DARK & MATURE SANDHIR FF- welcome to hell...UPDATED PART 7- 30/10/

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_Angel_love_

@_Angel_love_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Hey! Janavi

lovely n awesome update

lovely, nicely n beautifully written

love it to the core

Very well you've described the scenario

Feeling bad for Sanyu

there must b a strong reason

behind this things..which he's doing

continue ASAP

Eagerly waiting

Thanks for pm

love

Bushra

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Karishma Sewani

@AnIndianWriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Paravi

Thanks a lot karishma ..!!
Just saw your signature...
Going to see it

Do let me know what you think about it! I need your honest review! :*

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Janavi

@Paravi

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

Do let me know what you think about it! I need your honest review! :*

It was very nice..!!
Especially the tag line...!!
Loved it..!! I have also joined..!!
Is there any way we can be friends??

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Congratulations for new thread👏

Awesome update👏

The way you explained everything detail was very scary😲

Poor sanyu, she is trapped badly😭

Randhir is really a dark person in this ff😲

Waiting for next part

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Anushka Mukherjee

@2019_AnushkaM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

res

unres

its really superb awesome superb lovely fab.

poor sanyu. you describe every situation superbly.

everything was just amazing and scary.

its very dark ff just awesome.

love it. update. asap.😃

Edited by sudipto-69 - 10 years ago

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Sanya Goel

@CrazyKupKakes

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

OMG janavi u know what

U r one of the most awsm writers I've ever met

Although we have not met 😆But truly

So beautifully penned and described

U nailed it girl

👏

Salute u girl for these awsm thoughts

But u know what u made a mistake

Randhir is bad just for now but when he'll fall in love with sanyu then he'll become the sweetest

Really hats off and please give us quick updates

Becuase i don't think i will Be able to survive this ff

Do u want me to die ??

😊No na then updte soon

Thnx a ton dear for the pm😆

P.S - i know i am a little lame and crazy so plz bear my comments 🤣

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-chocoangel-

@-chocoangel-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Ress

Unresss not 😆

Bohot jldi aayi na i know well not my fault only said to take my time main to 3 4 months k baad unressing ka soch rahi thi phir socha kar hi deti hu

Arghhh u almost burst ma eardrums thats why

Ufff tum log iss maasoom si nanhi si jaan k peeche hi pad gaye ho to kya karu

Ok ok ab mujhe mera kaam karne do dont distrurb😉

1st chappy padhk i was like this😃

Awsum chalo she brokup with her bf rd ka line clear h

Vids luv u muaaah

Club n all awsum

Ghosh i thought that waiter was rd hehehe

Omg omg i know i know that guy is rd yes i know

2nd chappy padhk i was like this😲

Yesss that guy is rd yesss

Omg rd such a flirt eeeks kisss

Ghosh their dance ufff hawwwt

Arghhh his frnds i guess the guy who made sanyu uncomfortable was karan

Omg they r going for one night stand ufff chalo sanyu ka mind kaam karne laga

Btw she too is attracted towards him

3rd chappy i was like this

O.m.g. just one word

Rd ko buraaa kyu banaaya

Heck she doesnt want this hope rd leaves her

Omg he didnt gawwwd he wanna **** her nooo

All her attemps in vain

Rd u r soo wicked he is playing with her

Omg omg omg he really ****ed her did he no no no i guess at last he will leave her

Plz plz plz ipdate sooon

Imma so scared

Moi nail biting

Agar jldi update nhi kiya to main tumhaare eardrums burst kar i will shout in ur ear to update soon

UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH

Edited by pritha072angel - 10 years ago

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harshita singh

@oshinchaudhary

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Cnt wait to read d next chappy...
Do updated soon...
chapter ws awsome...

Luv
harshita

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Janavi

@Paravi

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Param_love
Hey! Janavi
lovely n awesome update
lovely, nicely n beautifully written
love it to the core
Very well you've described the scenario
Feeling bad for Sanyu
there must b a strong reason
behind this things..which he's doing
continue ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Thanks for pm
love
Bushra

Thanks bushra ..! Glad u liked it..!!

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Janavi

@Paravi

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: katheriene

Congratulations for new thread👏
Awesome update👏
The way you explained everything detail was very scary😲
Poor sanyu, she is trapped badly😭
Randhir is really a dark person in this ff😲
Waiting for next part

Thanks a lot dear