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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Awsme
Loved it
Update soon

Keep smiling

thanks 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sankadevimaha

Omg!!! So it ws jay (to be precise jayadrath f dwaparyug?) I cant believe ds..😡😡hw cum he s such a cheap person n kalyug also... idiot kahi ke..😡😡 I am gonna kill him to roots...😡😕 wer s arjun??? 😕Pls cum fast mera hero!!!- Waiting eagerly fr ur dhamakedhar entry nd giv ds idiotic jay a famous punch f urs n ur style dear... 😃

haha punch him umm hmm will surly add that dear 😉 thanks for the idea 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aaila Sautanjee kya updt tha
jai kidnapped my devranijee how dare he😡 nappy pehene ata hai kya usse🤣
mein chodugi nahi usse😡
Jail ke jailer se bhi danger hai hum!😉
chalo jee update jaldi jaldi
nd srryjee for latey latey comment
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

so it was Jay
and you stopped at such a critical point!!
A short but nice update😊
Continue soon...

thank u 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 8520NK

Hey! So finally I am commenting on one of my fav. FFs!👏

All the updates were so awesome Sam! Loved them all!
Yayiee! So I think Subhi and Draupadi are friends now, is it?
The IQ test and the dance competition! Ohhh! That's like SOTY with ArDi!! Bwahaha!😉
BTW I loved Tera hero idhar hai!😆
Awwie, Parth! And I wanted some action yaar! In the same room!😈
Chitra!!! I love her so much! Teasing Draupadi!😉☺️
Sunn tujhe pataa hai I was suspecting that the person is either Jay ya Keechak! Only they could be so pathetic and the reason for which he kidnapped Draupadi!🤢
Now, waiting for the knight is shining armor to come and rescue his princess!😳
I hope Drau is safe!
I am waiting for the update miss filmy! Jaldii Karo ab!😳
Sincerely,
Gyani baba!
P.S. - I can feel that you have taken my advice and the kidnappings track will bring these two close!❤️

fav ff thanks 😳
Yup SOTY with ArDi , I really wanted to write something like that , u know the ishq wala love sequence especially 😆
Action that too in a room , u will get in the next update but not the kind u wish of 😉
You know I was also confused on whom to choose jay or keechak only a moment before writing the chap I decided jay 😆
Shinning armour and coming to save his princess in a horse ? 😕 Agar aise ayega toh Drau ko kahi heart attack nahi aye😆
Miss filmy , thats how my update gonna be 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SethuParvathi

Saammm...I want a bigger update...and as soon as possible...pllleeeaasseee!!! Im eager to read whts gonna happen next!!! I loved dis update!!! But its not even one fourth of ur usual updates!!! Pleaseee...continue soon!!!

thank u di and next one would be long 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 26 - I will never let u fall , even if saving u sends me to heaven
As Jay proceeded towards Draupadi , who moved a bit backwards he smirked at her . It was it , all he had waited for .

His hands were going to touch Drau shirt's button when something stopped his hands in the midway . He looked up to find a person , raising eyebrows at him and giving him a smile . Jay knew he had seen that smile before , the same mocking and challenging smile.

"What's the rush huh ? "

Draupadi quickly opened her eyes hearing the familiar voice , her eyes lit up seeing the person and she smiled broadly .

...

Arjun looked at the person standing in front of him for sometime and then turned back to find Draupadi smiling as if she knew that now nothing would harm her . They shared a eye lock until they were disturbed by a evil laugh . Arjun turned front to find Jay laughing in an evil tone and looked at him weirdly .

The laugh continued for sometime and Arjun , Draupadi and the person kept on looking at Jay confused.

"So we meet again Prince Arjun ! "Jay finally said to everyone's surprise .
"It is good now I know what was I waiting for my whole life , I was waiting for u to avenge my death . "

Arjun looked at him in a confused way . What the heck is he saying ? Prince ...death ... Thinking this he turned back and looked at Draupadi who had the same 'what the heck is he saying' look , now what did she do that she made her kidnapper crazy and confused ,he thought again , she is able to do everything even make her own kidnapper confused enough to loose his mind completely .

No one spoke and again Jay said something , "Remembering my death huh ? I now remember why u had killed me , haha do u remember how I had killed your son huh ? Poor fellow of sixteen "

Again all the three looked at him confused .
Would u stop talking nonsense and do some action , Jay's assistant thought as he sensed his life in danger . I knew I would be stuck up in this kind some situation someday if I stayed with this man .

Whereas on the other hand Arjun had concluded that now the person in front of him was totally out of his mind . Now what my son ? God he has totally lost it , I mean how can I have a son ? That too of sixteen years I should have given birth to when I was just one year in that pretext , god seriously this man has lost it , he is blabbering a film 's plot , I killed him because he killed my son , maybe after a minute he will say that he had tried to kidnap my wife also , thought Arjun as he tried to find the answers. Though confused, a part of Arjun was burning in anger .

"U remember it do u ? Oh how can I forget u were not even there to save your poor son fighting great warriors and dying haha . And the next day u lost your mind right ? "

"Yes and cut your head off in that madness and anger . Don't u remember that Jay ? "Arjun replied . Now confusion left him and anger took over . Slowly present Arjun started to disappear and old Arjun took over him .

Jay looked at him angrily not knowing what to mock him with next whereas Draupadi and the other person could not understand , even their one word was out of their reach .

"Do u know Arjun I could not attend the Hastinapur 's dyuth sabha and when I heard that your wife was dragged into the court and ordered to take off her clothes I really felt bad for not attending it , I mean I really wanted to see her begging face and your guilty face just standing in one corner not being able to even save your wife . But today looks like I got the chance , I'm gonna undress her and u stand there with your head down . Looks like that's why we were born again right ? " jay smirked as he said that looking at Arjun who was as red as a tomato now with anger.
He had just told the thing no one would dare to .

Arjun did not say anything just looked at jay angrily as his every part of body burned with anger . He looked Jay angrily and then before anyone could realise hit him hard on his nose.

...

Jay felt as if he had seen stars in day , before he could sense it he was hit by Arjun . Blood oozed out from his nose with the strong punch he got and before he could do something he was hit again .

"What what did u say ? Undress her ? Touch her ? Even if u go near I would kill you . " and saying this Arjun hit him again . All his anger reached his hands today and his hands took it out on Jay .
He kept on beating him taking all his anger out . The anger that had been suppressed long inside him ,the anger which he could not take out on Jaydrath in his previous life sometimes due to Dharm sometimes for others but today there was no bound . He kept on hitting him, not even giving Jay a chance to breath . Arjun kept on taking out his anger , anger for trying to kidnap his wife , anger for killing his son .

Jay now was more than hurt , he was washed in red due to blood . His clothes had turned half red now due to the blood.
Jay fell down , even finding difficult to open his eyes . His face looked horrible . As jay fell down Draupadi whistled , the sound travelled into Arjun's ears bringing him back . For a moment he stood numb until he realised what had happened . He looked down at Jay who was now a horrible sight to look at .

Arjun suddenly moved a bit back a bit scared seeing the sight in front of him .
He did not remember anything , what happened to him and what he did to the man in front of him ? He knew nothing . He looked around confusedly . He looked at the other man trying to find answer but he was too scared to answer Arjun , instead he quickly untied Drau and let her go .

She quickly ran towards him and in her excitement quickly hugged him . He was first taken aback by the sudden hug but then he was really glad that she was fine that he joined her also .


After sometime they departed realising their surrounding and both turned red .

"You're okay ? "He asked to distract her and him away from the hug thing .

"Yup and Thanks "Draupadi said and Arjun just gave a reassuring smile .

"Wow u seriously got him ! "She said excitedly . "Main janti thi ki tum doli sajake rakhne waalon mein se nahi ho ... thokne waalon mein se ho" she exclaimed , excitement poured out of her voice .
"How did u do that ? "

"Umm I don know "he replied as he truly did not know how he had done that .

"Come on u don need to hide from me , I would not say to anyone "she pleaded in such a tone that if she had asked for his life he would even give it happily .

"I seriously don know anyways we should get going from here . " he said and she nodded .

"By the way how did u find me ? "She asked as they headed out .

"Actually when u were about to leave u dropped my laptop with that u also dropped your phone . I came outside to give it to u when I saw someone taking u , first I thought that it was your driver but just then I saw your driver at the other end of the park way . I just followed the car and now I m here . "

"That means u were here all the time , hearing each and everything ? "

"Yup "

"Then why did not u come fast and just waited jay to take some action making me scared all the time huh ? "She asked angrily .

"I just was checking what was up , the history and background and when I thought it was the right time I showed up and I had to have some hero entry na " he said blinking his eyes .

She smiled as she saw some people coming towards them . They were group of men with hockey sticks and cricket bats , all looked like body builders and they were heading towards their direction .

"Um Arya "Drau called out to Arjun and pointed towards the men coming towards them .

They both gasped as they saw that .

"We should be going "he said .

"But why? can not u beat them ? "She asked innocently .

"U really think I m superman huh ? I can not do that so let's run okay "He said pulling her .

They then hid themselves behind a nearby wall . They could see the men coming towards their direction .

"God that kidnapper 's got a lot of team I see huh . "Arjun said confused on what to do next .

He saw the people coming towards them and he quickly pulled her towards him , too closely enough to hear her breath .
She looked at him surprised and asked in a faint tone ,
"What r u doing Arya ?"

"Sssh they should not see us okay "and saying this he buried his head into her neck and pulled her head towards him .
It took sometime for her to understand what he was trying to do then she got it that he was doing same as in movie . He was trying to show that they were kissing so that no one would see their face .

She just stood like that for sometime , waiting for something to happen . Her heart beat faster every moment passing by , his face sometimes brushed against her neck which made it more worse . She wanted to hug him and kiss him . Control Drau , control , she thought.

Arjun too did not have a easy time , her hot breath tickled his skin . It woke up all his senses and now it was being difficult for him to control. His hormones had started to act now . Control Arjun , control, he thought.

Tune kaandhe pe sar jhukaaya jab
Jaise dargah pe baandhe dhaage tab
Bina maange hi mill gaya hai sab
Meherbaan hua hua
Meherbaan hua hua

...

According the plan the people past them . They quickly got away from each other as they saw the men disappearing cause if they had stood there fsometime more in that position then they would end up to something they did not want to happen .
They sighed in relief and as they were about to leave a person stopped them with a knife , one of the person from the gang .
The person smiled in an evil way just like Jay and was about to take Drau when he got stopped by Arjun .

"Leave the girl and run it would be better for u "the man said to which Arjun smirked .

"If I had to leave her then why would I save her huh ? U get lost from here, it would be better for u "Arjun replied to which the man laughed .

"Better for me huh ? Haha come on get out "he said and was going to stop him when Arjun quickly took the knife away from his hands . Everything happened in a jiffy that not even Drau could realise it .
Arjun quickly cut the man's hand the same that hade moved forward for Drau .
The man screamed in pain and others hearing his voice came running there .

Arjun looked at them and his inner heart shouted , "one down many to go! "

---TBC---

~Spoiler~Hui Main Teri Joganiyan

Hope u all like it and do comment back your opinions . This is not what I had actually planned for, sorry if it was bad . I know it is too long , even the title is long ;) Give back your opinions on how it was . Criticism welcomed .

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ooh! Awesome update Samm!
So the knight in shining armor rescued his princess! Wohhoo...*whistles*😆
I loved the update so much! Aah...that bloody Jay, I am so glad he was beaten up! All revenges taken...about the past and present!😡
How he tried to insult Draupadi! My blood was really boiling! That sick *beeps*🤢 I hope Panchali gets back at him and shows him his position once she gets back her memory! Also, I loved how Angry Arjuna took over, maybe he felt the chords of the past! Please get them back their memory! I want Arjuna to realize what he did at the Dhyut sabha by keeping silent! Sorry thodi senti ho gaya thi!
The hero entry of Parth!👏*more whistles*
These guys never leave a chance to do comedy na!😛
Such an action packed update! It was amazing!😳
So Jay remembers the past, eh? When will ArDi remember it? I am waiting for their romance to start!
I really want to see how you write romance Sam! Jaldii likho!😉
Oh ho! All these goons! Urggh!😡 Beat them up Parth! *even more whistles*
Update karoo now!
BTW I don't know why I acted like a Salman Khan fan while writing this comment! But anyhow, *whistles yet again*👏
Omggg! Ang lagaa de, is it? Ya only joganiyaan? You have made me even more mad for the next update now! Crazily waiting!😉
Sincerely,
Gyaani baba!😳

Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sam update was nice
longwala update finally like my Sautanjee is backkk😃
Jay remembers his past😲 kaise?? Nd Devarjee thinking he is nonsensing nd waiting for action like aaa Bhais mei tujhe marta hu😆 bt mera Putra like mera baccha Abhimanyu😭 I want to kill that crap Jai😡
BTW me first to unres without resinggg😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for PM.
It was Very Interesting and Amazing part.😊
Finally,Arjun saved Draupadi,it was so nice.😊
The way Arjun described that how he saved her was so nicely explained.😊
I Just hate😡 That Jai hoew can he talk like that on Draupati.😡
Arjun and Draupati part was so nice.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

PriyaCherry.

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