New Arshi SS:Together Forever:Update Part 2 on Page 2 on 15/10/14

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Hey guys I m new here.Its the first time i am trying something on writing.Please like because as per it I will decide whether I should continue the story or not.Please do give your views and comments. Its a SS on our most favourite couple Arnav and Khushi.

Prologue

A girl, in her bridal red dress was sitting in front of the hawan mandap,staring at the extinguished sacred flame without blinking.She was looking like an angel..white skin,green big doe like hazel eyes,small button nose..even though she was not having a single expression on her face..just a drop of tear at the end of her cheeks..still she looked beautiful and breathtaking...just like a angel.

A women in her early 50s came up to her said,"Betiyaa please get up,he is not going to come..please its too late...its no use now..everything is finished."
The girl said,"No amma he said he will never leave me...he is going to come amma i have full faith and trust on him..i know he will come...to marry me..to take me with him...he said he will always be with me no matter what...that will be together always..hamesha."

So this is the prologue.Its just the glimpse of what will be happening and has happenend already in the story.I will post the full details of all the happenings when i start writing the story.Till then do give me your views and opinions whether should I continue the story or not and what can I do to make it more better.

Thank You.

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Index
1.Prologue-Page1
2.Part 1-Page 2= http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4191178&TPN=2
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Nice start
So she is waiting for him at altar
Continue soonish please 😊
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thank u..i'll try to continue as soon as possible.:)
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nice start...i alwys luv to read remarriage stories😊...
update part 1 soon
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waiting for story to unfold
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Thank u. I'll try and update as soon as possible.
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Part-1
In New York

A girl in her early twenties wearing a light pink saree was hurriedly working in the kitchen. Her hazel green eyes were uplifting every minute to look at the clock hanging just on the opposite wall. Suddenly she shouted, "Arush, get up common or otherwise you will be late for school. Its already 7:30." She shaked her head as more 10 minutes passed and there was no sign of anyone coming out of the room. She quickly finished her work and hurried to the room at the corner.

The whole room was painted in sky blue and lots of toys were scattered everywhere. One could say that you have actually entered a small toy store. On one side was a huge french style window from where one can enjoy the beauty of nature and just adjacent to it was a large king size bed where every thing was of blue colour, bue bedsheets, blankets, pillows side table and what not. Just opposite side of the bed on the wall were large posters of batman, superman,etc. And currently on the bed was a small heap of something or say someone which was covered completely with the blanket.

Just as the girl was going to remove the blanket another girl tall, fair black gold eyes came insise and said," Are u ready Khushi? Great, your handsome hunk is still not up right. Very good this is the third time we will be late for our office. Will your cutepie ever gonna get up on time??"

Khushi annoyingly replied,"Good morning Lavanya. And you dont need to worry it will be only me who will be late and as usual you will go to walk on some ramp that to beacause the boss of our company is your great friend and he consider me as a lazy person just because I dont reach on time sometimes and you always get away with some or the the excuse and I have to bear his wrath everytime." She saud pouting.

Lavanya replied,"O my cutie pie like everyday I'll help yoi to get away with him. I will manofy him easily dont worry. But we can only do that if we reach office and looking ay the way your handsome hunk is sleeping I dont think we will be able to reach office today."
"Lavanya,stop it!!". Khushi said hitting Lavanya lightly on her shoulder. "Ok ok, possessive woman, wake him up and come down soon otherwise no one will be able to save us from being thrown out of KT Associations office and dumped on the street. I'll set the breakfast on table till then otherwise your cutepie will eat by brain." "Fine i m going, no need to give me those killing looks." said Lavanya looking at the way Khushi was staring at her and ran out of the door laughing. And soon Khushi's mouth also broke into a smile as she muttered "Pagal."
Khushi then turned towards the bed and removing the blanket said,"Arush get up you will be late its already 8." Thus came into view a body of a child of about 3-4 years lying on his back with his mouth a liitle open. His body was covered with blue sleeping suit and he had a fair baby milk skin,long lashes pink lips. He replied again covering himself with the blanket."Just 5 minutes more Mumma!""No Arush get up now or Mumma will use her special trick." Khushi said closing his half opened mouth and started tickling him. Arush's tingling laughter filled the room and for Khushi it was the most beautiful musical thing in the world. "Ok ok I am up please stop tickling me." Arush replied taking deep breaths between his laughter. Khushi stopped and Arush got up from the bed and folding his hands on his chest and pouting his cute pink lips opened his eyes and looked straight into and mother's eyes and said,"Thats not fair Mumma!!" Khushi breath caught between her lungs and her heart stopped beating for a second or two as she stood there stunned and dazzed looking straight into her son's eyes. They were completely like him. Everytime she looked in son's eyes it was like she was standing in him.They seem to be looking right through her soul. Just like his eyes used to do read her in and out. Everything of Arush was like her his nose, his colour, his moves except his anger and eyes. They were just like him. Molten chocolate brown which used to melt her by just looking at her once intensely.

She was completely lost in thoughts of him when Arush kept his small arms around her neck amd kissed her cheeks,"Good morning Momma, aren't we getting late now. I think we should get going or else we will be caught in between largeee New York's traffic and you would scold me." Arush said innocently a d smiling mischieviously blinking his lashes innocently. "You little monkey. come on get ready quickly before your Lavanya Aunty takes up whole house on her head." Khushi said smiling and both started laughing loudly.

In Delhi

A man was sitting on his cabin and tying furiously in his laptop.Just then there was a knock on his cabin door knock and a voice came " May I come in Sir."
The man replied,"Yes, come in."
Just then three men entered in the cabin. Two were wearing three piece suit while one was wearing leather black jacket and jeans.
One of the man said," Bhai congrats we hav got the tender of the New York contract but,"
The man on the chair cut in angrily,"But what you know na I dont like to hear no from anyone,Akash."
Another man said,"Its not the contract but the conditions with the contract Sir!"
"What conditions Aman??"the man on the chair asked.
"The condition says that all the members involved in the contract have to come sign and stay in New York till the project and all the work related to it is completed successfully. And we back out now we will half to pay a huge fine and a case will be filed against the head of the company that is you Arnav."
Arnav cringed a little as he heard NK call him Arnav instead of Nannav.Its been four and a half years since NK is calling him Arnav but still dont why this always hurt him as he always uses to tell NK to call him Arnav but now when he is calling him that it irritates him now. Still he avoided that and said,"What the hell are you saying NK, I didn't knew about any such conditions. How come they are included in the contract?"
"Its the truth ASR we have to go there and I suggest we should go there otherwise it will be a huge back down for AR corps."said Aman.
"Fine if we dont have any choice then what can we do but find out who the hell made those changes and why. We all will be going there. Akash and NK pack your bags and inform the house that we are going for a business deal to New York."
"Aman who is the other company working on this project with us Aman??"asked Arnav.
"Its KT assosiations"replied Aman.
"Ok arrange for the private jet immediately and inform everyone of the situation. Its one of the biggest deals and I dont want any problems,understood."ordered Arnav.
"Yes ASR all things will be done on time dont worry."said Aman.

Precap: Arnav in New York and in KT associatons.



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Edited by svg98 - 10 years ago
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so he did'n come at time😭
loved it... want to read more😳
please continue😳

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