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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: Alicia2012
Wow great story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story and i really like your characters so much and you are an amazing writer. Thanks for the pm. Happy new year to you for 2016

Thank you dear! You really cheered me up!

Happy New Year to you too!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: anjs
hey
m sorry, u had to post that note cause of me...also, sorry for not replying to ur pm.

I didnt mean to offend you...It was how the chapter spoke to me...yes, i had read ur note earlier, and was relieved that Prem wont become the third angle...but honestly this is what the chapter told me, that Khushi is leaning more n more towards Prem...

also if u see in today's update, Khushi has already colored herself in Prem's colors n is back answering Arnav...while I do understand where she is coming from and also her need to stand up for herself...but in all this she is forgetting one important detail and that is Arnav is teaching her useful things, that too free of cost...these finishing school courses charge a bomb n middle class people can never afford it...here due to whatever reasons, but atleast Arnav is training her n also allowed her to stay in his house...so her back answering, didnt go down well with me...In my opinion, she was acting in a rude n un-grateful manner...and I wud connect this behavior to Prem n hence hate prem more...

please, mentioning it again, that this comment is not against u, ur story or ur writing...this is what the chapter tells me, and each chapter tells every individual different thing as per that individual's personality...so it doesnt mean ur writing is wrong...maybe u meant us to feel it this way...maybe not, but that is how I read it...

also my speaking of quitting, was just being overtly sensitive n emotional...rest assured I wudnt leave ur story like that...and also will give loads of detailed comments about what ur each chapter tells me...hope that is ok with u

First of all, you did not offend me! Sorry if my note came out harsh but that was not my intention. I tried to put it up in the politest manner but it came out totally different. I was, frankly speaking, freaked out. I was scared of the fact, there might be readers who might assume the same thing and I did not want to loose them for something that is not even going to happen! So dont worry about offending me! It takes a lot for me to get offended! I love my readers and was scared that I will loose others too so I posted that note!

About Khushi leaning towards Prem that is my intention. But she is already falling for Arnav, which we already established with Uff Mere Dil Mein Song Performance. So when you are already falling in love with one person, how can you fall for another?

And yes, Khushi is getting colored in Prem's colors but dont you see that what Prem is saying is also what Naaniji, Anjali and Aakash are saying. That Arnav is treating Khushi wrongly. So if Khushi is getting colored in Prem's colors then she is getting colored in Naani, Anjali and Aakash's colors too. Do you remember how disgusted Naani was when she came to know that Arnav treated her like that, because she is waitress. So are you going hate Naani too from now on? This line might sound like I am angry, but I am not. I am genuinely curious if you going to hate Naani too? And do you remember Anjali getting angry at her Chote few chapters back for making Khushi work so much? She believes that Arnav treats Khushi wrongly too. So are you going to hate her too? And Anjali and Aakash are actually laughing when Khushi scolds Arnav back, so are they wrong there? Do you hate them too?

I understand if my professor scolds me for my mistakes. But if he scolds me for something I did in personal life then of course I am going to get angry. When Arnav scolds Khushi for her mistakes she listens to it. The only time she did not listen is when she thought she was right in defending Naani. Poor thing, did not understand what got Arnav angry. But if someone comes and scolds you for making friends, are you going to sit and listen? And if you have a guy who treats you so well, and there is a guy who treats you like dirt, who are you going to choose? I am still pro Arshi here! Also dont forget that if she fell for Prem, he would give her same trainings too and that also without the dirt like treatment! So tell me, why is she sticking around listening to Arnav's words? Because she is still grateful that he took the initiative!

And dont think for a single second Arnav is doing this training thing because he is selfless. He is training her because of the bet. Remember? Chapter 3 when they first met! And even if he was being selfless, no one has right to treat another person like a dirt just because they are middle class. Izzat naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai! In IPKKND too, Khushi listened to Arnav's words because she wanted the job. Before that, remember the way she fought back? Khushi never allowed Arnav to treat her so badly just because she was from middle class from start. She fought back till she needed the job and that is when she started bearing every word of his.

In the start of this story, Khushi had resigned herself to the fact that she will be treated like this because she cannot speak english and is not posh enough. She resigned to it, till Anjali and Aakash treated her differently, till Naaniji treated her differently. But she did not notice it much because what she has learned in the last five years in Dilli is ingrained in her brain. But then here comes a guy richer than Arnav treating her normal and she starts thinking. Are they all right? Do I deserve to be treated better?

Lastly I get it that it is your individual view and nothing against my writing. If you still dont enjoy the story, its ok with me. While there is you saying you dont like the Prem twist and Khushi's behavior, there are others saying that they love my characters very much. In the end of the day, everyone has their own opinion. I hated Bajirao Mastani but there are crores of people who love it. Everyone has their own thinking. So Dont worry, I wont take offense. And go ahead, tell me what you feel about my stories. Atleast someone will criticise my work. I love to criticise movies and all, and I would love reading some criticism here too. It is my dream to have someone criticise me. No one does it here yaar! Oh and thanks for being the second person to criticise me. Last time someone did, it was in 2014 I think. So please go ahead and tell me what you think. I am eager to know your thoughts. And go ahead, and criticise me if you want. I eagerly wait for your comments.

Also sorry if I offended you with my reply, that was not my intention. I am just telling you what I think of my story!

Edited by Kalpana_KaCy - 9 years ago

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sonali

@Sonalikarhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#543

awesome update..khushi and prem's friendship is a new beginning for khushi...khushi comes from conservative family but instead of getting married to some random boy...she wants complete her dreams...and for that she is doing her best...but she should soon realise her love for arnav..prem is a nice guy...but arnav is best...bichara arnav...so confused...arnav is also not good thing by scolding her...but we cant completely blame him afterall he is in love with her...hope both realised it soon..loved the update.

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zebali

@zebali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#544

Wonderful dear.
Superb written. Tf pm.

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#545

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#546

14...

hahahaha... arnav deeply affected by khushi...

she did well in first half...

then nani dig little on arnav...

and the romantic dance...

prem meet khushi... he find a genuine

or khushi what you just did...blown her cover with anger

prem and khushi getting bloom...

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: kshubhangi
Amazing. Poor Khushi. I can understand her problem. In social circles everything is fake. That's why I avoid parties.

almost all of it...

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: sanamsky
I just love this story amazing update I love prem character too I love to see jealous Arnav can't wait for next update love it

😆 😆

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: anjs
yeah, PRem better not be the kabab me haddi and the love triangle please no...him getting close to khushi will defo make arnav jealous.
update was fab, dont understand why they are all after her for speaking only in english, cause even hindi can be spoken in a civilized n graceful manner.

arnav test begin...😆

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#550

15...

interesting... arnav boiling in jealosy

khushi worried about her confidence...

so she have to talk back... and fight with arnav...

akash guess the whole thing...

now.. khushi is getting bold...

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