DARK & MATURE SANDHIR FF- welcome to hell...UPDATED PART 7- 30/10/

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Manal

@Thriller123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Wow it was an awesome update continue soon eagerly waiting for the next part😊

Edited by Thriller123 - 10 years ago

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priiy

@priiy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

you really justified the topic.

i read ll your updates in one go...it was fab..

please do pm me when you update

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Namrata91

@Namrata91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

O... It was superb awsome... Lovely...
Why randhir do this ?...
Do resolved their misunderstanding...
Do continue

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MeherS

@MeherS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Shit he is a rapist...chii yuk
i serously wonder how will dis turn into a love story...
post nxt asap

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Liana

@Lianaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Omg !! What ?? :O

Again???

When will he really stop this shi* ???

Please focus on randhir more now.. i want to know his past etc..

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Karishma Sewani

@AnIndianWriter

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Loving this chapter way alot!
Rape isn't justified a human activity. It is a inhuman activity. and I really am growing vengeance towards rapers. The way you are bringing out her feelings and pain is just amazing. I could literally imagine how would she have felt. I am really loving your write-up enthusiasm.
I would suggest you to now unveil the reason behind Randhir's this dark behaviour. I think he tries to look dark, but inside, he isn't.
I would want you to also write according to randhir's POV.
I am very curious behind his reason to treat sanyukta this way.

You're doing really great, and are a wonderful writer!
Continue soon please, thanks for pm'ing.

Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3

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Prishi

@ArshaParsh

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Paravi

Chup kar ..!! Abhi Unres kar

Le kar diya.. 😛

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-chocoangel-

@-chocoangel-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Paravi

Ro Matt Unres kar...!!
Dekhte hai Kaun jeetega...!!
Aa dekhe Zara kisme kitna hai dum

Kar diyaaa

Dekhleee padh le agar padh sako to

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Janavi

@Paravi

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: ArshaParsh
Res

Unres...
Teri toh mujhe keh rahi thi parso update.. 😡
Ther tujhe abbhi dekhti hu...
Aisi halaat karungi na... Wahi rukiyo 🤢
Anyways coming to the update...
That was so hot and steamy...
Damn man.. 😉 kitna achaa likhti ho..😳
Kuch gyaan aur readers humare FF ke liye chood diya karo.. 😉
Anyways agar kal tak ekaur update nahi milina to tum pakka nahi milogi..
Just Kidding yaar... I ❤️ U sooo much!!!
Lekin jaldi update..
Aur wait nahi kar sakti..
Love you Bae
Prishi

Mummmyyy mujhe bachao..!!
Ek toh Maine Tere kehne par update diya aur fir mujhe hi Bol Rahi
Hai...!! Gandi Bachi..!! Dekh lungi tujhe.. Ab tu apna update de
For tujhe Mera milega... Haha .. Thanks a lot dear
Love you tooo
Janavi

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Prishi

@ArshaParsh

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: Paravi

Mummmyyy mujhe bachao..!!
Ek toh Maine Tere kehne par update diya aur fir mujhe hi Bol Rahi
Hai...!! Gandi Bachi..!! Dekh lungi tujhe.. Ab tu apna update de
For tujhe Mera milega... Haha .. Thanks a lot dear
Love you tooo
Janavi

mene to ao a update de diya..
Lekin mujhe to teri tara comment ki baarish nahi hoti hi...
Isiliye update karne pe tujhe pata nahi chalta..