KriYaansh ~|| Melancholy ||~ (OS) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks Aishu ! 🤗

And thank you Snigdha dii... You kept your promise ! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written
Awesome

Loved it
Fabulous os

Kriyaansh so loved each other
Rey loved her more than her life
He choose to die rather then losing her

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sobs... Omg this indeed brought tears in my eyes...
It was beautifully written...
Edited by ..ANVESHA.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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We demand a happy one😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishikarajput0

Beautifully written

Awesome

Loved it
Fabulous os

Kriyaansh so loved each other
Rey loved her more than her life
He choose to die rather then losing her

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Thank you so muchh dear !! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..ANVESHA..

Sobs... Omg this indeed brought tears in my eyes...
It was beautifully written...


You know what, am glad for having made you cry !! 🤣

PS. Thanks a lot dear :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snigs.


We demand a happy one😆


Huqum Sar-Aankhon par dii !! 😳
I've begun writing one. Probably, I'll post it by tomorrow. ❤️
Edited by ..MereWhisper.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snigs.


Res.

I will unres by tommorow.

Sorry for d late unres in advance.

Unres.

*sobs*
Awwie!

Why do you have to kill them? :(
I had to. *sobs*

It made me sad.
Me too.

I wouldn't have felt that if the story wasn't connecting.

I could picturise the moments you mentioned in this OS.
I'm obliged. ❤️

Its written very beautifully.
Thank you so very much !! 🤗

Especially the moment where he walks backwards with an increasing smile.
Hmm. Even I find it heart-breakening.

I was hoping he wouldnt die till the last moment.
*sigh*

And then even Kriya eventually died.
*sigh*

But u showed them together again in the end.

In death and life.
They are meant to be. Who am I to separate them? 😃

Loved this One Shot.
*hugs* *kisses* Thanks a lot dii! You don't know how good does it feel.

Do write one happy one too since you made us sad :P
I'm working on it. 😳


You know dii, such warm comments always have a tendency of to filling the receiver with tonnes of encouragement. Thank you so much for taking out time for reviewing this. :* ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --megs_arsha--

res
unres
beautiful n soulful os...
Whole os was so good that I could easily imagine it n got so much attached that I cried from the part rey was sinking...
I could easily imagine his state... Kria's state...
U know vry less stories made me cry n urs did... Keep writing more...


Thank you dear. I'm obliged to know that I could make you relate to this. Thanks for crying over this !!
Thank you Megs !! :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..MereWhisper..



Huqum Sar-Aankhon par dii !! 😳
I've begun writing one. Probably, I'll post it by tomorrow. ❤️


Thanks😃🤗

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