Arjun draupadi ~ The story is yet to come (index n thread link pg 47) - Page 83

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Posted: 10 years ago
Good one Sam, enjoyed reading it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 8520NK

I think it's my commenting day today!

Anyway, I am first, yayieee!👏
Amazing update Sam! Accha opening line of my long chapter like comment will be 'Jai Mata di'😆

"Me ? Jai mata di " he said and before anything further people started attacking them .
I loved this line! Wohoo! *seeti*
This was so action packed! Again we've become like Salman Khan fans!😉
The flashback was beautiful written! I loved it so much! The part where Drishtadhyumna comes to stand by her sister was amazing! And when our hero comes in between and claims her as his! Awww!😳
You aren't bad at all at writing indirect romance too!😃
Aww, our baby Draupadi! She has started to care for Parth and also for herself! She's worried about flying from the bike!😛
Anyway, gets him bandaged! *eeps*
So, Mr. Arjuna in his attitude, huh? Idiot! Can't even understand her care! *sulks*
Come on! Get us romance now! Although we know it's starting but jaldii Karo!😳
You know I am a bhukkad when it comes to romaancee!😆
Update fasttt now! Varnaa!😡
Hahaha! Teri dhamki tujhpe hee!😉 *smirks like ASR*
Sincerely,
Gyaani baba!
P.S. - Jay aur uske gunde toh gaye paani mein*high 5*
*Squeals and claps like little Srutakriti*

thanks Navu for this lovely long comment 😃
Haha thanks 😆 oh ho m I making here Salman 's fan 😆. Thanks , oh indirect romance , I m not bad at that , I m bad at direct one thats why I have not kept any of it 😆
Yes Drau baby sure is caring na . Akhir har bewi apne pati ka care karti hai 😉
That's his way if showing love na 😊 haha romance ki damki ! Nahi meri ma ! Main Tujhe romeo and Juliet wala romance du Kya 😃 romance jaldi ayega . Lol nahi yeh tune Kya kiya 😭
*High five * oh god Sutakriti ! Cutie pie!




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiasaba68

OMG OMG what an update
this was out of the world dear 👏
i can't describe how much i loved it 😃


n what an amazing bike ride... 👍🏼

"Please do not scream like that I m getting negative
thoughts! "Said Arjun laughing out .
"Chiii ! Do u even know what can happen if u drive the
bike in this speed only and u r here joking ? What if
what if something hit us or what if when u apply the
brake I will fly off and then hang on a tree and then die .
"She said in as serious tone but that did not sound
serious for Arjun ." 🤣 these lines r like cherry on the top 4 me


n u don't have to keep it short dear...4 me long updates r something i crave for 😳 😊
n once again i loved the update so much 😃
update soon update soon 😳

Thanks Saba ! And of course will keep long updates and irritate u all 😆 .
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angrani

You didn't PM me gal

Bt lovely update especially when they are on the bike and Arjun says
Shut up kali zuban lol

Songs describe it all lovely

Aww hus bloody hands

BTW where's karn

sorry dear ! I thought that u would not be interested in this one 😳 but thank u for coming here and reading this FF 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angrani

Awwie Reading from chappy one not a big Ardi fan
But gal u won my heart just by including karn in chappy one

Amazing prologue btw wild dreams of panchaali

Arjun abhi grade 12mein kunti maa abhi se shaadi lol

thank u so much dear 😃 love u
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angrani

Awwie cchap3karn arjun bromance love u sammy It was a brand new car which was gifted by his big brother Karn last month in his birthday when he turned seventeen .His brother knew well that he wanted this car if only he knew that how desperate Arjun was to drive it also . Arjun gave a mischievous smile, a new day , a new car and new adventure if his eldest brother Karn would know about this then this was a big problem as though Karn loved Arjun very much and they were each others favourite , Karn was the one who scolded Arjun the most . As it is said na that who loves the most scolds the most similarly though Karn loved Arjun the most and vice versa Arjun feared him the most.



Love u for kaju moments love yaa

thank u dear and of course I love the bromance na 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angrani

Chapp ter 3 part 2
Loved ardi cute fight

Karn again Karna's reply if he found out Arjun had driven the car now he might actually murder him if he found out that he had crashed Arjun was involve in an accident even if it was not his fault at all. Arjun barreled out thinking of giving the driver a piece of his mind. He yelled the driver to step out and see for himself what he had done to his car.

thanks dear 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angrani

Chap 4 n 5 awesome"I did a mistake and that was all . Don't act as though u make no mistake"
"Of course I make mistake but I don' t make such kind of mistake like calling some one Arya" loll
Draupadi really fights like a wife

"What happen Arjun did u see a ghost or m I looking like one. Why are u so serious did u spoil the your day at school or what " asked Karn.
"Umm yes brother I spoiled it"Arjun replied.
"What did u spoil your day or the school?"
"Actually I spoiled my car ."
"Car?" Asked the confused Karn.
" yeah the one u gave me last month "
" how?"
Now this was getting hard. Arjun was scared but not of his brother's anger but of disappointing him . But now he had to speak out the truth any way.
"I thought of driving it today but it crashed with another one and got damaged. But the mistake of another car , I swear. " said Arjun in one go. He then saw his brother ' s expression changing . His heart started to beat at a high speed. He was ready for any kind of punishment. He thought that now he would get scolding but what he saw surprised him totally. He saw a smile forming in Karn's face.

"You r not angry with me ?" He finally asked collecting all his strength .

"No I m not . Though u made a mistake u had the guts to confess it and speak the truth so I m not angry but surprised that it took u so long to confess it "
Arjun finally smiled at they slowly walked out of the room .
"But why did it take u so long to tell me that and why were u so scared . As if I was gonna eat u up or kill u ,m i so strict to you?"asked Karn faking a hurt look.
"No bro no I was just scared that I would hurt you nothing more " replied Arjun though he knew that his brother knew this

Especially then how Arjun teaesd everyone

Haha VRUSHALI Bhabhi hidimbi business partner
Sahadev watching gals instead of books in library

Then karna arjun convo amazingly penned this pg is bookmarked forever

thanks dear 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 25...

ufff u reminded me of kat in bang bang... wwwooiiieeewww tiger paarth to enter it seems... voila..
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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 26

kya tevar hai boss...

ha ha loved his entry... tht bloody jay... tortured over abhi baby's death.. gawwwddd... tiger arjun came to my mind...

drau.. wwwooo. "control drau control" i was saying tht to myself when i read it..

ha ha.. superb yaar

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