a swaron FF Beyond Commitment epilogue updated *6/8/15*

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

loved the first part
good start
waiting tio read more
thnx for the pm...
itz really a good write
up...do conitnue...

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Dee-jay

@Dee-jay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Loved this chapter!
Loved the teasing in the end.

Hope Swayam realise his love for Sharon soon

Update soonsih :)

Thanks for the pm

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Khizar Ali

@Khizar_SWARON

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Great start and for starters your writing skills and concept is great

Your first chapter consisted of decisions decisions and decisions

Well the caf talk of SwaRon was great where Swayam wanted Sharon's point before giving his answer to see Sharon's answer if she agrees it's a yes from him to and no then no from him too, He respects her decision, cares for her and knows her and he thinks this is friendship but Sharon realized her feelings before and is not sure for Swayam but Sharon's dadi is sure that Swayam loves her but haven't realized it well that's TRUE! that dumb guy must realize quickly -_-

Great chapter and update soon

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Ani this is really nice dear...

swaron are soo cute nd their cute nok jhok...
I loved it..

sharon-dadi convo is good..
finally sharon agreed..
update soon
thanks 4 d pm

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anubhutijain

@anubhutijain

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Nice concept

Shar n dadiz convo was reallypleasing

D end was amazing

Do update soon n pm 😊

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Hey ani
Nice update
The best friend bond which they share is too cute and adorable
Soon they will be marrying
So waiting for the swaron couple
Thanks for the pm
Do update soon

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

aswom update loved it..

do update soon...

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Wonderful start...
So swaRon ready to getting married...
Swayam loves her but is still not aware of his feelings...
Waiting to see how the story unfolds in future updates...
Loved the part...
P.S. thanx for thhe PM dear...& update soon..

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: shiningshannu
hey ani🤗
i liked the first part
swaron are best frndz
their bond is shown very well
swarons parents want them to be married dats awesome
sharon realised her feelings for swayam i hope swayam too realise it soon
loved dadi she z too lovely i feel
she made sharon realise she shud listen to her heart
hope sharon does so
all in all a very lovely update
waiting for their decision
update soon dear

p.s. as promised a long comment

love
shini

shini di love you for this wonderful comment...

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
dear this was two beautiful
I just loved it
do continue n pm m :)
n Thanx to shini we get this beautiful update :)

thanks a lot dear..will surely pm...😃