Part 4-13/1/15 KRIYAMSHAREY SS:'Kuch bhi hojaye, Am always there

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karthika

@DD_Tannufan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

love u sweety and love ur writing ...🤗

i have never seen kriyam penned down so beautiully ..

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Awesome concept...

damn interesting...

loved it...

continue soon...

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Awesome starting
Sweetipe love that so much
Kriya fight for her dance but swayam didn't allow
Best friend as best brother and sister
Kriyam bonding amazing loved it
Swayam dance his emmotion and the fight again world nycly described
Loved it
Who is the person he is rey or else update next part soon

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Amazing!The concept is quite exciting :)Swayam's dance was potrayed was beautifully. . .And KriYam's connection. . .their love and care for each other too!Someone wants to see Swayam in pain ad he will use Kriya for his mission. . .Too much suspense 😊

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: -RuthShalini-
diya this is fabulous...
amaxing concept...
very well described ...specially dance...
m hell excited...update soon
p.s copy paste from akankshaArsha is done🤣🤣
Res👏
Loved it!👏
Remind me to unres on 28th
nd this copypaste Anushka8722
but my date is different🤣

aae copycat

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

nice concept diyu
kriyam bond revisited
<3d the way u described their bond
do continue
wud <3 to know more abt swayam and his dance ka relation
swayam-the protective brother was a treat to read
plz pm or scrap me when u update the next part
love you chotu
from ur di🤗

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nature-beauty

@nature-beauty

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

nice one diya👏

i want ShaRey SS also if possible

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Anupriya

@anuaskif

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Ok I am sorry for being late... got a little busy with work...

Wowww Kiddo... This one's a very promising plot... I am already too eager for the next update...

Swayam's emotions were so beautifully expressed, my heart went out for him 👍🏼

Update soon 👏

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arsha_simran

@arsha_simran

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

This is something really different!!!
Nice going!!!
The way it all started... Their fight...
Gosh kriyam and fight noo...
And those words.. Soo pricking!!!
And the dance!!! Perfect!!! All those moves emotions!!!! Woowww!!!
Sooo could feel it!!!
And finally they became one!!! Kriyam!!! ^_^
And upon that the end... Baap re.. Who is that person.. Arrgghhh

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

this is amazing and fabulous of kriyam ... there might be some reason
behind swayan or to protect her from danger... i wonder who is this person
in the end... do continue soon

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