Dark/mature Sandhir ff- welcome to hell..!!chap 2 updated 15/10/14

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Janavi

@Paravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: newmoon18
The update was superb yr
Moi luved it to the core

The story is super intrstng
N dat too dark
Super excited

Sanyu broke up wid her bf now getting over it
N to get rid of bartender she said she had a bf
Now she's totally drunk

What is going to hppn
Cnt wait to see yr

Plz update soon
Eagerly wtng

Luv u yr
Keep smiling 😊

Thanks Rashi...!!

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Mohini

@Mahi2012

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Hey jan dear Stryline of dis ff iz really convincing. 👏👏👏
Loved it. 😊😊
M abs in. Luking frwrd. 😊

Sanyu n kabir were in relationship!!!! 😲

Achha hi hua break up ho gaya.
I loved sanyu n vids' friendship. 😊
Who's that barman!!!
N who's dat other guy to whom sanyu ws pointing as her bf.
Hope so itz none othr than rd. 🤔

Waiting 4 d nxt part.
continue asap.

Love,
Mahi ❤️

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Mohini

@Mahi2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Paravi

Kisi ko nahi kiya...!! Will pm tomorrow with another update

K m sryyy janu

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Janavi

@Paravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Mahi2012

K m sryyy janu

Its okay..

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Janavi

@Paravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Mahi2012
Hey jan dear Stryline of dis ff iz really convincing. 👏👏👏
Loved it. 😊😊
M abs in. Luking frwrd. 😊

Sanyu n kabir were in relationship!!!! 😲

Achha hi hua break up ho gaya.
I loved sanyu n vids' friendship. 😊
Who's that barman!!!
N who's dat other guy to whom sanyu ws pointing as her bf.
Hope so itz none othr than rd. 🤔

Waiting 4 d nxt part.
continue asap.

Love,
Mahi ❤️

Thanks mahi...!!
Glad u liked it...!!
And I also hope ki randhir ho... 😛

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Janavi

@Paravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting plot😉
Continue soon

Thanks...

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_Angel_love_

@_Angel_love_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Hey! Janavi

Big hug to you 4 writing...A DARK ff..❤️

Its my favourite...Moi love 2 read Dark ff😳

Coming to ur update

lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,

lovely, lovely update n concept dear

Lovely, nicely and beautifully written

love it to the core❤️

Very well you've described the scenario

That guy is non other than Randhir😳

Its going to be interesting very interesting😉

Keep it up

Update ASAP

Eagerly waiting

Thanks for pm

Love

Bushra🤗

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himaniagrawal12

@himaniagrawal12

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

nice concept

looking forward for next

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Archana Kannan

@archakan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

really interesting... eagerly waiting for next part... pls update soon...

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Karishma Sewani

@AnIndianWriter

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

OMG! This really is amazing! the story line is pretty much awesome! I loved the whole concept where vidushi being sanyukta's bestie is helping her to get out of her ex-boyfriend's miserable memories! Loving how sanyukta got wasted and drunk and when the barman asked her about her boyfriend's whereabouts, and when she pointed at some random man, I am sure that man is Randhir! OMG!
This really is gonna be so amazing! I am already loving vidushi and sanyukta's bond!
In short, loved the chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Continue soon!
Thanks for pm"ing!
Keep writing.

Love,
Karishma. :* <3