyu[not showing any interest]-nope,kya hai?

Samar-di its the fastest car in india jo rd sir ne khud design ki hai but u know india ki

Road mein aise cars chalani bohot mushki hai kyuki 100 se kam to isko

Chalana bohot mushkil hai but apko pata hai second day of scholarship

Rd sir uss car mein hamare school aae and he took me and raj for a ride in it

[he jumps with excitement clapping his hands],it was such an awesome ride

Sanyu-samar u went out with a stranger without informing me

Samar-oh c'[mon di u know that rd sir is a gentlemen and mein apko apni

Apni ride ke baare mein bata raha hoon aur app hai ki yeh sab pooch rahi

Ho,u r soo uninteresting,mein rd sir se baat karne jaa raha hoon

He takes his phone and dials rd no,rd picks up the call on the 3rd ring

Samar-rd sir,its me samar

Sanyukta could hear rd speaking from the other side

Rd-hey champ,whats up

Sanyu[imitating rd]-hey champ whats up,my foot

She stomps her foot on the floor and goes to the kitchen for cleaning the utensils

And samar was laughing talking and was hell excited while talking with him

Sanyukta was drying the kitchen counter when her phone rings it was flashing vids calling

Vids-hey sanyu,kya kar rahi hai

Sanyu-woh kitchen saaf kar rahi thi

Vids-aur samar?

Sanyu-arrey yaar pooch mat ajj rd sir ghar aae

Vids-ooo

Sanyu-what ooo,sun yaar

Vids-accha bol

Sanyu-woh meine bataya na ki samar ko scholarshiop mili,woh sir ki

Comapny ne di thi...and now he is talking

On the phone with his idol and u know what he called me uninteresting

Vids-amm sanyu mujhe waha se kuch jalne ki smell aa rahi hai

Sanyu-yaha se

She checks her kitchen and thn stops when she was abt to go to the hall

Sanyu-accha to tujhe yaha ki smell waha tak aa rahi hai

Vids-hehehe,bewakoof u were sounding jealous

Sanyu-i m not being jealous ok

Vids-yes you are,arrey yaar rd bhai to aise hi hai,he loves children very much

And u know he loves girls more than boys and he used to bring toys for me when

I was of samar's age,zara soch tab kya meri toys se khelne ki umar thi

I was more like a bro to me than my real bro

All this while sanyu was smiling but her trance was broken by samar's continuous

Cough

Sanyu-vids samar ko phir se cough aa rahe hai,mein baad mein baat karti hoon

Vids-ok lekin usse doc ke paas le jana hoga to?i m not at home yaar

Tu kaise jaegi

Sanyu-its ok,mein dekhti hoon

She hungs up the call fills a glass with water and goes to samar who was coughing

Continuously

She goes near him and pats his back samar points to his phone on the floor

She takes it and was abt to cut it when she hears rd's voice

Rd-hey champ,champ what happened,hey u listening me

Samar's cough seizes for a few mins and he drinks the water

Sanyu-hello

Rd-sanyukta,what happened to champ why was he coughing

Sanyu-sir woh nothing sir woh continuously baat karne se hua

But here samar again starts coughing badly

Sanyu-sir samar will cal u later sir

She keeps the phone on the table and forgot to cut the call

Sanyu-chalo samar we'll go the docter uncle,mein taxi bulati hoon,u just inhale sharply

Rd hears it and cuts the call

Rd-taxi,itni raat ko?

He gets off his bed and goes to the washroom

Here sanyukta comes back as watchman wasn't able to get any of their trusted drivers

She goes to the washroom where samar was throwing up and his cough fits were

Over but he started vomiting,sanyukta was unable to think what to do,she was panicked

Sanyu-oh god what will i do

She takes her purse and phone and thn opens the door but stops on her track

Sanyu-sir app

Rd-what happened samar kaha hai

Sanyu-he is vomiting sir,i tried to get a transportation but kuch nahi mila

Rd-oh god

He goes to the washroom following the voice made by samar throwing up

Rd-champ

He goes to him pats his back and soon samar stops vomiting,rd washes samar's face

And takes him in his arms and makes him sit on the couch

Rd-sanyukta bring a glass of water

She does so

Rd makes samar drink that and thn again lifts him and starts walking towards

The door

Rd-sanyukta,lock ur apartment we are taking him to the hospital

Sanyu-yes sir

Soon they were in car with sanyu on the back seat with samar and rd driving

Rd-is he suffering from cold or smt becoz earlier i felt nothing like that

Sanyu-no sir

Rd-thn why all of a sudden he started coughing

Sanyu-he is a patient of pertussis

Rd-what! U mean whooping cough?

Sanyu-yes sir

Rd-wasn't he given vaccine for that

On that questoin her mind drifted to a few sounds

S1-suniye,hame samar ko doctor ke paas leke jana hai kal

S2-haan yaad hai,suno mein zara ek meeting attend karke aata hoon

S1-theek hai to mei bhi chalti hoon mejhe mall mein drop kardena

S2-chalo

Suddenly rd stops the car and she come out of her trance

Rd-we reached

Sanyu-hmm

They step out of the car and suddenly samar open his eyes and was happy to see rd

And was abt to say smt but starts coughing again

Rd-hey champ easy,come lets go

They go inside the hospital.


how was it guys,so samar is suffering from whooping cough,so what u guys have to say abt it..poor samar hey but rd for their rescue but sanyu encountered her past

so guys i would love if u guys could tell me what u guys have to say all abt it and pls do

hit the like button if u think it deserves one😊

love

pari

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Aww rd cme to the rescue
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally yr u updated
I was wtng for it so long


Superb as alwz
Loved it



Karan teasing rd
He's too much
Poor rd he was so awkward



Awww sanyu getting jeko of rd closeness with samar

Samar n rd bonded so well
Rd really loves him so much


Vids making fun of sanyu


Omg Samar ko whopping cough
Poor guy

Thank God rd was there
Sanyu k past
Those sounds I guess belongs to her parents

Excited for next
Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome story...read in one go!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh soo much happened!!!
I think samar will b the link between sandhir...
n really want to know more abt sanyu's past
plzz continue soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
yeehhh. Randhir reached to help themm..feeling bad for samar...
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting turn of events
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
poor samar hope he will be fine soon
thank god rd came to help her
thanx for pm
continue asap :)))
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Posted: 10 years ago
What to say everything was awesome
Poor samar
And sanyu's past everything is becoming
More and more intresting
Update asap
Thanks fr the pm

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