...Because You Are Mine....-A Sandhir FF part 6 updating soon - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnks..will sure continue
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lovely concept dear continue soon 😊
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IT WAA REALLY SOUNDING AWESOME..
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Originally posted by: anu_anya

lovely concept dear continue soon 😊

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Originally posted by: Paramharshita

IT WAA REALLY SOUNDING AWESOME..
Keep writing...
Update soon.. Do PM me.. Thnkx fOR PM..
#ZUMI ^_^

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dhruvi di its awesome and interesting concept
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sry for the late reply.
awesome start yar...plz continue soon
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Originally posted by: cuteparsh

dhruvi di its awesome and interesting concept
continue soon
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Originally posted by: SWA1992

sry for the late reply.
awesome start yar...plz continue soon

Are its ok swati di...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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...Because You Are Mine...

first of all thnks all for such a nice response...ur comments really enciurages me...nd i dedicate this part to my dear makku aka mahak who made a beautiful banner for me...

guys pls spare me bcuz i hvnt proof read yet...
so here u go...
happy reading...

Part - 1

MUMBAI...

a tall handsome nd sweet looking boy entered a house...i will say a beautiful house...he knows very well the thing he was finding is where...he jst goes to a room...open the door without knocking...the room was huge...beautiful...in the center there was a king size bed...there was a shelf in which there were books plus dvds...in short it was a library kind of thing..there were all durjoy dutta nd cgetan bhagat books...there were all ranbir kapoor's movies dvds...that guy jst saw that shelf nd smiled...nd beside the shelf there was a study table...on it books were there wid laptop...but the thing or the person he was finding was not there...then immidiately he opened the door of the balcony...there was a bamboo swing..on that swing a beautiful girl was sitting...she was very beautiful...innocent...jise dekte hi pyar ho jae...she was wearing a pink top nd black shorts..here eyes were closed nd she was smiling...she was listening something...her headphones were on...she was continuously smiling...that guys saw the girl...now the guy was smiling too...then he taps her shoulder...

guy : sini...sini...
girl : kya h chanku...
guy : mera nam parth h yar..ye chanku to bachpan ka nam h...
girl : ha to mera nam b sanyukta h ye sini sini kya laga raka h...
nd they both started laughing...
sanyukta : chanku teri packing ho gai??...
parth : nahi sini yar...abi thoda baki h...
sanyukta : chal...i will help u...m done wid my packing...
parth : aunty ne teri help ki hogi...
a lady ( from behind ) : chanku tu to janta hi h sini ko...iska sara kuch muje hi dekhna hota h ...
parth : ha aunty...muje pata hi tha...
sanyukta : kya maa...ap b na...ap meri ma ho ya is chanku ki?...
anju : me tum dono ki maa hu...ab ja ise help kr packing me...
parth : chal sini...
sanyukta : ha...tu ja..i m coming...wese b tera ghar to yahi h...u r my neighbour naa...
parth : ha thik h...
then parth goes to his home which is jst beside sanyu's...

at parth's home...
parth was packing his clothes...tabi use ek call ata h...
parth : hello...
guy : karan bol raha hu...
parth : ha bol na karan...
karan : abi abi me randhir se mil k a raha hu...randhir nd riddhima both into AIMS nd sini nd u both r going the same clg...thts why m calling u bro...
parth : sun karan...sini ko is bare me kuch nai pata hona chahie...i will take care of the things...u jst make sure k sini ko kuch pata ba chale...
karan : thik h bhai...all the best to u nd sini..
parth : thnks bhai...
then karan hung up...tabi sanyukta waha ati h...
sanyukta : chal ab chanku...lets start ur packing...
parth : when r we leaving ..??
sanyukta : tomorrow morning...8 am...dad ke driver hume drop kr denge...to puna..
parth : okk...

nxt day they both bid good bye to their parents...both mothers were crying bcuz their children r going...nd both dads were soothing them...parth nd sanyukta were on their way to puna...their clg was not excatly in puna...it was at outskirts of puna...the clg was at place named pimpri...they both were on their way...

sanyukta's pov...

i m so happy today...finally i m going away...m going away from selfish ppls...m going away frm my past...ab muje un dono k faces dekhne ki kabi b zaroorat nahi padegi...finally 1sal pehle jo kuch b hua...me use bhula sakungi...m very much happy ...nd the other reason behind my happiness is that k chanku is coming along wid me...the way he has supported me in all the situations...he is indeed my bestest frnd...

no one's pov...
parth : are sini..kaha kho gai??
sanyukta : kahi nahi...
parth : jab se hum peda hue tab se tuje janta hu...muje pata chalta h tu kab kya sochti h...ab bata kaha khoi hui thi??...
sanyukta : nahi kuch nahi...
nd she passed a smile nd parth also smiled back...

after sometime
sanyukta was sleeping...parth was not sleepy...he was looking at sanyukta...
parth's pov...
ye ladki itni innocent h..she has never done anything wrong to anyone..phir b uske sath jo un dono ne kia...nd i dont know ab me ise kese sambhalunga jab ise pata chalega ki wo dono b waha aa raha h...pls god help me...

phew...m done now...
guys hope u all like it
sorry for grammar mistakes
do comment guys...

Buddy me for pms

love
dhruvi
Edited by dhruvi_parsh - 10 years ago

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