Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS #4 OS 7 (32~60) Link to #5:Pg 1

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Awesome update
Loved it Haha Khushi names for Arnav Wonder what will be his plan

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#312

awesome updates i love khushi's this avatar, hope she kicks gunda's ass 😳 and i hope he doesn't get to win her over too easily 😈 and i hope buaji is ready with her belan when she next meets him 😆 have a nice holiday, waiting for the inevitable fireworks and wondering how gunda's going to get himself out of this sweet mess

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Arshipriya16

@Arshipriya16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

Hello my lovely dis. Sorry for not commenting for all these days. I m a bit busy in my asali duniya n also I m having a problem in log in. But I have read some parts of these story n they were wonderful. Smita di I'll surely wright one poem for this chapter whenever I'll get the time. Till then u can accept my this comment.

Har roj karte hai yaad iss sapno ki duniya ko,

Ana to bohot chahate hai,

Par kya kare iss jalim asali duniya ko,

Jo hume ane hi nahi deti hai.

Karte hai miss aap dono di ko,

par kya kare mil hi nahi sakte hai.

Miss u two so much.

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#314

i am loving this...i am eager to know how arnav is going to win her heart..like truly win...

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paaskhanna

@paaskhanna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Cannot get tired of saying this ... Love khusi's creativity in naming Arnav
Loving all the updates
Enjoy your break will wait for next update

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Megha. â¤

@-Megha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Arnav bitwaa ki toh nikal padi !! ;) :D
His khushi herself has come to his door !! :D
Nw, its upto him hw he patonifies her ! ;) ^_^

Waitingg to reaaad moreee ..