Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #4 OS 7 (32~60) Link to #5:Pg 1

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

A kiss? Wow! Must have been the only way to shut her up. You stop there? Write more pleajjj!

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Superb updates loved them all.

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Superb update. ...thanks for the PM

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Amazing updates.. Khushi is in a process of falling irrecoverably in love with him.. The way he has been affecting her.. And 😳😳😳, he kissed her... Lets see what name she gives him now..😉

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nihasan

@nihasan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Arnav kissed khushi

N only khushi could run out like that

Shyam is so much into helping his saale saab

Cnt soon

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#506

"Khushi, tum theek ho?" He asked.

Aiyee hayee!!! Khushi chodiye, ab to hum bhi theek nahin hain!!!

Naughty girl, Smitaaa!! You got me all hot and bothered now and only tons more of Arshi will help!!

Edited by tvbug2011 - 10 years ago

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sarozz

@sarozz

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Woohoo way to go arnav..I can't believe he actually kissed her...so wanna see her reaction...

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#508

oh...poor khushi she is running to escape from him...

shyam is a really sweet jeeju here...

oh..ho..its not fait to kiss her without her permission...

okay...now what will happen..

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Rujul13

@Rujul13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#509

So finally Arnav proved his word right about Khushi...

If you really love someone, but you know you have wronged her. Than you have to make everything correct by proving yourself not forcing himsrlf on her or seducing her...

Khushi thinks that he proposed because he is guilty than instead of Arnav kissing her seducing her he should have made her see her love by helping her in tough situations, trusting her, helping her in realising her feelings rather than seducing her. It really looks like that what he thought of khushi, he believes that. If it was any other situation it would be OK acceptable but here after accusing as cheap woman when you all this things than it does not look right...I didnot expect Arnav doing this...sorry but I didnot like it...it looks like if khushi is happy woth this and she has no self respect...

Sorry this is first chapter in your all the stories I did not like...