SS: With you..... 'Hamesha' New Thread/pg- 132

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Arshi SS: With you... "Hamesha"


PLOT



Basically, it will be from show after Sheetal's entry.
There'll be few changes like:

1) Sheetal's son name will ne changed from Aarav to Abhi (Abhinav).


2) After staying sometime in Shantivan, Anjali asks Sheetal and her son to stay in Shantivan only as they don't have any other friends or relatives in Delhi. Sheetal tried to deny fakely than gets agreed.


3) Though Arnav wanted to deny but because of Anjali he didn't say anything, he can see Anjali being happy because of Sheetal's son after Shyam's deceit.



4) Sheetal is working with Arnav in office and try to make him feel that Khushi is not perfect for him according to his Status.


Note: I was not happy with this track in show, so I thought to write something which could have been used better in Sheetal track.



And all of you know I always keep Khushi educated in all my stories but here case will be different, she is not highly educated in this story.



Prologue




When today Arnav asked Khushi to get ready for party she wanted to deny but kept quite because she was scared of his reaction. She was lost in thinking when reason of her messed up life entered inside her room.


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Khushi: Arnav ji! I don't want to go in party.
Arnav: Why? What happened Khushi?
Khushi: Nothing serious! I was having headache today and not in mood to go there.
Arnav(concerned): Why didn't you told me before? Ok we'll not go anywhere, Khushi looked at him with wide eyes.



Khushi: No! You should go. I am ok, I will sleep for sometime and feel better.
Arnav: But how can I leave you alone when you are in pain?
Khushi: You are saying like I am suffering from some serious disease, its just headache.
Arnav: Shut up! Think before you speak Khushi. I'll not let anything happen to you.



Khushi: I know! I'll be ok you should go and Sheetal ji will be alsO there with you.
Arnav: Are you sure?
Khushi: Yes!
Arnav: But...
Khushi: Go now! Sheetal ji must be waiting, Arnav nodded.
Arnav: Take care ! I'll try to come back soon and kissing her forehead he left missing the single tear which left from her eye.


Note: There was no football match nor Khushi did any DNA test



To be continued...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX

Plot and Prologue: Above
Chapter 1: 115040734
Chapter 2: 115364543
Chapter 3: 116265701
Chapter 4: 116570561
Chapter 5: 116770887
Chapter 6: 117054821
Chapter 7: 117750008
Chapter 8: 118747898
Chapter 9: 119214683 119214766
Chapter 10: 119889622
Chapter 11: 121433762
Chapter 12: 122314209

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Edited by arshiforever92 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start
pls cont soon
pm me pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start
Plz continue it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hmmm this one i would love to read
sheetal track i really didnt like how they screwed it up big time
lets see what happens in this one
arnav hope you dont lose your wife mate
be careful of that witch sheetal please
he cant tell whats bothering her
why this headache
hope wont be too late
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb loved it
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start...
loved it...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved plot and prologue.. with you on the journey to explore ARSHI relation with entry of mean shit all with her fake son.. best wishes and happy writing 😃

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hmm..Interesting take on Sheetal track.
Though I hated this track in d show..it kinda spoiled the essence of Arshi's love story.
But lookin forward to ur version :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice.. pls continue soon
and send pms
thanks

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