Koi anjana apna sa THREAD 2,PART 48 UPDATED,''THREAD 3 IS UP'' - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

Hey, loved it yaar!
Gosh, the chocolate eating way was perfectly romantic! And the almost kiss was awesome. The teddy and everything was lovely yaar!
Gosh, her dad is such a bas***d! How can he term his own daughter as a bad omen! These things are really happening now in the real world! Just hope such people are taught a lesson!
I love anju's character! She's a sweetheart!
Loved the chapter.
Continue soon, thanks for pm'ing.

Keep writing,
Love,
Karishma. :* <3

thank u soo mmuch dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pritha072angel

Resss

Unresss finaallly khushh ho jaa pari mausiii hehehe
Had hai yaar moine socha moi finally sudhar gayi but I guess nhi some things never change u see😆
Coming to update thank god there was no advait n that bimbo yeah nims ghosh they iiritate me to core accha khaase sandhir ki love life mein haddi banne aagaye villain kahi k
Gaaawewwwd rd so naughty maen
Chocolate scene awwwieee luvd It
That teddy chooo cute chal ab mujhe gift kar do din baad mera half birthday aa raha h
Omg omg omg yaha to nims n advait se bhi bade villia sanyu k dad nikle yaar ufff
He want sanyu to marry that at this age gawwwd maen he is gettin on ma nerves now like really
Bhagwaaan ji jab aap mind ka distribution kar rahe the to mr aggarwaal ko kya uss bewakoof pandit or whatever uske paas bhej diya tha
Omg ab sandhir ka kya hoga
Pariii agar jldi update nhi kiya tooo tujhe mr aggarwaal k paas lecture sunne k liye parcel kar dungii
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH

dhany ho app
waise yeh half birthday kya hota hai
pls yaar sab kuch seh loongi but mr aggarwal ka lecture nahi.pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanx dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Glitz-

Sooo cute update
chocolate
ahem.ahem
Rd is naughty
n.teddy gft
cute

thanx a lot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uditaudi

its superb darloo but plz update #TOC plz plzplzzz
m eagerly waiting for that it doesnot mean that i dont like this one
it just the fact that i m in love with #TOC
but its really blissful to read ur creations
love u loads 😳
well done
keep it up👏

thanx a lot dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pari1995

dhany ho app
waise yeh half birthday kya hota hai
pls yaar sab kuch seh loongi but mr aggarwal ka lecture nahi.pls

U wont understand its very deeep
To jldi update kar warna lecture seh
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: swetasrivastwa

this ff was lovely

just loved
😊

nxt part asap

thanx yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arghhh😡
update k bina bhaag gayi ab dekh tera admn kaise karwaati hu mr aggarwaal k lecture classes me
Unhi k paas parcel kar dungi tujhe
Edited by pritha072angel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pritha072angel

Arghhh😡

update k bina bhaag gayi ab dekh tera admn kaise karwaati hu mr aggarwaal k lecture classes me
Unhi k paas parcel kar dungi tujhe

sorry yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part-37

Abhinav-woh meri beti nahi hai,suna tumne

Thats when someone says

V-apke kehne se kya hota hai

Anju-ankit beta,tu kab aaya

Ankit-tab aaya jab dad meri behen ka sapna todne ki baat kar rahe hai

Abhinav-ladkiyon ka koi sapna nahi hota,unka kaam sirf shaadi karke ghar

me beithna hai

Ankit-app kis zamane mein jee rahe hai dad,aj kal to ladkiyan ladko se bhi

Aage hai

Abhinav-tum chup karo har baat mein apni behen ki rat lagate rehte ho

Ankit-bas dad,app yeh mat boohliye ki chahe app usse apni beti na mano lekin

Mein usse apni behen manta hoon aur uske liye,uski khushi ke liye mein

Kisis se bhi lad sakta hoon,i don't care ki agar mujhe apse ladna pade

Anju-ankit,tum aise kaise...

Ankit[interrupting]-maa meine bohot sun liya,har baar papa akar rukhte hai sanyu ki

Khushiyan cheenne par jabki uski to koi galti bhi nahi hai,usne

Kaha tha app logon se ki usse iss duniyan mein lao,phir uski

Galati kaise ho sakti hai haan,app jo bhi kaho merei liye sanyu ki

Khushiyan hi sabse pehli choice hogi

Saying so he leaves to his room

Abhinav-dekha abb uss ladki ki wajah se mera beta mujhse zuban lada raha hai

Anju[screaming]-woh ladki app ki beti hai,uski behen hai

She also leaves from there to ankit's room and abhinav sits casually on the

Couch as if nothing happened

In ankit's room,he was fuming and was packing his stuff,thats when anju enters

Anju-beta kahi jaa rahe ho

Ankit-maa woh rian ki engagement fix ho gayi hai kangana ke sath

Anju-acchaaa,yeh to badi acchi baat hai,to kab hai engagement

Ankit-next week

Anju-ankit yaha aake betho,mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai[pointing to sofa]

Ankit goes and sits next to anju

Anju[caressing his hair]-beta tujhe nahi lagta tu bohot akela hai,dekh rian ki bhi

Ho rahi hai,tujhe bhi to shadi...

Ankit-pls maa,abhi nahi

Anju-abhi nahi to phir kab ankit,tu kyu shaadi nahi karna chata

Ankit-app janan chati hai ki main shaadi kyu nahi karna chahta,kyuki jo mere dad

Hai,jinhone apni khud ki beti ko pyaar nahi kiya woh kisi aur ki beti ko

Kya pyaar karenge aur mein ek parayi ladki ko ghar lakar uski bhi zindagi

Kharab nahi kar sakta pls maa,aur agar mein kabhi zindagi mein shaadi

Karoonga to apni sayu ka sapna poora hone ke baad uski life settle hone ke baad

Anju-lekin beta

Ankit-nahi aur kuch nahi,this is my last decision,mein apni sayu ko safe

hands mein dekhna chanta hoon

Anju[defeated]-meri sanyu bohot lucky hai jo usse tere jaisa bhai mila,chal mein

Teri packing mein help karti hoon aur sanyu ke liye ladoo bhi

Pack kar deti hoon

Ankit-ji maa

With that they start packing

Here at shekhawat mansion

Sanyu and rd enter the house with sanyu carrying the pilot teddy in her hands

Rian-ahha juliet cute teddy haan

Sanyu-thanx bhai,rd ne diya

Rian-haan woh to obvious hai

Hearing that sanyu blushes and says

Sanyu-bhai mom and dad kaha hai

Rian-woh mom-dad ke kisi purane friend say milne gaye hai

Rd-oh k

Sanyu-bhai mein room mein jakar isse rakh kar aati hoon

Rian-ok

With that sanyu goes to her room and rd and rian sit on the couch in the

Living room

Rian-so kaha se aya teddy,kyu ki jaha tak mujhe pata hai tu credit card to

Use karta nahi aur mujhse aur dad se tune poocha nahi

Rd[smirking]-3 saal ki pocket money,app bhool gaye we used to save

Rian-oh,i almost forgot that,mein bhi apna dekhta hoon

Rd-no use

Rian-kyu?

Rd-woh bhi meine le liya

Rian[jumping on him]-teri toh,mera bank loot liya

Rd-apke bank par to meri pehle se nazar thi

Rian-haan haan,pata hai

Thats when a servent comes there with tea and pakora

Rd-aww mom is a sweet heart,unhone pakora banake rakha tha

Thats when a voice came

V-waise thoda credit mujhe bhi de sakte ho soon to be dewar ji

Rd turns to find kangana wearing an apron and some flour on her cheeks

Hair tied into a loose bun

Rd[looking at rian]-ohho,to meri soon to be bhabi ji ne banaya hai haan

Thats when sanyu comes all fresh and water dripping from her wet hair

Sanyu-hey di,app kab aayi

Kangana-woh mom dad ne kaha ki woh log kal hi aenge to mein yaha aa gayi

Unki permission leke,chalo ab tum sab ye pakode khake batao kaise

Bane hai,u see my first attempt

Rd-aahaan,tab to sabse pehle bro khaenge

Kangana blushes and rian looks here and there

Sanyu-offo bhai jaldi khao,mujhe bohot bhook lag rahi hai

Rian-haan haan juliet abhi khata hoon

With that he takes a pakoda and takes a bite,kangana was staring at rian observing

His face expression,weather he liked it or not,same was with rd and sanyu

Rian-its awesome

As soon as these words escapes his mouth kangana jumps onto his lap

And our romeo and juliet smile looking at them here rian was smiling

At her cute attics

Kangana-sacchi

Rian-haan baba,bohot accha hai

Kangana-love u lady killer

Rian-love u too chuza

Thats when sandhir clear their throat and riangana come back to their senses

Rd[teasing]-amm sanyu tumhe nahi lagta bro ne pehle se hi poori planning kar rakhi thi

Sanyu[equally teasing]-haan rd,mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai

Rian-haan haan sahi hai,jaise mere romeo juliet ka pyaar

Thn everyone burst out laughing and had the pakodas and tea,suddenly

Rd's phone starts ringing and it was flashing gf,rd picks up the call

Rd-hey girlfriend,whats up

Vrishi-hero,problem come home fast...


A/N-heya guys i wanted to tell u all that now i will be able to upadate all my ffs only after 11th coz my model exams r onn,i really don't know if i will be able to resist myself from writing but still i will try to concentrate on my studies and for that i need ur support,i hope u guys will understand

one more thing guys i will be able to read all ur pms after that,pls forgive me for being late


waise ,kaisa laga,do tell me and hit the like button too


loads of love

pari😊

Edited by pari1995 - 10 years ago

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